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Great start. I'm already hooked on poor Adam's story, as well as the aliens' story. Although, one has to wonder at the compassion of a species with the ability to cure a disease, but choose not to. I'm sure we'll get more of the backstory that may explain this conundrum.
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Stepping on Troubled Times
CincyKris commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Stepping on Troubled Times
Thank goodness for mom and Roman, they are the stabilizing influence in Joey's life right now. I believe that Shaun is after Joey, not Jack. -
Great work keeping the suspense up, even though we all know how it will turn out eventually!
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Ok, so Shaun is secretly in love with Joey and has possibly been so for years. He made some very immature decisions to try to break up Joey and Jack. Jack had a crush on Joey for at least a couple years, the feelings are now reciprocated, but he has experienced unimaginable trauma and is having periods of memory loss. Joey let his anger get a hold of him and attacked his former best friend, who I imagine is now at the lowest point of his young life. Dean is still dealing with his molestation and not doing well. This is teen soap opera at it's best. I'm loving this story!
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Good question! I hadn't thought about Shaun possibly being in love with Joey. He certainly isn't acting rationally, his lies were so easily found out.
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I believe it was stated earlier that the uncle is now working on a cruise ship. Where they have lots of unattended teens.
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Wow, this wasn't the way I thought Jack would break free of his dad! Jack is going to be devastated by the news his mom is dead. If Joey hadn't called the police, Jack would probably be dead too. On a happier note, I really liked Roman.
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I was so happy to get an update on Gus and Harry and enjoyed the banter from the parents. Hopefully we'll hear in a future update that James, Francine, and Gus have left conservative Redding to live closer to Dan, Laura, and Harry. I don't think I've ever been camping as an adult without a little day drinking!
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I liked this chapter, I think that all the boys grew a little bit. I hope that Dean gets some professional help, he really needs it. I also hope that he tells his parents, both for his own sake and to stop this predator from hurting anyone else.
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Starting to look like he might have to compete with Shaun for Jack's attention!
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On one hand, I'm mad that Eike got away, on the other hand that means more chapters! I was impressed that Cyn walked up to a strange wolf and introduced himself. He's come a long way from Arric scaring the pee out of him! Now Hauser has that distinction. I think they should let the bunnies pass judgement!
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We have some clues starting to coalesce, but this stills feels like we are early into our story (I hope). It's no wonder Michael's eyes seem familiar! I look forward to the Miami surveillance, and especially to the moment where Patrick discovers the familial bond. I kind of hope he finds out before Ford and Michael. I'd love to see what he does with the information. That's assuming that Ford doesn't already know. On a side note, is it any wonder that Patrick is a little unhinged with those bedtime stories!
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Hopefully the worst is over for Jack! Now that his mum is not at home, he has no good excuse to keep taking the abuse. Joey has been struggling with his orientation in a fairly leisurely manner. I think the pace just picked up!
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Chapter 2 Life and Death
CincyKris commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 2 Life and Death
I'm excited to hear the back story of Mitch and Will. Sorry to find out it is probably lung cancer, that was my guess as well. Mitch acted as a matchmaker for Boone and Coy, now it's time to return the favor. Mitch deserves to be happy for the time he has left.- 60 comments
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Poor Jack. Poor Dean. I feel for both of them. They think more of their families than they do of themselves. Joey has become their confessor. He must feel like he's got the weight of the world on his shoulders. Does he protect his friends by betraying their confidences? What happens if the next time is the one that kills them?
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I'm hoping that Greg will convince the bosses to make Craig redundant, Craig will get his going away check, Greg will be made supervisor, and the whole division will go pear-shaped. Tits-up. Total crap-fest. Regardless, I think Craig is getting closer and closer to pulling the plug on his old career and starting his new life in the country. And I still don't like Archie.
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The last line indicates that Dean had a bad experience when he was 14. Up to now, I'm not a fan of him or Maddie. I agree that Jack's dad needs some jail time.
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Perhaps if M'rell had paid more attention to wingsecond training, some of their future animosity could have been avoided.
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Chapter 25: Eerie Employment
CincyKris commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 25: Eerie Employment
Great chapter, we got to check up on a bunch of characters. Looking forward to the mage dance (and the mating dance).- 37 comments
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I'm with some of the above commenters. I think there is a big difference between building the tension and frustrating inaction. I'm about ready to give up as well.
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I don't honestly know whether Puppy and Hunter will end up together. And I love that! A story that actually leaves me guessing! With all the changes and trauma that Puppy has been through, it's easy to forget that Steven has been through trauma as well. He is 17 and hormonal and he is closer to Puppy than he is to anyone else. I hope he sorts his feelings out in a more appropriate way.
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Wow, that was quite a homecoming! I hope Bouncer leaves the rest of the house in one piece because there will be no supervision for a while!
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I googled the Bond movie, it came out in 1999. Is this story set 22 years ago?
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Well, I guess I was wrong with my prediction that they are twins!
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I agree, I think his dad kicked him out for being gay. I hope Jason is not too badly injured.
