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Musings of a Messed Up Mind - 12. Whispers and Where 2 poems

Two poems ..

Whispers

It's early and I'm missing you.
Want to rest my weary head
upon your chest. Listen to
your beating heart; tell me
I'm not alone. I look for you
but there is only a whisper.
In the silence of my room,
there is only a whisper of you.

 

Where

In the early mornings when I’m alone,
I wonder where you are,
who you’re with
The house doesn’t feel like home.
You are in my thoughts.
Can you feel me?
In the darkness when I try to sleep.
I chase you through my dreams,
just out of reach

Thanks for reading!
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On 11/04/2015 09:11 AM, Headstall said:

The silent cries of a man missing his other half... just beautiful... I could feel your ache in the words... truly special, these ones, so good for my romantic soul... thank you, and cheers... Gary...

Thanks Gary.. 10 more days.. not liking it much. Thanks for the review and your comments.. glad they did something for the romantic in you!

 

tim

On 11/04/2015 01:42 PM, LitLover said:

I loved these, Tim. You conveyed such need and longing in a few lines. I hope that Mike gets a chance to read these so he can know how much his poet missed him :)

Hi LL! Hmmm, I guess I can show him, he thinks all this is a bit odd, but he humours me! Let's him watch hockey in peace. Thank you so much for your thoughtful review!

 

tim

On 11/06/2015 10:33 AM, Parker Owens said:

These are awesome, Tim. I can hear you in the dimness, searching, reaching for the sounds, but they're just echoes. That comes through so clearly and beautifully. As you have so often done, you paint with words with great effect. Thank you.

Sorry Parker, I don't know how I missed this. Thanks so much for your kind comments. I appreciate it.

 

tim

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