Musings of a Messed Up Mind - 11. Peace - Truth - Alone In A Crowd

Tim:
I love Alone In A Crowd. I've been there, and know how it feels. You did justice to my feelings, I can tell you. Truth: I want to argue with you! It'll be fun. Well done - the poem brings that out of me. And Peace? I want to give you that, if I could. All three are wonderful. Thank you.

Stunning writing, tim. As always. I won't attempt to interpret, or tell you how they made me feel, because I don't want to presume... but all three are very powerful. Gary.

On 10/28/2015 08:03 AM, Parker Owens said:

Tim:

I love Alone In A Crowd. I've been there, and know how it feels. You did justice to my feelings, I can tell you. Truth: I want to argue with you! It'll be fun. Well done - the poem brings that out of me. And Peace? I want to give you that, if I could. All three are wonderful. Thank you.

Parker, glad they worked for you. You're welcome to argue truth with me anytime. Peace is a tease.

Thanks for the review and for reading these.

tim

On 10/28/2015 08:11 AM, Headstall said:

Stunning writing, tim. As always. I won't attempt to interpret, or tell you how they made me feel, because I don't want to presume... but all three are very powerful. Gary.

You'd likely be right Gary! They are about me if you find them in Musings. Thank you for reading them and for your comments. I appreciate your support.

tim

Tim, I will always be in awe of you and your writing, Bravo!

Tim
As we expect, Lovely writing throughout
I feel aspects than unveil me
It's what poetry's all about
It's not just rhymes and meter wrought
But heart and fear and soul let free

On 10/28/2015 11:26 AM, skinnydragon said:

Tim

As we expect, Lovely writing throughout

I feel aspects than unveil me

It's what poetry's all about

It's not just rhymes and meter wrought

But heart and fear and soul let free

Hugs for you my friend! Terrific. Thank you for a wonderful review/comment. Brilliant.

tim

On 10/28/2015 08:46 AM, Reader1810 said:

Hey Tim.

The poems are all well written - clear and to the point. The subjects are all debatable, but in the end, only you can come up with the right answer.

As usual, well done.

1810

Thank you for your review Reader. Everyone should have their own feelings about poems .. how it makes them feel not necessarily what the poet does.

Thanks for reading and your comments. I appreciate it.

tim

On 10/28/2015 08:48 AM, Drew Espinosa said:

Tim, I will always be in awe of you and your writing, Bravo!

Drew, thank you. And I alway appreciate your comments, your time and your support.

It means a lot.

tim

These are well written and evocative.

As always, your writing is beautiful and emotionally charged. Alone, in particular, spoke to me. I think we have all felt all alone in the middle of a crowded room before. You feel like that intense feeling of loneliness will never go away.

On 10/28/2015 09:24 PM, dughlas said:

These are well written and evocative.

And hugs for you too, dugh. Thanks for reading and for the comments. You look after yourself.

tim

On 10/29/2015 12:13 AM, LitLover said:

As always, your writing is beautiful and emotionally charged. Alone, in particular, spoke to me. I think we have all felt all alone in the middle of a crowded room before. You feel like that intense feeling of loneliness will never go away.

Hello LL! Thanks for reading these. I think you're right, most people have had that feeling at one time or another. When you get right down to it, all we really are is alone...

Thanks again for all of your support.. I appreciate it.

tim

I can relate very closely to the third one - I have always felt that way.
Thanks for touching me, and many others, so well and so strongly with your amazing verse.

On 11/24/2015 06:45 AM, AC Benus said:

I can relate very closely to the third one - I have always felt that way.

Thanks for touching me, and many others, so well and so strongly with your amazing verse.

Another I missed. I'm sorry you feel that way. You are loved by many, just reach out for them.