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Poor Atreus, a pawn in all of the political maneuvers. Hopefully Cecily will manage to get Atreus settled, leave him at the Keep and go to Paris on her own, leaving him to deal with the boys.
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Love the interactions and the subtle growing desire.
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So that’s interesting memory recall. His mother is going to be in a world of trouble when this comes out. Who does Caleb think his father is? Does that man know about the affair?
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This is a nice turning point for Ryder, getting to see his brother and reconnecting. Being gay was no big deal. Owen is clearly making plans with Ryder to leave home. The big meeting is going to be very interesting.
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Mannly now knows he is welcomed and loved, funny how the two were dancing around each other scared the other would reject them for knowing how the felt about the other. Jake is doing a good thing setting up security. Would be a shame for a rifle to accidentally discharge into the perps if they showed up on the ranch.
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Excellent news on the health front for Nathan. The building seems all finished now, and the setup for the clinic seems perfect for them. Nathan was a little surprised at being a full partner, but settled into that quickly. The boys story about their friends was interesting. Looking forward to the party.
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Austin has been chosen. Standing in front of Aaron who could have just tossed him aside was very brave.
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The ending of this book was simply amazing. Following the story all along has been absolutely incredible. The dept of the characters, the description of their emotional connection to each other. I’m hoping that since you said this is the first installment, that there is another to follow. It’s amazing the love of a mother for her children.
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The love was so strong, and they were unwilling to cross over to being physical about it, so one decided to leave in the only way he figured he could.
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Cover blown… Robert needed to tell Flambé himself, but the gossip network did it first. This is not going to be pretty.
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These guys explore each other’s bodies for the first time in an extremely loving manner was beautiful. The are very clear about their desires. Looking forward to them getting on the road to their new home, but it seems there is a little more to be done before that happens.
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24. Friends, Family & Fun
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in 24. Friends, Family & Fun
I love how these two are comfortable enough with each other to talk about what’s going on in their lives and work through challenges. Love that Neil got the jock, and came over to show it off. -
One thing that caught my attention was Jimmy talking about his mate Dan. Are they a couple. I get that mate means friend, so maybe reading more into it. The other kids didn’t seem to imply anything about Jimmy showing the new boy around.
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Chapter 21 Boy Meets NYC Again
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 21 Boy Meets NYC Again
Who is this mysterious person in the bushes. Sounds like Emory may be going to Columbia. -
Part VI. High Potential
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part VI. High Potential
Chad accidentally finds out Robert has been hurt and us unconscious in a hospital bed at work. -
Ryan wants to propose by singing to Jasper. This is going to be amazing.
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Excellent chapter. Rico has gotten himself to the top very quickly, and has endeared himself to everyone the meets, except the cook. He is very much like Ashot…
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Fun tickle time in this story. Love the character descriptions.
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The Noose Around His Neck
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Noose Around His Neck
Jack gets caught just like Theo with a noose, by an evil tree. Still not back to the present it seems, but much closer. -
We finally connect with the dancer… loving this so far.
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Sounds like Leo and Sam need some more training…
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Chapter 07a: Chloe and Isaac
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 07a: Chloe and Isaac
Assumptions can be wrong, and tat was true in this case. Seems like the enemy of my enemy is my enemy bringing together people who would never work together are brought together. Sam coming and just sitting with Issac was a nice scene. Is this blackmailer the attorney who has access to the cloud storage working for Tyler’s father? Still no clue as to who the potential killer is. Or could it have just been an accident and all of this speculation is for nothing? Makes a great story, however it comes out. -
Mannly let CC know what he was afraid of, people knowing he was gay, and she reassured him that was not a problem, and set about making sure everyone knew they were all two-spirit people. Hopefully that will help both Jake and Mannly be more comfortable around each other.
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Thomas took the lead in talking about their situation, honestly. Seemed like Thomas and Cas wanted to make an Atreus sandwich… Atreus was having bone of it… the hunt was excellent, truly a bonding experience, and then the punishment, they are going to be an unbreakable team, and the addition of Rico when they meet him will just make it that much more.
