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Determination and Misunderstanding
VBlew commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Determination and Misunderstanding
One little hint was all it took. Kitt still has all of the trauma his father inflicted on him, and thought he was protecting Matt. Matt’s admission of loving him hopefully helps. Time and space but at least now Matt knows he’s alive. -
The tech and the secrecy is interesting, Will the younger boys be learning about all of this from their daily feedings? Glad Brian is awake and seems to be recovered. Interesting take on the different kinds of blood. Needing to know the family’s favorites is on the Staff to know. Also to possibly know for visiting dignitaries. I agree it seems like the Prince initially withheld info on Vampire Tech, but this household seems to be getting the most advanced toys now.
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Love the way this team bonds.
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Wow, just when it seemed like things were getting good Theo seems possessed.
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Back home and things are running well. Good that Darren and Kerry spoke up about wanting to be in charge of the new Yacht. The guys love promoting from within and this couple has been there since the beginning.
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The city doesn’t like Septimus but they may pay for hiding the children in some way. Dark magic that Septimus uses to destroy the captain of the guard. Do the knights have something to battle the magic with?
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Who is paying to watch all of this? If it’s a game show, which it seems like, who is benefiting? It’s all still really cruel. Is it an alumni game? Tim’s initial dive into the web to find out about the game, found it had been there for a while. Was it recently revived, or were they just unaware it had been going on around them? Maybe they could find earlier pieces and find out more? The level of monitoring them seems way above current tech, but I could just be naive about that.
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We still aren’t sure who the shooter was other than it wasn’t Tom. The intel on Gabriel was way too quick, I think Fred new Gabriel just by seeing his face. Was he possibly a friend? Or Foe who knew about the hit? Sean is excited to have a date to the fundraiser, is that going to raise some questions from his band mates? I could see these characters in a longer series. I think there is a lot of chemistry going on between Sean and Gabriel, and based on that inner dialogue of Lonnie’s about how brilliant Sean is, I can see them as a team in the future. Will Sean let Gabriel know he knows about the homeland security agent aspect, and tip Gabriel off to someone else looking for him?
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Wow, first we get Brody shot and dying at the end of the last chapter, then Parker regretting his life choices in this chapter, only to be pulled into whatever that call was to get him back to where his Brian is currently located. Someone pull some strings for that to happen. What is a Tier-1 Army guy doing on a navy ship, especially one that was Parker’s ship before? Can’t wait for the reunion.
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So Halloween started off really nice, then the news of the sex video burned up Shaun’s attitude.. he handled it much better than ever. So much drama around everything they do. Can’t wait for the show, it’s going to be epic.
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Very funny chapter mixing up all of their relationships with love spell explosion. Charlie and Taine seem so be the only ones who had sex which broke their spell. Is Tyler still in love with Matt, and that’s why he’s not angry with Charlie for having sex with his boyfriend or is he just amused at the situation. How is Simon doing, since he wasn’t affected because of his being possessed?
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Seems like Fenn is now compromised as well letting Ain know he was aware of the faked assault on the Hearald…. Now the people know the truth.
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It’s very good that they had the father and son talk, no more secrets. Now when the other guys approach Edward it won’t be a shock, but Gran may get a talking to about being so nosy, even if it was for the boy’s best interest.
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Kitt finally shared his truth with two people, and is beginning to heal. Seems like Steven is being kept alive for some kind of redemption. Not sure that Kitt will give it to him. Matt needs a glimmer of hope, and he will shine. Can’t wait for them to reconnect.
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That was an interesting twist. Nice cliffhanger. Sean and Gabriel need a rematch, flipping the script, maybe after the concert.
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"Melancholia (Part 2)"
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Melancholia (Part 2)"
Wow. That was intense. Daniel let himself out, his brother was right about the room inside. -
Interesting chapter interviewing the archeology students. Jacey did provide some insight.
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Beautiful, this trip is bringing a lot of closure for Adam. Alex it accepted into the family.
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Good on Petre for giving Fenn some pain. This gift is not just a gift. Is it a tracker? Will it so something Fenn or Ain if they get close again?
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Lewis & Charles Discover a Murder
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Lewis & Charles Discover a Murder
The people who are the characters in the illustrated story seem onboard with Luis’ continuing on and publishing. Could turn into another series. -
Damn hard cliffhanger. Hopefully Mac will reach out to Parker and let him know Brody’s status. They both want to fix what they broke. Maybe they can. Egos are dangerous.
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It's Not Goodbye, Without a Kiss
VBlew commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in It's Not Goodbye, Without a Kiss
Good place to end this book. Looking forward to the next one. There are so many questions to be answered. -
Pull on the damn coord, unplug it from the wall. It may or may not be too late, hopefully not. Kick the door in. Leaving him alone was a very bad idea, but it’s too late for if only ideas now. That was a nasty cliffhanger. This came had really gone too far. Points for getting someone to kill themselves. And they think they know who pink is. They need to all go and confront her.
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Just keep the contact going. Radio silence is not good for this pair.
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Chapter 1: Sibylline Morning After
VBlew commented on Kreston Bach's story chapter in Chapter 1: Sibylline Morning After
Did Hunt know what he was doing with the magic? Or is it acting like a drug to him?
