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I was about to thank you for another great story but I noticed it still said "In Process" so is there more?

Based on the conversation between Relshek and Adam I can see that day that after they get what they need from Adam they will decide Sage doesn't serve any purpose anymore and then decide to terminate him of course that would be totally unacceptable to Adam .Adam is going to want to return to earth WITH Sage and I think the Puritans will have a problem with this. Interesting that the Puritan didn't terminate Fred did they disregard him like everyone else did?If Brandon somehow manages to find out what happened to Adam what can he do about it? We are talking wormholes and different solar systems etc. this is going to take some really creative writing can't wait. I challenge Brandon's mom to find a passage in the bible that can be interpreted as to call for kicking your son out of your house and on to the street

Right on Matt for what you said to Hayden's parents. I was thinking the same thing @drsawzall mentioned that any money awarded SHOULD go to Hayden in trust I wonder if that would be a federal law or do they vary from state to state.The scumbag lawyer would not be representing the so-called parents and the parents would not bring a civil suit unless they thought the parents would get their grubby hands on the money. They might still need Matt to make the case stick so depending on what the legalities are If I'm Matt I don't cooperate unless it is put in writing that at least 75% of the money goes to Hayden. Too soon to tell but Trent invited Matt to go Morning Center with them he must have noticed the big brother/younger brother dynamic Matt and Hayden has I'm guessing Trent may want to keep Matt close by so perhaps he'll get him a job there maybe bussing tables in the eating area or something like that. It would be great timing because Matt wants to be there for Hayden and this could be a way.Trent's around the same age as Matt hmm🤔 I know too soon to be thinking about that LOL

So what would Jack's plan be?The only thing I can think of is Jack telling Joey his part in it without revealing Roman's part in it sort of a mostly true with an omission. Not sure that would work I hope instead that it's a good plan that I'm not smart enough to think of which isn't too high of a bar LOL

They are so advanced in their medical tech but yet they have to go earth and basically kidnap a 15 year old boy to solve their pandemic go figure

Maybe it's suppose to be obvious but my guess is the minor narrating is Neil.Man his family seems to be in all kinds of stuff.

I binged read this over the weekend starting on Friday and now I'm all caught up loving the story and looking forward to more. I bet it will make Welker's day to arrive at JFH on Monday

Joey reacted surprised by the envelope by the NHS which tells me he didn't contact them on his own.I don't know how it works in the UK but could someone else other then Joey contact the NHS about himself? I hope this horrible incident finally convinces Dean to reach to somebody out it is a different dynamic now that his POS uncle is at his house again

Oh man this reminds me so much of the time I was with my mom in the hospital during her last year.The hospital we were in was good hospital but not nearly as nice as you described this one.I can vouch for hospitals using animals in my mom's nursing home they used dogs and my mom's biggest smile came when the dog visited

Since Jon's family is here might as well get married any reason not to?

I didn't see that coming but I guess I should have.Roman and Jack say lets forget about it, it can't go any farther but we know that every time we see this on a TV show, movie, or in a GA story it never happens like that Joey is going to find out.Part of me wants to say since Olly was at first interested in Joey why don't they just have a foursome. I know I don't mean that. Is that part of the reason why Roman hasn't done anything with Olly yet?

I guess I already commented on this because my comment is still there in chapter 8 .Honestly I didn't notice anything off I wonder what that says about me LOL

Good to know I remember that now .I still don't get why they think Sage is a problem they can still find a mate for Adam it sounds like they are like Vulcans unemotional do they expect Adam to stay with this mate?

Sounds like a good first step.Joey actually spoke to us when said "right readers" LOL Regardless of being on probation Olly SHOULD get that 800 pound commission .He made some interesting points about Joey being abusive James is back at Dean's house? Not good. I think the truth must come out there.

So this one is from Alex POV.I'm not sure how to read Chris's reaction The opening scene where it's just before performing a gig makes me wonder did something happen with Alex and Owen

I love that Roger is with Jon. One thing different about Roger as compared to your previous characters is the others characters interacted with the boys whether as a teacher or employer etc.Here he only says the boys that implies he lets Jon do all the dealings with them.Jon having to go back home may be a opportunity to fill the void with the boys will feel while Jon is away

I would lose all respect for the Puritans if they killed Sage under these circumstances. The reasoning for "terminating" the 67 people isn't valid first off if someone lets the authorities know of their existence the authorities would cover it up and deny it and if it did leak out the majority of people will react yeah right and disregard it. Interesting to find out Adam has a brother.The mere fact the family is in the story tells me Adam is going to end up back on Earth.Although the parents seem to be a lost cause

I found Relshek concern about Sage's influence on Adam disturbing.He said something about finding a mate for Adam are they going to do this the old fashioned way? Surely that isn't necessary if we can do it artificially on Earth then they could do it also being more advanced than Earth. The only reason is they would be concerned about Sage is the gay issue.That would be disappointing

I'm guessing there will be a little more resistance from Joey about getting help but with Roman's insistence and Jack staying away until he does I think Joey eventually will I just don't know how many chapters it's going to take. I'm curious why Joey called Toby is Dean attending college out of town? Or did something happen there also?

So JJ can make these brilliant designs for Apllazon but he can't drive a car worth s---. I'm sure JJ is going to take note about what happened to Henry and Darren the midwest still has a lot back assward people.

Joey's been jumping to conclusions for as long as we been reading the stories it finally bit him in the A__. And the alcohol certainly added fuel to the fire. if this had been an going on consistently over the last two years then maybe one thing to consider is getting counseling both by himself and with Jack . I don't see this as insurmountable but Jack taking his clothes with him is a bad sign.Does Jack think Joey is acting too much like Jack's father maybe with the alcohol? One small ironic point Roman doesn't let Orca move in because it's the last thing he can control this after calling Joey a control freak just saying

My only reaction is WOW!! But we know it happens a lot so now on the read the details in the first chapter

I missed the notification I wonder if others did also. So how long did you follow Ben and Josh around until you had enough for a new chapter

How about a small gym and sauna to go with the pool? Look at me I'm acting like I'm his business partner LOL

I was sort of kidding when Orca and Roman first met when I said Roman wasn't all that much older then Orca but it turned out I was right I better screen save this shot to remind myself sometimes I do guess right.Roman and Orca sounds like an interesting couple they would be a good story in their own right. Thank you awesome story looking forward for the next one