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The damage to Casimir by the supposed physicians at court was horrific. Mercury is very poisonous. The Sulfur damaged his lungs. The magus power to pull the mercury out will help a lot. No more bleeding him to near death. The harder thing is the witch…. And undoing the curse. Maybe the book has an answer?
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Chapter 7 ~ A Porch Swing Conversation ~
VBlew commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 7 ~ A Porch Swing Conversation ~
Now we learn where Mannly came from… muscle man. Jake has him in his room with his favorite comforter, clues galore. -
Noah, really needed a good mental health professional to work with him. Chase went to a lot of trouble to find the right one.
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Logan had a bad way of asking Nico to move in with him. But they worked through it.
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Bro Code, Part Two of Three
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Bro Code, Part Two of Three
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Chapter 27: When Empires Split and Shadows Speak
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 27: When Empires Split and Shadows Speak
Hopefully the contents of the safe remain safe in police custody, or they make copies so Julian can read them… Clara is a force to be reckoned with. Crazy cliffhanger. The Dr is still alive, but who kidnapped him? -
I see Ryder wanting to have a relationship with Owen, and Owen needs to stand up to Margot, she can’t keep dictating his life, just for her own selfish performance. Ryder seems to have made an effort of riding all the way to Owen. They need time to be together in person.
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Wow, this just gets more interesting, with the introduction of new characters. Most of whom have some connection to the deceased…
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The very picture of domestic bliss. Working hard during the day, playing hard at night.
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XXIII. Life after near death
VBlew commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in XXIII. Life after near death
Moving is never fun. Why such a rundown neighborhood? -
Everything seems to lead back to Ms Vale… what is in that file that is so important? Is there anyone else who wants it. I don’t trust her about the permanent treatment.
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Charlie’s definitely not acting straight, and it’s confusing Nathaniel.
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Awesome short story, love the tickle play and open honesty they are starting their relationship with.
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Yes, Neil made the trek. Now 5he work is done they have a few days to play tourist, and have friends to show them around. Neil seemed very good about being out publicly as the boyfriend. Looking forward to seeing what they think of the castle.
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It is good Atreus has Ashot as a teacher, he is much better than Lloyd or Val for someone of his size, needs a different fighting style. So Atreus has his mind on another boy, and the prince has his eye on him, and the princess is so aware of all of this. It’s going to be very interesting reading this play out.
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What a delightful ending.
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Rufus/Marcus main character name keeps changing in recent chapters. Sean could not keep on with the relationship long distance, but the way he left, seemed like he wasn’t really invested. And the sex talk really didn’t help his case of being much more than a sperm donor.
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This seems like a catharsis, they all needed.
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Seems like Alex needed some confidence. But maybe that’s part of his being in the closet?
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XXI. Tartarus hath no fury like a Goddess scorned
VBlew commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in XXI. Tartarus hath no fury like a Goddess scorned
All of that drama, just so the two goddesses would get back together? -
So glad Rhaelce came back. Seems like he never really left, just followed them observing. It will take time for the trust to be rebuilt. Malick is still hurting, hopefully it won’t take long.
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Taggert opened up a little about his past to Ash. Still baby steps. He also thinks he’s completely cut out of the family he grew up in. They are working for a great group here. No judgement at all.
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Levi seems to be doing a great job of questioning what he was told versus his current reality. He is deeply loved by his father. And Matt is being very open to letting him ask anything without judgement. A very good basis for a healthy relationship.
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Seems like with this control freak of a mother that she would know exactly where he had been all weekend. And might be an alibi. Or she can be responsible wanting him out of her life and this is the way she should get him out of it. Somehow, I don’t know.
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XX. Haunted by the memory
VBlew commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in XX. Haunted by the memory
Seems like some closure with Logan’s dead stepfather showing up at the house, and Nico helping him move on.
