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Great chapter, fighting off Oblivion in his weakened dream state. Then taking 20 years to get an antidote… is he aging slower here than he would on Earth? There was a mention of time moving differently in this world, and he just looks like a young teenager now. When he is able to find his Josh, will they be able to pick up their relationship?
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Terry, this chapter is amazingly well written, the love that there is between these two men, their friendship, it really comes through. That they are again accosted by the same one who has tormented Jubal from the beginning, was a shock. I kept thinking the Sherrif had not been gone that long and maybe heard the gunshot, but then they had time to have a meal so he’d likely be back in town. The do whatever it takes to defend Lucas attitude, has Jubal take some amazing steps. Glad Prescott is dead and the are on their way to town for medical help. I really feel for your loss, our animal companions really are special and when they leave, it tears a little of your heart. Be well in this time of grief.
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Great chapter. Connor learns his lesson that Shamus is willing to change and be challenged on his older beliefs. The idea of incorporating the other smaller packs of wolf and other shifters in the area seems like a good idea. All of the pups studying shifter history together is a good idea. The farming the hay and ideas to bring in more money is sound. Learning how to operate the farm equipment and the necessary safety is very good. I learned to drive a tractor before anything else, so that takes me back. Looking forward to the reunion of Connor and Dakota.
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Really loved this chapter. The conversation with Corbin laid the groundwork for a business relationship for the three of them. Indicating that they will be coming back to this area long term. The mating was awesome, the immediate change to wolf for Asa was profound. And the continuing sexual contact upcoming with them flipping roles should only strengthen the changes in both of them. Will Asa need to teach Caleb more about how to use his light shifter powers? Seems like he was able to shift to that form easily enough.
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Travis is so out of it with this poison that he can even get Oblivion to come forward to help him? Abe is doing his best to save him and find who did the poisoning.
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Lessons in politics, and he outed himself as a werewolf. Now to build some mental toughness with regards to the wolf’s sex drive…
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Loved this chapter, seeing more of the property, and the haircut and shave. Haircuts are intimate, but shaving is so trusting and on a whole other level. Reid is a thorn in Lucas’s side. Reid needs to let go. Jubal is being a gentleman letting them have their conversation in the cabin. He does seem to be missing all of the hints that Lucas is throwing out there.
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Good Fighting all of the creatures attacking them. Does Travis have some other connection to JJ, as he did seem to sense he was in danger at the conversion camp.
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It’s so sad that Simon is gone. It looks like order may be in Connor’s future.
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Oh, that’s a horrible turn of events for JJ, his first Tim and his parents are just crazy about his sexuality.
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Glad that the boys are back in a good space with each other. The mystery of the voice that James is channeling is interesting. Could this be a tomb for the ones depicted in the fresco?
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So glad that all of Rusty’s supporters pushed him into this. They both confessed a lot. The proposal was a very good surprise. Looking forward to their future.
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Wow, I’m assuming Zain is going to be coming through the vortex in the forest. What a surprise that will be for all of them. This Sherrif is a sneaky one… is he one of the gang murdering magical beings?
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This is a great story for October. Off to a spooky supernatural start. Is Mark ok or was the operating room his imagination?
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And They All Lived Happily Ever After - Well, Most of Them
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in And They All Lived Happily Ever After - Well, Most of Them
Thanks for tying everything up. Not a HEA, but then most of life is not a fairy tale. -
I had to read all of the comments to be sure this theory was not posited previously. With the need to RE wire Caleb’s brain, after the heavy metal is removed, would the wolf shift healing help at all? Seems like if the person is hurt in their “human” form, that typically a couple of wolf shifts is all it takes for them to be good as new again. It Caleb’s neck wound is still healing too. This theory may apply to other shifterverses, an not this one. Learning about Asa’s betrayal, and attempted murder for coming out to someone he could not trust was something. And going forward with brutal honesty, especially in a mate relationship is really good.
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Amazing start to this mysterious, magical story. Looking forward to where it goes. There is something up with the Sherrif for sure.
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Chapter 10 Hallelujah and Amen
VBlew commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 Hallelujah and Amen
It’s great to see their growing relationship. Slow and steady as they say. Lucas has a lot off patience having gone to Larkspur and finding out what he was looking for there was not available, found this new place to start a farm, and now had a partner he picked up on the side of the road. Fate is being good to these guys. We’re all expecting something more to develop between them, and it seems that it will, all in due course. this is the first mention of the edge of Lucas’ property, so perhaps Jubal should see the land agent about buying the next parcel, soon.- 108 comments
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Wonderful chapter getting to meet the parents. These guys come from very different backgrounds, and are dealing with it quite well. It’s nice them giving Toby the option of skinny dipping with the old folks or not. Toby’s interest in ecology is bringing all of them together too.
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Great chapter, so I gather Kurtschono is like a priestess? Performing this ritual of the naming ceremony.
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Great chapter. Maybe now Gideon will know how Kavan felt when he was rejected from trying to save his bonded! Who or what is this creature that first got away, then came back and attacked Kavan? Looking forward to what is coming.
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EPISODE 11: THISLEBAUM'S BRIDGE
VBlew commented on LJCC's story chapter in EPISODE 11: THISLEBAUM'S BRIDGE
This seems like Nathan may have something to do with this but not the one who stated it. A brother of his? Taking someone with this skill set off the street and making them into a Spy? This seems like some demented kind of training. -
Chapter 5: “Pose as a friend, Work as a spy”
VBlew commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 5: “Pose as a friend, Work as a spy”
Great chapter, this story is very interesting and intriguing. Looking forward to more. This is a period of history that I know little of, and the main character is very engaging. -
Nice twist, a Dakota being honest and coming out as it were to his family was met with love and support. Then meeting Drake and Shamus in town was no coincidence. Does Dakota know what kind of shifter Drake is? Or just know he’s not human?
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Nice flashback to their first meeting.
