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I think it will take a while for Corbin to figure out that he is more attracted to boys than girls. He is not very self-aware. He does not seem to possess any gaydar at all. I can't figure if Corbin's dad had some bad experience that he didn't handle well causing his hatred and anger, or whether he's just insane. Who goes from good, loving dad to hating your 13 year old kid because he likes art? That's just crazy.
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It's too bad a other shifter got hurt, but they will catch him more quickly if he fights rather than runs. He won't win a fight against the Alpha or Shea, let alone a fight against a team of people.
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So humans discovered the four-arms? Did they already know but didn't make it common knowledge? I somehow doubt that his parents cared enough to go to the trouble. Does Essell have a tracker inside him? Why wasn't it detected? What's up with the scrolls? Soooo many questions that have to wait a whole week or more!
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I understand that a different species, especially one Vulcan-like emotionally, would have issues relating to humans, but the puritans are screwing this up big-time. Adam is not getting what he needs to settle in mentally. For someone as important to their survival, you would think they would put in more effort.
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Chapter 4 The Lord Ain't No Fool
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 4 The Lord Ain't No Fool
The best part of my day off! I love Coy's unbridled personality. He decides he's going to do something and does it. I hope it doesn't backfire on him. I can't wait to be the fly on the wall when the two old friends? lovers? rivals? meet up by "accident"!- 60 comments
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I'm so angry at Dean's uncle. I hope that he tells Joey, who will either go to the cops or to his parents. It doesn't look like he has any intention of telling his parents himself.
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All our comments are now off one chapter, back to chapter 5 or 6. Hopefully this will get fixed for new readers, or they will be confused, also might be some spoilers. Apart from all this confusion, I'm really enjoying the direction the story is going. The Puritans are an odd mixture of utopian society and stepford wives (or husbands). It's interesting that we are hearing about the people left on earth, I guess this means we are not done with them yet?
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Paranoia and the Disastrous Party
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Paranoia and the Disastrous Party
I'm finding it difficult to feel sympathy for Joey. His insecurities and lack of trust are destroying his relationships with Jack, as well as with Olly and Roman. Jack had put up with it longer than I would have. He deserves better. If Joey doesn't bother to put in some effort to try and get himself some help, I hope Jack moves on and finds someone better for him. -
We know that Herebeth has many successful years of fighting thread ahead of him, but neither D'gar or Herebeth knows that. Must be tough to be sidelined for so long when the rest of your wing is active.
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Epilogue - For All Our Saturdays
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Epilogue - For All Our Saturdays
Perfect candidate for a sequel!- 18 comments
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At least Joey will finally make more than 85 a week! I hope Olly doesn't cause problems with Joey and Jack. I feel bad for Roman, I've never had kidney stones, but a relative has and he was in agony.
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Adam is being lied to and his only "ally" is a user and rapist. He is trapped on the aliens' ship in the middle of space. Freaking out will do no good, I hope he can keep calm better than I could.
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Adam is a better person than me. I doubt I would have saved Sage from death, certainly not by possibly endangering my questionable position. He has a lot of crap to make up for before I will feel any sympathy for him.
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I realize that Essell is a biologist, not an historian, but I would have thought he would have studied up a little more while he was on the ship. When he wasn't busy with stuff. Priorities are important for newly mated couples.
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Always Getting it Wrong
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Always Getting it Wrong
If Joey could get out of his head long enough, he might feel more secure and less impulsive. We are all built differently and can't really help our gut reactions. I remember that as a teen everything seemed so much more extreme than now. Sometimes hormones suck. -
Maybe Coy will mention the new colt Willard to Merrick at the mill. You know, just small talk about horses. As an aside, the mention of the ladder back chair brought back a 30+ year old memory of an episode of Little House on the Prairie. It started and ended with a modern family buying a piece of furniture made by Charles, wondering if there was a story behind it. I have a few old, rustic hand-made chairs. I've wondered about the hands that made them. What were their stories? Chairs and tables similar to the ones made by Coy exist today, going from one family to another.
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Ok, lets bring a 110 people in your room and tell you that you are our savior. No pressure. I think that human nuances are going to be difficult for the Puritans to learn. I like the juxtaposition of same sex (and lots of sex) being the norm, and unmasked no sex being the hated minority. I'd like to know more about the effects of the 8 different sub-species mating.
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Totally Wet and Full of Surprises
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Totally Wet and Full of Surprises
Such a happy chapter! Joey is like an 8 year old before Christmas. Joey (and Jack) are so lucky they have Roman. If Shaun had a Roman, I don't think he would be dead. A support system, whether it's a great brother, or in Dean's case, crazy, embarrassing, loving parents, keep you from wallowing in self-indulgent misery. -
So many questions! I feel like Adam. All my questions will be answered in time. I wish I were more patient.
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Great ending to a very satisfying story! I'm going to miss the guys!
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Shaun Hits the Nuclear Button
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Shaun Hits the Nuclear Button
I was afraid that Shaun would hurt himself or others, I guess we should be relieved that he didn't take out anyone else with his knife. I think if his mom had been more like Joey's or Dean's he might still be alive. I guess her bigotry went so deep, she only wanted her son if he was straight. She was so focused on one aspect she didn't like and didn't get him the help he so obviously needed.- 21 comments
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I'm very sad we only have one chapter to go, but I'm so happy that Craig and James are going to get their HEA. My favorite line: He’d looked it up online and had a slightly clearer idea of the rules, which included no murder or unnecessary violence, no carrying the ball in a motorised vehicle and no playing after 10pm. Sounds like fun!
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Confronting the Worst Day of my Life - Part 2
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Confronting the Worst Day of my Life - Part 2
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Confronting the Worst Day of my Life - Part 2
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Confronting the Worst Day of my Life - Part 2
I agree with the above comments. Shaun has had a mental breakdown, more than a typical teenage hormonal outburst. If he doesn't get real psychological help, he is going to hurt himself and/or Joey and Jack. Who would have thought a couple chapters ago that Dean would be the stable one? -
The Puritans were a bit sloppy on the extrication. I don't have much sympathy for Sage or the 3 boys that were killed. I'm hoping Adam can be cured physically and mentally.
