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Chapter 6: Morning Mouth
VBlew commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 6: Morning Mouth
Tommy really took control of this morning training session. -
Alexander is very possessive of Lyn. And Lyn still seems ignorant of Alexander’s true feelings, and intentions. Seems like more than brother-in-law actions with Luke, nude wrestling on the beach.
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Progress, taking Jamie home to meet Adam’s mom was a big step.
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So this dinner is interesting and still didn’t get to the story, Jimmy seems to attract bi-guys or pan-guys… and most of them don’t last long… some do, but not most.
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It seemed like Stoker was living all of the memories that had yet to happen in his timeline. I like the preemptive strike. Don’t let the men get to the lounge to capture Stoker to begin with.
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Zain reveals who he is and fights a zombie battle. Meanwhile on his homeworld his mother and brother lead a fight against the beings that want Zain as a tool. Fantastic chapter. What does the bracelet do?
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Act III - No-one Mourns The Wicked
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - No-one Mourns The Wicked
The epilogue gave us the ending of the most evil characters. There is so much more for the future with the new king. Loved this story all the way through. -
It seems like Killian is gaining more abilities as he gets a little older. Where is he going to get help training these abilities? Looking forward to the next book.
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Erik is fortunate to have two successful artists mentoring him. He had to have had some help from his school teachers along the way too. His talent showed through in the art contest. This is what John envisioned with the barn/studio to have many artists working there.
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Dottie has completely underestimated Hugo. And I agree she needs to meet Thomas in the hall of mirrors too. What happens to Miller, does he die in the hall? Or does Hugo take him back and give him to Dottie? If he dies, then there is a watch available, like the watch Hugo found on the dead soldier back in the beginning.
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Jasper needs to lay off the alcohol. Blake was good to tell him that too. They are building a healthy relationship. Talking, even if it’s with the help of friends. Now they’re out to the band…
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Sounds like it was great fun playing with Romeo…
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The new kingdom is taking off. Seems like the different people are getting along, being who they want to be.
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Now that Henry has a watch, he will remember this time with Hugo! Going into battle together. Is this new watch for Stoker? That has been something that’s been missing, 30 yrs on Hugo’s par? Not physically aging, just living that long? What about project CHRONOS? Need to investigate that too. I’m so looking forward to D-Day…
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Lovely, even if a little cheesy.
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Act III - Hammer To Fall
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - Hammer To Fall
This chapter was very hopeful, even with the 3 Sisters scene throwing some shadow in there. Apparently it’s not just big paws 😉will they even try mating in their new wolf forms? -
Jamie’s natural leadership just took over and saved many lives. He deserves to be promoted. Vane should be sent home disgraced…
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Great chapter, loved the run, and the guests showing up. There are a couple of paragraphs near the end that are duplicated.
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The Aftermath, Or, Nelson Hears the Truth
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Aftermath, Or, Nelson Hears the Truth
George is at least honest about his feeling with the experience. Not blaming just processing. A very mature young man. Cal is relieved he didn’t loose a friend either. -
Finally, Max came to realize what he was loosing and pushing away, it was just so sad Art had to go through that horrific experience.
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So making friends with the agents rather than killing them. Curious about getting someone to remember something in a dynamic stream…
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What is Vane up to with this request?
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Chapter 12: Silent Witness
VBlew commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 12: Silent Witness
So Mason followed Eli, and now wants him…did he have to get drunk to ask for what he wants? -
So she was trying to protect the baby and was pushed on the stairs, hopefully the did not actually happen to Killian seeing this… was this the man in the rowboat?
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Art, is rescued, hopefully the police are called and the perps arrested. It will take courage for Art to testify, idiots video as evidence of their non consensual rape…
