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Sev is a tortured boy, being led by an evil father, who is completely manipulating him for his own uses without any regard to his son. similar to what he did with his daughter in the prior book. At least he feels that he will not kill Ember. I think if he did that even if Trillion didn’t know that Trillion would not go with him on the mission. Hopefully the bond is strong enough now that it will make the ceremony whatever it is that Zareth wants not work.
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Funny beginning. Three years old. Doesn’t seem like the front lawn scene with all the ex girlfriends of Charlie’s was 3 years ago…
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Those shadow wolves are dangerous. Fenn didn’t even seem to be around directing them.
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That is very scary that Fenn can make his shadows go to work for him.
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Sev actually helped in this battle. So there’s a split loyalty. It may not be as easy for him to betray his friend as he thought. How did the Helmsfirth scouts find them? Trillion now realizes how important they’re bond is, maybe?
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Very bad move Trillion…
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Meeting the parents. I still think there is more going on with Brant going out of his way to have Sky as his costar.
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John has been a pawn from both sides it appears. I hope this has a happy ending, but this middle part is rough.
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Sounds promising, looking forward to the story.
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'Monsieur Madame' wanted out
VBlew commented on unilive's story chapter in 'Monsieur Madame' wanted out
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And there it is. Sev was sent by Zareth… the song is interesting about mixed loyalties of one on the journey. There is also another who will be coming that is not already a part of the group. I wonder if Sev is going to try to hurt Ember along the pass? Plenty of opportunity, the water with the time loop, the stone monster?
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Chapter 5 Island Boy Games
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 5 Island Boy Games
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I’m thinking Ain is hallucinating there at the end. It’s not Fenn who is helping him. It seems like his body was fighting off whatever the intention of the blood clotting process was.
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Interesting start to the story, and quite the delima for Karl.
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Seems like Brant had a crush on Sky and really wanted to make this movie with him, even for a straight boy…
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Nice cliffhanger after a day of fruitless interviews.
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I wonder if Sev’s father is Zereth? This would be his 2nd child trying to destroy Arcum? I really like Caelo. He is direct and trained in old Fae knowledge. He is probably going to be very useful in the research part. Glad Trillion reached out to Ember and thanked him for saving him. He is slowly seeing what his attitude about the bond has done to Ember, and Ember is still there for him.
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I love Pip, he is so comfortable about himself, and just honest about his dealing with others and their issues, specially with Charlie and Taine. It’s funny he dated the daemon….for 300 years. Hopefully he can help Charlie. Matt is amazing, he wants this poly relationship so bad, truly a free spirit. No jealousy there at all.
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Ray definitely has something going on mentally which caused him to treat Charlie badly at work. Nathan and Martin’s attraction to each other is amazing. The 2nd dinner date was good as they really got to know each other before doing anything sexual. Nathan is taking it slow, and Martin while disappointed agrees. The restaurant is going to be fine and the way they handled it will probably be for the best with no legal issues.
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So the mysterious man who knocked Scott out and searched Gabriel’s apartment goes to the hotel and finds Gabriel’s hidden stash and puts it all on his bed with the cross from the safe. Who is this guy. Is he Yakuza too, but on a different mission? He kills the Yakuza that attacks him, too. Lonnie’s friend calls in a panic of what happened after the facial recognition triggers a system alert… what is Lonnie going to tell Sean now? Gabriel/Robert, is Frederick’s target, he was the guy in the garage trying to shoot him, is he the only one with a contract from Mahmet to kill the senator and Robert?
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How does Alonso keep finding them. Is Rhys somehow connected to this?
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Although Ember was in deep, he figured it out and got himself free then went in search of Trillion. He was the only one of them who got trapped, and got himself free without help. He is not weak. Trillion is beginning to realize this. Sev is part Fae? Who is his father? Will they make it out before the wards reset? Whatever this corruption is, it’s in everything magical they have encountered so far, and that’s really scary. They need to find a way to reverse this.
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Ain seems unusually weak. Is it because he’s not been in the sun?
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Beautiful ending to a very emotional story, lots of depth to the characters, their tenacity for life and the need to be better through it all. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Caelo sees something in Sev. Not sure if it’s good or not…
