Musings of a Messed Up Mind - 6. True Love

On 10/03/2015 07:11 AM, Reader1810 said:

Out of likes, so for now :heart:

To love someone so much that the feelings become physical is truly very special.

What a wonderful "ache" to have.

Love the meaning behind your words Tim.

Thanks my friend. Sometimes it just feels that way. It aches and I don't know how to stop it, or that I'd want to

As always, thanks for the support, your time and your kind comments.

tim

You just might make me start enjoying poetry.

A new, and different level for you, Tim. "Without it, the universe that is me
Would weep"
Holy crap. That's as powerful an expression of feeling as can be achieved. That's how to say 'I love you'... you and your Michael are lucky to have found something so deep and real... got me right here <points at heart>. So uplifting... one of my favorites... cheers... Gary....

On 10/03/2015 07:19 AM, Carlos Hazday said:

You just might make me start enjoying poetry.

Hi Carlos.. wow, thank you. That's a compliment. Thanks for reading ...

tim

On 10/03/2015 07:20 AM, Headstall said:

A new, and different level for you, Tim. "Without it, the universe that is me

Would weep"

Holy crap. That's as powerful an expression of feeling as can be achieved. That's how to say 'I love you'... you and your Michael are lucky to have found something so deep and real... got me right here <points at heart>. So uplifting... one of my favorites... cheers... Gary....

Thanks. Mike was with me at my latest appointment today. He is just so solid and I thought about how lucky I am and how much he's gone through because of me. And he has.. and never complains only loves me.

Thanks for your review. It's special and I appreciate it.

tim

Oh Tim!!! You and Gary have really sparked my interest in poetry. Thank you for that This is a really beautiful poem and to be honest this poem is above and beyond many of today's love songs. Yep... I said it, I think if you add music to this and your other poems, they will be amazing songs

On 10/03/2015 07:26 AM, Drew Espinosa said:

Oh Tim!!! You and Gary have really sparked my interest in poetry. Thank you for that This is a really beautiful poem and to be honest this poem is above and beyond many of today's love songs. Yep... I said it, I think if you add music to this and your other poems, they will be amazing songs

Aw Drew, You are so sweet! I don't play or sing, lucky for all of you... but thank you for your kind comments.

tim

Depth of soul ... It seems each ofyour poems expresses yours. Wonderful.

Now in response to your reply to Gary. That's what love does. It accepts and supports. I'm glad you have Mike and he you.

On 10/03/2015 08:01 AM, dughlas said:

Depth of soul ... It seems each ofyour poems expresses yours. Wonderful.

 

Now in response to your reply to Gary. That's what love does. It accepts and supports. I'm glad you have Mike and he you.

Hi dugh... thanks. We're lucky but I still don't think it was luck. Someone else had a hand in us meeting.

Thank you for your comments and your support.

tim

Perfect. The whole poem just so deeply meaningful I can't do justice with a review. That last line...Brilliant.
You and Mike, so lucky to have that kind of love!

Nicely done TJ
Captured the moment really well

Tim, this is fantastic. You capture the idea quickly, economically, fluidly. As with your previous poems, you have me thinking of the music that might go alongside it, that permeates my brain as I read it. Thinking Erik Satie's haunting melodies here. Am not worthy!

On 10/03/2015 08:17 AM, Defiance19 said:

Perfect. The whole poem just so deeply meaningful I can't do justice with a review. That last line...Brilliant.

You and Mike, so lucky to have that kind of love!

Def!! I'm not being rude, but your non-review, tells me a lot. Thank you. I'm a lucky guy and I know it.

thank you

tim

On 10/03/2015 09:10 AM, Bucket1 said:

Nicely done TJ

Captured the moment really well

Hey Bucket!! Thank you for the review and your time. It is appreciated.

tim

On 10/03/2015 11:02 AM, Parker Owens said:

Tim, this is fantastic. You capture the idea quickly, economically, fluidly. As with your previous poems, you have me thinking of the music that might go alongside it, that permeates my brain as I read it. Thinking Erik Satie's haunting melodies here. Am not worthy!

Parker, thank you. Your comments mean a lot. Dont know of the music you mention but I'll check it out.

thanks again,

tim

I have to say the image of weeping stars in the sky is amazingly beautiful. I'm glad you do not have to feel that, or see that, because your love is indeed able to touch your soul.

Thanks for posting this, Tim.

On 11/24/2015 06:57 AM, AC Benus said:

I have to say the image of weeping stars in the sky is amazingly beautiful. I'm glad you do not have to feel that, or see that, because your love is indeed able to touch your soul.

 

Thanks for posting this, Tim.

Hmmm, I'm sorry I missed this AC. I love a lot of people, I weep for them sometimes. Their pain becomes mine because they are wrapped around my heart.

Sensational! It gives me such a vibe of soul mates and those last two lines sum it up perfectly.

On 10/21/2016 11:19 AM, Arazon said:

Sensational! It gives me such a vibe of soul mates and those last two lines sum it up perfectly.

Thanks very much. Glad you liked it. Mike is my soul mate i think, we have ups and downs but in the end there's us.

tim

Beautiful 

Love you too.

M