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Chapter 3 Grasshopper on a Fishhook
VBlew commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 3 Grasshopper on a Fishhook
Austin, did great standing up to his brother. I’m thinking that Rob really likes his brother and this may have given him something to think about… the idea if Austin takin what his grandmother is offering seems like a good way to get away from his father’s abuse. He needs to tell Fletcher of his plan. Maybe he will want to join him. Especially after Austin tells him why he tripped.- 42 comments
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The friendship is growing. The ghost story was an interesting thing Hudson did to scare his brother.
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Colt didn’t check on Noah before they left for the Cabin. So his whereabouts are in question for sure. Hopefully he is safe. Colt is a minor, but the lug nuts and the break line tampering are definitely issues he will have to face as he did them, no matter the motivation.
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Chapter 13: THE ART OF THE DEPARTURE
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: THE ART OF THE DEPARTURE
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They are surviving. They found food. If they can prepare it, it could last for some days.
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Wow. I don’t think Austin is going to leave, even though he had been planning to. This was a hot scene.
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This is a style that I’m getting used to, very genteel. Our narrator is very aware of his interests, and the new friend seem equally attracted. Will be interesting to read how this friendship evolves.
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That was a very detailed description of the assailants, and their vehicle. Hopefully the young man heals ok, but the trauma of the beating will be something else. Jake feels drawn to the man’s spirit.
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Interesting start. Looking forward to the story.
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Chapter 15 Boy Meets the Breakup
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 15 Boy Meets the Breakup
Happy boy, wondering how well the republican parents are going to take his being outed? actually they both have conservative parents, right? Hopefully they weather this together. -
Go Jasper. No more letting the parents walk all over you.
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V. You look different
VBlew commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in V. You look different
Nico, so dense… why was Logan taking cold showers?.. Mission over. Doesn’t he need more hand to hand combat training? Yan and Logan are just good friends. Logan was actually pretty nice to Nico on this mission. -
Hard not to connect with naked balls. Hopefully the shot was for the Governor and not Noah.
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Very interesting, fighting the spirit, then a change of venue to a cave. The lava seems to correspond to Theodore’s feeling the ground trembling. Seems like things in this realm hurt them, only if they believe them to be real.
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These guys continue living an amazing life.
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Chapter 18 - Who Owns The Narrative?
VBlew commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Who Owns The Narrative?
Nathan seems to be taking everything with his new family in stride. The ex wife is a disaster. They all handled it quite well. The boys are hilarious, teasing with the jockstraps…- 33 comments
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Bill and Arthur have an interesting dynamic in their relationship. Bill out in the world is a very kind man. At home has a very loving relationship.
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This meeting of the parents was so different from the way Alex’s family was. Quite refreshing.
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Talking was good. Marc had to lead with that. Frank probably would have suppressed it forever. Will be interesting to see how this affected them at work.
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Is the mystery man Gabriel’s brother? Lonnie seemed to see a resemblance. Tom’s ego is going to get him killed.
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Sakis protected his friend.
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Johnny’s struggles finally paid off on this film, and he grew even more as an actor during the production. On to the next project while this is edited before it’s released, then the promotion, which will give him even more exposure. I too am glad the relationships with Sam and Bruce were clarified.
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How did his parents even get Jasper to this Gay camp? He’s an adult, and they certainly didn’t kidnap him. Seems very odd. Maybe he can now stand up to them. The reason of doing it for his sister seems like BS.
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Interesting night for our Knight. They did sleep in the same bed. And the morning waking was quite something. Lawrence is quite attracted to Bastien and learning more about his sexuality.
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This chapter needed a tissue warning. Absolutely amazing. The love connection. The raw emotions, they got it out and came together. How did Mark find him? Will we ever know?
