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Chapter 14 All the Stars Above
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 14 All the Stars Above
Damn, it’s going to be hard for Marcus to make a choice. They are both so good to him in different ways. -
Chapter 15: The Asteroid Ship Episode
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 15: The Asteroid Ship Episode
Tense moment there but both newly promoted officers did what was necessary to keep everybody alive. -
Tissues needed for this chapter. A great amount of things covered. The difference with the season in US where it’s normally very cold at Christmas always makes me think harder. Like I would like to be there instead of my home. It has been a great year for Levi and all of his new family. There is a lot of love there.
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Jack seems like he was tricked twice. I sense some retribution coming possibly.
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Chapter 14: The Alternate Timeline Episode
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14: The Alternate Timeline Episode
Tweak did not accept the new alternate reality. And did what he could return to the man he loves. -
Chapter 4: The Dinner Bell
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 4: The Dinner Bell
Love the pacing of this and the different parties all coming together to possibly give them a chance to get out alive. -
Tuesday will be a telling day. Brant and Sky’s conversation was really good. They are both having feelings for Hector, and know they want to be strong in their own relationship. After the sex scene they do need to have a conversation with all three of them about the future.
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Miles explained the intense emotions he was dealing with and the resurrection of memories about his sister who was being abused by their sperm donor… then the crossed abandonment issues. That was a lot, and Troy seemed to understand, it did give him a perspective he didn’t have and possibly a way to forgive, we don’t know his side yet. Their texting is pretty mild and friendly. Looking forward to more.
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Chapter 13: The Command Test Episode
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Command Test Episode
This was a great chapter testing these guys for leadership potential. How about something in engineering with the Chief shirtless? -
There is a future, but what does it look like for these guys, they could have a conversation about what they would like the shape of it to be.
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Hector seems to really be enjoining his friends, but Juanita brings up really valid points that they may unintentionally be hurting him when the filming ends and Brant and Sky go back to being exclusive. Maybe the porn star may have some advice for them, as it’s not just sex, but intimacy that they are dealing with and the emotional depth of dealing with that has to have been dealt with in his career.
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This poem echoes my beliefs. Beautiful.
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The prince made excellent use of winning the race to form new alliances with the emperor’s blessing. It will be interesting to see how he and AI use these new relationships.
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This is a great chapter getting ready for the Christmas banquet and a giftgiving.
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Chapter 12: The Episode With A Real Budget
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 12: The Episode With A Real Budget
It seems the series was successful in season one and the upgrade to season two gave them an amazing new ship to have as the backdrop for all the drama. Loving it. -
Noah found Tristian in the lead vault which is why he couldn’t teleport out. But it gave them so much evidence on so much more. Noah is going to give a speech at a fundraiser, hopefully nobody tries to assault him here.
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This level of harassment is unjustified, unless Stephanie thinks Jason might reciprocate the feelings and leave her out in the cold…. Tyler has some support, and should say something so they can help him through it. Rather than pretending with Cynthia even if she is willing.
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Slowly settling into domestic bliss. Orion finally sort of apologized for his bad behavior. They learn about telepathy. Beautiful chapter.
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Peter warned Luna in the very beginning it would hurt their relationship. And now it has. Tyler really did want it, but doesn’t seem ready to be more. And is barely accepting that he liked it so much.
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Part XXXV. Thermal Shock
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part XXXV. Thermal Shock
Damn, both wanting to protect the other. The fact it was Robert’s creation that was attacking his lover, that he had to defend against, was tragic. Hopefully being frozen mostly, Robert will survive. -
Hector seemed to want to be in this reciprocal role, pleasuring Bransky. His first time giving like that. He said he only ever received before.
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Very interesting pledge rushing. Reminded me a little of my pledge time. Never know what the house traditions are.
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Chapter 11: The Season Finale Episode
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11: The Season Finale Episode
Great ending to the series… fun times. Oz like entity in this one. Getting the crews to band together for mutual survival. -
Another interesting book set amid a country in crisis. Looking forward to how they survive it.
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Chapter 15: The Wilderness
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 15: The Wilderness
Great ending to this book. It’s filling in gaps from the books in the future. No wonder Jacob and Tommy became so close, they were practically growing up together.
