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Chapter 7: A night to remember. Or is it?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: A night to remember. Or is it?
All of this because of a homophobic father who already disowned one son. Such a twisted family. -
Ben, taking a morning walk has a surprise visit from the Duke. It’s good that he told his origin into this world, and good that the Duke was concerned to want to inform his parents of his whereabouts. On to breakfast…
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So, it seems this story needs tissues. It’s beautiful so far.
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A little clue as to how they will have children. Wonder why they serve plants that offworld people could get sick from? Plans are coming together, and back in the public eye… still keeping the mystery of their surrogate selves except for family and close friends. Sounds like something was found in the wormhole, like another ship? They really are a power couple, and love each other deeply, and are working through all that kept them separated to prepare for the future.
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Seems like Walker was possessed…
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Interesting chapter. The clerk got free of his binding rope, and tried to attack the captain unsuccessfully. Then a moment where they both recognize the lust, but it gets pushed away…
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Interesting he cleaned up after making a mess of the cube, and that surprised Kotetsu. Then getting back to his room finds his roommate entangled with his sword. And they seem to become friends. On to training.
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Now they have formed some kind of 2way communication. Maybe it will make things better.?
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So far a pleasant journey. With a good encounter with Tim.
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Josh now has a loving family to help him and a nice girlfriend. Here’s hoping the sex ring gets busted and the perps get sent to jail.
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I love how Adam just picked up what he needed to do, and Marc explained himself about the pain he went through. They do work so well together, and there is no jealousy from Adam of relationships that Marc formed. He is very secure in their relationship. I’m confused about the pregnancy part. Can they really get pregnant? I know they do want children, just don’t know if in this universe that males have the option?
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Jamie was taking a big risk barebacking. They both wanted it. I wonder how much Hearst really appreciates that Jamie doesn’t do that with others…
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Scarlet the shell has stayed away from the boys, but is something going to happen at the fake wedding? Lachlan is up to something with that.
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Some accepting by Emmet of Finley being a dragon, and the implication that has to his coven. Weird interaction at the Tempest. Interesting conversation with Tony about the hoard taking precedence over a relationship… little do they know Emmet is the first piece of said hoard, and hopefully Finley will tell him. That could make their relationship even stronger, as long as Emmet accepts that.
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Domenico is embarrassed by all of the attention. He finally gets to meet Jake’s brothers who seem totally accepting of their relationship. Rod wants to go back to school and be away from his father. Doesn’t seem like he knows that DM saved his life. Hopefully he will be much better now.
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So glad they were rewarded with daylight after the trials to get the grimoire. Now to learn the knowledge contained within. Remy’s acceptance of becoming a family member is significant.
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Act I - The Bare Necessities
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - The Bare Necessities
So he woke to the wolf… interesting. Love the wolf’s attitude. Out to the day. -
Great ending to this fast paced story of intrigue and espionage.
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Chapter 8: The End of the First Adventure
VBlew commented on PrismaFox's story chapter in Chapter 8: The End of the First Adventure
Loved the bath scene. I personally like a changing POV. So we get an idea of that other person’s perspective. Like was Nari blushing from seeing a naked Ben? They both seem to like each other just a little awkward. -
They finally find some alone time together.
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Comedy of errors in communication going on here. Getting home with this beautiful man, Danny is very nervous and the finally work out some understanding. Will they even sleep in the same bed? Not sure they would both fit in a single.
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Q was being quite mischievous in his actions with the family in this chapter. Aaron is quite a character, hopefully he is accepted into the brotherhood, but that may make him Nave, while Jakob is Skai.. I too can’t wait for the explanation of his new friends to his family.
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Chapter 17 - Regrouping
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 17 - Regrouping
They escaped the hotel, but just barely. Now tending their wounds. Hopefully something good will happen soon. -
Beautiful beginning, here’s hoping they have a pleasant journey and some interesting times.
