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I think @chris191070 got it right it seemed like some kind of cult I was almost expecting somebody to offer everybody kool-aid.There was line about Marcus using his father's gift I'm guessing that may relate to Tasha,Casper and James somehow. The words customers and regulars gives a clue what kind of "business" this is .The first room Tasha came across sounded like a classroom but it maybe more like programming or brainwashing.I think these kids were street kids or kidnapped
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I knew the Chevy had sentimental value for Tony but it must be some kind of classic if it got a lot of attention when he drove it to the school.
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Will Charlie find out about the boys before he leaves?He might already know Dad taking the rooster reminded me about what was said last chapter. I didn't know roosters can't co-exist with each other. I guess that's why it's so easy to stage those illegal fights
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Welcome back hope you're feeling better. So you said in the future Tristan will be what in high school then?Or if he is still a kid and he's doing the narration since it's his thoughts instead of him speaking will it still say " brudder" ? The three idiots are still alive in Siberia I could still see a high powered bad guy getting them out of there to cause more misery.Then a relative of one of the decoys will show up and want revenge and🤔...ah I'll just wait for you to write it.Looking forward to it
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Tony better not ever ask me to help with the casing because half the salami product will be gone before its done.So what it's not ready.
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Very good suspense when Jake was afraid of finding Spencer in the freezer only to find out it was actually staff workers.That tells me Spencer is going to be OK.But how was he able to get away when he should have been asleep?If Spencer was turning into a zombie would he be immune to that shot Dr.Vega gave?Since the door is locked from the outside the only person that could come and take Spencer would be Officer Logan unless I'm missing something
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It's not unusual for for some authors to have long stretches of no new chapters with their stories most of them usually get back to it but some don't I hope that's not the case here.
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I guess there's still a lot to be revealed all three of them had bad things happen to them before they discovered their powers. That makes me think there is another entity or person who is supplying that power to them if I'm wrong it will be interesting to find out. Where and how is Tasha living.There's a reason why Peter's gun was mentioned so a lot of stuff still to find out I'm loving this
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I really see no reason for Brad and Tom to be in a fraternity unless it's a real serious one with a purpose.How would they react if there were a gay fraternity?It would still be a bad idea IMO. Does Tony know what to do to make the different types of salami like cotto or genoa?If he makes Italian dry salami I'm there
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I was slightly confused in a previous chapter if I remember right you said Brad and Tom called Tony's parents Mom and Dad .I should have known they were referring to their parents because why would Tony's parents have peeps.Brad and Tony might be unaware but don't be surprised if Charlie already knows about them and just hasn't said anything.However the Dad that was ranting could be a problem
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Well while I was reading this I was wondering how James and Casper would find out about each other's strange ability but Tasha catching James in the act will help in that.When Casper passed that building and got a bad feeling I thought it might be the scumbag that attacked James and now that James met Tasha all three would find out about this when they meet.But part of me also thinks it's too early in the story for that we'll see very interesting. I preface this by saying I'm not a parent thank God I would try my best but I would probably fall short of being a good parent.Having said that if I were Sarah I would have insisted on picking up James after the movie considering what happened.But I get it if she did that then how does James and Tasha meet LOL.
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It may have took Mom awhile to understand what Tony was saying about the guys but she understood they were good for the place. Did Charlie forget to come about the car?🤔
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Ditto Hey it happens
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A cow might be a good idea if it already had calves and is being milked everyday.Not being a farm boy I don't know the cost to maintain it.I guess his student will meet his parents when they come to dinner
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A couple of unexpected things.Did not even see James being in mid air over his bed unless it was all in his imagination.If it's not whoa what up with that?And Peter with the gun makes me curious what his background entails Since it seems like there is not a bullying problem for James at school so then school would be a great place for James to go especially with Casper befriending him.Unless of course it was a teacher who raped James but nobody thinks that. I like the sarcastic exchange between James and Casper especially the line about a rich guy with too much time on his hands😄
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Chapter 9 - The Aftermath
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 9 - The Aftermath
I was good with the story stoping but this is good also.Most of this is what I figured it would be still friends with Sarah and friends with James.I wonder what Torry did this time.I like how Dexter is trying to make it right. Kudos to Kevin for wanting to be open but if there's gossip just because Kevin,James and Sarah are sitting at the same table then imagine how this news would be viewed.I would limit it to people they can trust but Dave already knows so it may be too late. -
Everything's coming together nicely. One thought I would have if I were Tony is why is everyone interested in his office furniture? I would check into that.
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I just had to respond when I noticed that you had no reactions yet so I guess this was the first story you read after you joined GA .Well you picked a great story to comment on.There may may be a downside IMO you have already read the best story on GA so everything else you read won't be as good LOL.But there are a lot of great stories on GA feel free to e-mail me I could give some recommendations of authors who write stories similar to Parker's great story.
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Found out a lot of stuff this chapter.James is half Japanese I don't remember his appearance being described earlier.so if he has a Amerasian look to him more often then not that's a hot look. From what I can tell Casper can sense emotions but not details of where the emotions come from like he doesn't hear thoughts so Casper will know somethings wrong with James but he doesn't know why. We don't know who James attacker is but the line in the story that said adults makes him nervous would imply an adult was responsible for what happened.Since James was so anxious to get back to school I'm guessing it wasn't a teacher.Casper might be the best person James can be friends with right now with Casper's ability to emphasize
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It sounds like a great deal for the guys to move in the apartment.As long as the chores don't interfere with school.With Tony being their professor that should not be a problem.I think it's a no brainer
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Well we now know the reason why it became dangerous at Zeke's house.Wyatt wasn't a pissed off ex it seems he was working with the bad guys and was pretending with Zeke only how did the bad guys know about Zeke?Keeping Tyler at the house wasn't the reason why it happened because Wyatt was already in the picture before then. I could understand why Tyler isn't sure who the bad guys are the way G was described he could easily pass for somebody ominous.These guys must be elite.
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Now did Brad and Tony apply for college first and then saw Tony's ad or did they see the ad first THEN took his class pretty clever if they did. I may be showing ignorance here or I misunderstood. When Brad and Tom mentioned their friend Charlie fixed a 1850 tractor I didn't know they had tractors then what kind of technology was it? Or did you mean 1950?
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4 horses?It sounds like he's going to have to hire some help.Maybe a couple of his students?
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Interesting way for the two to find out more about each other.As I hear Rick tell Gus more about his past I can't help but think the Willy Kohler incident will rear it's ugly head pretty soon. I could see the incident come in to play if it becomes apparent that Rita's project is a scam.Then Gus would find out about it but I think it's clear he would have a lot of compassion. You better tell us who won the game next chapter.You could have had Lyin Fraud er..Ryan Braun batting for the Brewers then I would already know the Yankees won
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AHHH!! You're killing me I want so bad for the shit to hit the fan for Zack's bastard dad.Man all that stuff Zack was thinking of like what if they don't believe him?Although we haven't got to the part we are waiting for yet I think Brody is the perfect guy to for him to see before he does this
