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I think Fenn under Ain’s care will flourish and learn what his powers can really do. Hopefully this is good for both of them. Ain seems to really like Fenn. Loving the world building.
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Peter is hilarious. West is going to pay for this… in a very good way. Will needed his brother too. The letter is interesting as I was thinking Ned was roaming around with Enrico…. I thought there had to be a coded message in the last one. You just confirmed it. I tried call the simple codes, but that would have been to obvious. First word, first letter, etc. Andrew used Peter’s book as a code, but that was on the espionage front, this seems simplified. Figure you will let us in on it in the story later on.
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[Memory, Junior Year, October] – That Time When You Needed Me
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Junior Year, October] – That Time When You Needed Me
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Brilliantly ended. The recovery after, the year gap to the sentencing of the pimp, the takedown of the other participants in the sex ring. The boys having stable lives. Looking forward to further stories of the constable.
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Amazing chapter, Orel moves in. They go to the attached house, where there is a window that looks directly into Garret’s office. I thought Garret’s office could see the garage bay doors? Where he stalked Finn…. Loved Andrew’s arrival. Finn doesn’t seem to know who he is other than the connection with his father.. being Finn, he just fixes the Mustang. Love the geek connection with Tommy and Orel. Maybe they’ll get to the ice rink? Tarquin is going to be in such deep do do if he tries to attack Finn…
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The plan is falling into place. Carter’s campaign is coming, and the democratic machine is providing the legal framework. The boys are so adorable.
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Beautiful reconnection.
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Great ending to this part of Jody’s story. I’m sure he’s going to find plenty of companions in the Navy.
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This mystery woman seems to possibly be able to steal others powers, Ainreth was lucky his friends came to his aid.
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Chapter 12 - What Should We Call It?
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 12 - What Should We Call It?
Love this chapter, with the emotional development, and the growing friendship, once they or one of them decide they want to take it further. They’ll have a good foundation. -
The trip to the barn was quite a revelation for Finn and Orel. The notebook will be a useful tool in the takedown of the oppressor. Tarquin revealed his true self to Oliver. It seems very ironic that Tarquin manipulated Orel for their homophobic father, to control him, and yet is tryin to do this gala event to impress a very openly gay man who hates bullies… I hope Oliver pulls the funding before all that money is wasted.
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Chapter 2: Boundaries crossed
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Boundaries crossed
Wow, Pax is a mystery, but one that opens Nate up to an amazing experience, that he longed for. Now that the genie is out of the bottle, what will he wish for? -
Nice cliffhanger, hopefully Nate’s dad has calmed down, but you never know…
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Fun chapter, makeovers for everyone. Ryan is following their socials if he posted back that quick. Jasper needs to talk with him, even to just say hello…
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So much drama, loved Mateo stepping up, finding a decoy, helping his friend. The biggest thing I’m thinking about getting to Europe is, does Hudson have a passport? That was not mentioned in packing the backpack…
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Loved this story. Wonderful world building. All of the choices for sharing future stories are genres that I love. I will say Dragons have a special place, so would be my first choice.
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I was wondering how long it was gonna take for Will to get that message “I know “seems to have taken days but maybe it’s just the pacing. Excellent chapter.
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An amazing visit with the sun, moon, and other stars. Beautiful news about the wedding of the kings.
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Chapter 13: The empire strikes back
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 13: The empire strikes back
Is Julian really so oblivious to Deans desire for him? Sophia started something that she’s going to be paying for, whoever this mystery man is, they are dangerous. How did Dean find out about the competition, having Julian’s prototype designs? -
The threat of the evil Queen trying to kidnap Lani again will mean he will be guarded in the future. I’m thinking that with all of the people in the two kingdoms that he has helped, they would go to war with the Queen’s country at capture and imprison her so she could not hurt the Star again.
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Wow, there was a little foreshadowing of what happened in the barn, but the actual thing was a breaking point for both boys. Did Tarquin continue this behavior with others under his influence? Possibility of these boys not being the only victims increases their potential allies when it comes to putting him down. Glad for team Finn and Lydia, soon to add Oliver after he’s been tested…
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Wonderful trip to an interesting place.
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Very interesting experiments with the mind meld and the mechanics of the life force calling. Finding the giant orcas to the shark memories was interesting. What an adventure.
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Great short story, two men coming together helping each other out.
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What a cliffhanger, Jack needs to be more vocal about his observations…. Seemed like Vince and Theo have also been pulled into this realm…. But arrived prior to him. Is it a vision or were they pulled into the veil?
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