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Neil, damn, you can’t always get what you want on your own terms, not call what you have a relationship, then expect the other person to just wait for you to show up…. And those others do have friends, even overly friendly friends.
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Chapter 11: THE SMILING FACE
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11: THE SMILING FACE
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Grace is a lying mess. Dragging Jasper into her drama.
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Khalid had to be starving too if they are in an inner ring of this city.why not just barricade the gates so they can’t get out? Hopefully Wylan and Ishan come up with something magical to save them.
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Now we know more of Bryan’s family situation and why he’s been quiet about it. Now out in the open maybe he can tell his parents about his orientation. And boyfriend.
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So was someone impersonating Tristian that pushed Shiloh away?
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Who We Are, Who We Become
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Who We Are, Who We Become
Did Jack just start a forest fire? Theodore had the true flint stolen from him by the evil tree. Can’t wait for the next chapter.- 19 comments
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Jonathan’s prayers to the Great Spirit we’re heard, and responded to, with a good tickle monster.
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I totally agree with that summer camp analogy. Brant and Cole both seem serious, so hopefully back in LA things keep going well for them.
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Everything was going so well, Nathan was being a Good Samaritan and got stabbed. Hopefully not too badly. What a cliffhanger.
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It seems like this transition was not like earlier ones. Does a part of Luka survive?
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Lukas with Dino’s help got attached to the freighter and needed up at the space station. They are back together now. And need some connection time after telling each other that they love each other.
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Mystery solved. Now he can try different whistles and see what comes of it.
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The trade of one life for another is familiar, the twist is that Devin may not remember this after tomorrow, but the tree will. I think they just unknowingly changed the bargain. Maybe another lovemaking session or two just to fill up that space in the “heart” of the tree.
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Loved this world. The 2 sets of lovers deserve to be married. Looking forward to the epilogue.
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Looking forward to more tickling. The idea of a prosthetic arm and the micro vibrations possible is very interesting. Are they both ticklish?
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Eriks finally acknowledges to himself that he fell in love with Lukas. Dio could have communicated with robot Dio, unknown to the others. Is there such a thing as slipstreaming in this series, Lukas could have just made it. What a cliffhanger. If Lukas wasn’t able to hitchhike on the freighter, then he’s going to be in serious need of skin on skin therapy. Maybe one in front and one in back to revive him. Just a suggestion 😏
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I was liking the island story, but if you didn’t, then you do what you need to. I remember the prior version of this story, thought I was having Deja Vu… looking forward to the whole story.
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This is a terrific ending. Their friends accept them. The parents seem ok, and they are enjoying each other.
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They are now all together, with shelter and food. The comet is still to appear. Can they hold till the deep magic is repaired?
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This was a good trick, make the Queen believe that Denir had been captured. She needed a gag for sure and to be stripped of that armor.
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@chris191070 fun short story. Maks me wonder who put the collar on the capybara to begin with.
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Should Auld Acquaintance Be Forgot
VBlew commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in Should Auld Acquaintance Be Forgot
This relationship seems different than the others we have read about. Starting younger. A boy in need of a friend. Sakis scared off the sitter… wonder how the dynamics will change when the dad comes back? -
Great beginning to the story, I’m hooked on the main characters already. Eric is interested in Taggert, wants to see how well he does with the horse he chose, and get to know him better. Hopefully the guys are all ok with some man on man action, and don’t have any disagreements about that. Love cowboys in those tight jeans.
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Wow, what a year indeed, and magnificently written. This does seem like a perfect place to end this book. Looking forward to the next one.
