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Hopefully this time with Ain is helping Fenn see a different perspective. They need each other, and maybe a little time will let them heal physically and emotionally. They need to get moving or possibly get caught.
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Gremlin could be helpful with his smaller body and 4 arms, as a helper to Isaiah. He could not have locked himself in the crate, do maybe his physiology was immune to the radiation that killed the human crew, or the crate shielded him.
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Interesting beginning. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
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R & R, Recording and Research
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in R & R, Recording and Research
Russell was teasing the band when they all got together. Which makes it easier on Fabian, knowing he is not the only one hearing him. Looked like Russell got called to court mid session. They did work out a good solution. Sad there are only two more chapters. -
The ceremony was interesting. It’s good Rhaelce heard the others wanted to hurt Malik and got him away from them. The question is where are they going?
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Hot, but Desmond could have done a little more work opening Brian up before inserting that large tool… what an awesome Christmas present to each other. Coming out and declaring their love for each other.
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It’s interesting that Kent did not have a normal pattern of going to the supermarket. And the thugs knew how he was dressed. Someone else was watching him and specifically called out about him being in the supermarket… Its very good he told Marvin about all of this.
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Hopefully the threat is not directed at Cianán, I have a feeling he would win in a fight, even if he is a healer at heart.
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Beautiful story. So there is something in the water! It’s always interesting to read about native peoples stories. The mythology is fascinating.
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The scenes ran really well, and the simulated sex got them both edged all day, Sky gets Brant off, but what about Sky’s needs? Is Brant going to help out?
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Wow, it seemed like the frequency changing was going to work initially. But we knew they needed that other person. Prophecy is seldom wrong, and now they’re paying for it. And Sev knew about the trap, but just forgot about it??
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Ain was found an brought to where Fenn is, but Fenn’s touch seemed to hurt Ain. Now to get out of the city and heal a little.
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Real food. That was a good start after getting Hughie on the new ship. Did it not already have an AI? All of the dead people died from microwave radiation. We knew before that the ship showed damage from a black hole. Mickie and Isaiah finally kiss. They need to message mom now they have this new ship.
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Another threat to Kent. We still don’t know how much money is involved but it must be substantial for someone to go to this much trouble.
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Riley saved Ben and would not leave. They worked out more about their relationship. A very nice ending.
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Wow, thanks for posting this one. Really interesting twist on Daddy issues. And a very different perspective from what Jake had in his need to survive around Sam.
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Austin acted on pure instinct. Noticed the trap, and then helped fight off the aggressor wolves. It didn’t seem that Xavier shifted to fight the wolf or did I just miss that? Will this bite change Austin?
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A very fun couple of days, and the got to know the 3 college guys a little better too. Glad Daniel wants to come to the wedding.
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Yarima fought well, and realized her experience in battle was more valuable than all of Staslav's powers. Now to get Ain and escape.
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It’s interesting how people don’t want things to change, and what lengths they will go to to protect their interests. It’s interesting they can’t identify all of the plants that make up the water in the vial. Wonder if that third plant is even still growing?
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Sky as right on about needing to go slow at first in the shower. Seems like Brant really needed to be taught about that. Hopefully that lesson pays off later on.
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Chapter 8 Boy Meets Fall Fantasy
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 8 Boy Meets Fall Fantasy
Emory seems to only be thinking with his small head. I wouldn’t trust Peter at all. If he and Sam had broken up and Sam had gone home, why was Sam still on campus? -
Trillion really doesn’t like taking advice when he is determined he has the answer. There is still time for that third person to show up. They could be a prisoner inside that they help free??
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The training in the darkness is challenging, but necessary. Neven and Yarima figure out that Fenn was abused in addition to being drugged into submission. The news that Ain really wants him back helps Fenn. And maybe once they are together they can forgive each other and be a team again.
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Mickey is a mess. Isiah is quite efficient. Looking forward Dimitri to join the crew. He has the same last name as Mickey, so I’m going to make an assumption that they are related… is that part of why He’s so anti religion?
