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Another threat to Kent. We still don’t know how much money is involved but it must be substantial for someone to go to this much trouble.
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Riley saved Ben and would not leave. They worked out more about their relationship. A very nice ending.
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Wow, thanks for posting this one. Really interesting twist on Daddy issues. And a very different perspective from what Jake had in his need to survive around Sam.
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Austin acted on pure instinct. Noticed the trap, and then helped fight off the aggressor wolves. It didn’t seem that Xavier shifted to fight the wolf or did I just miss that? Will this bite change Austin?
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A very fun couple of days, and the got to know the 3 college guys a little better too. Glad Daniel wants to come to the wedding.
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Yarima fought well, and realized her experience in battle was more valuable than all of Staslav's powers. Now to get Ain and escape.
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It’s interesting how people don’t want things to change, and what lengths they will go to to protect their interests. It’s interesting they can’t identify all of the plants that make up the water in the vial. Wonder if that third plant is even still growing?
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Sky as right on about needing to go slow at first in the shower. Seems like Brant really needed to be taught about that. Hopefully that lesson pays off later on.
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Chapter 8 Boy Meets Fall Fantasy
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 8 Boy Meets Fall Fantasy
Emory seems to only be thinking with his small head. I wouldn’t trust Peter at all. If he and Sam had broken up and Sam had gone home, why was Sam still on campus? -
Trillion really doesn’t like taking advice when he is determined he has the answer. There is still time for that third person to show up. They could be a prisoner inside that they help free??
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The training in the darkness is challenging, but necessary. Neven and Yarima figure out that Fenn was abused in addition to being drugged into submission. The news that Ain really wants him back helps Fenn. And maybe once they are together they can forgive each other and be a team again.
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Mickey is a mess. Isiah is quite efficient. Looking forward Dimitri to join the crew. He has the same last name as Mickey, so I’m going to make an assumption that they are related… is that part of why He’s so anti religion?
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Jake's Story, Part Three of Three
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Jake's Story, Part Three of Three
This ending is leaving the reader with hope that Jake is seeing a better path forward. Boon really is a good husband letting his husband go through what he needed with an unrequited love from his youth. They have plans for the future. I for another would like to read the other stories in this series as well. The sequence is not as important as having the content available. I often find stories here and then go read the author’s prior works. -
Sev made a good decision, it saved Ember, and Sev’s relationship with Caelo. Now a bit more of a plan. Maybe someone from this Mossmere will be on their way to Noxcarra and join them. Prophecies in songs are seldom wrong, just how people interpret them…
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That was a big twist. This just gets more interesting. Illusion within illusion. Sneath did get what was coming for him for starting a war.
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They could have grabbed some food, but seemed too scared on the research vessel.
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I know it sounds crazy but why not just sen Fenn in to get Ain out? Maybe with 1 other person? He could hide them in Shadows. It was impressive having Fenn shadow the large space. And since the lower level has no windows it should be even easier there.
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Fun outing day. Riley learning to drive, the market was interesting, dinner date was amazingly over the top. Ben did great with that. The intimacy is getting better. But now there is a threat coming, with Kier an Lee… hopefully they don’t hurt Riley, or they won’t live very long…
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The Blue Light of Dawn & a concert in the country
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The Blue Light of Dawn & a concert in the country
Lovely beginning. Seems like Charlie was pushing Neil to go see Alex, subtly. Neil did ask good questions. Looking forward to this story. -
Soon they will be reunited. Ain never stopped loving Fenn, and now he know and will do anything to rescue him.
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Powerful chapter, the truth is out now to this small family. I fear that Aiden will keep waiting for Cianàn to return every solstice and he will grow old an Cianàn will not. Or can Aiden go with him?
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Jesse is having a hard time accepting his knight in shining armor. This is no ordinary farm…. Jesse thinks Hank may have been watching him in the barn by himself, may or may not have been, but that’s a conversation for after the ledger is balanced…
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Riley, is scared, but through it all is proving his worth and, dare I say, falling in love with Ben. The boyfriend label accomplished. Now to save the family fortune.
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Jake's Story, Part One of Three
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Jake's Story, Part One of Three
Jake survived enough to run away from a terrible situation, trading what he had to get to where he thought he wanted to be, then dissolution showed him the reality and he joins the Marines. He’s already been in his own boot camp… wonder why Junior wanted to meet him so badly? -
Bad News for the Slacker Crew
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Bad News for the Slacker Crew
This ghost assist on the guitar solo seems to lock him in as a great contender for the competition. The other 2 have a ways to travel. Very interesting story.
