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Musings of a Messed Up Mind - 3. Chapter 3 P U R E

I don't think about why I write things . it was just there this morning when I woke in the arms of my man.

P U R E

A wonder – there
on the heat hazy platform
Perfect – as he walks by
Ass held firm in white jeans
Classic, the snowy cotton sweater

Thanks to the guy who inspired me, you know who you are.
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Stories posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Love it! Reminds me of the guy (dark hair, business suit and so not my type lol) that my mind and eyes used to radar in on every morning when I used to commute by Go Train. Didn't matter if the platform was crowded, I saw him easily.
There was just something about him. But I was too shy to say "hi".
Thanks for the memory Tim (I haven't seen him since 2003).

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On 09/27/2015 12:34 AM, Reader1810 said:

Love it! Reminds me of the guy (dark hair, business suit and so not my type lol) that my mind and eyes used to radar in on every morning when I used to commute by Go Train. Didn't matter if the platform was crowded, I saw him easily.

There was just something about him. But I was too shy to say "hi".

Thanks for the memory Tim (I haven't seen him since 2003).

Hi Reader!! That sounds so sexy, shame you didn't say hi. You could've had fun dressing him up. It made me very happy knowing this piece, which isn't my usual thing, triggered a memory. Thank you for your support of my work. It means a lot to me.

 

always, tim

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On 09/27/2015 01:05 AM, AC Benus said:

A real vision. You have a way with words. Thank you for posting it...

Something different for me, AC. Never know how things will be received. But it's good to try new things. Thank you for your support and your comments. I appreciate it.

 

tim

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On 09/27/2015 01:24 AM, Headstall said:

Terrific... you are a master of free verse... you paint pictures with words, Tim... cheers... Gary

Gary!!! Thanks, was a bit worried this was too different. I appreciate your comments, glad it worked.

 

tim

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On 09/27/2015 12:09 PM, Defiance19 said:

Loved it. Simply put, picture clearly established in my mind.. Thank you for that! ;-)

Hi Def, thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment. I appreciate it. Happy to know it worked.

 

tim

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Gush, I know my mind could wander all over the places.  I've seen some guys like that when I take BART to work, too.  Like they can just take your attention away just by standing there, so I closed my eyes..., and they are gone.  Anyways.  Where was I?  Right..., in gutter land again.

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34 minutes ago, Ashi said:

Gush, I know my mind could wander all over the places.  I've seen some guys like that when I take BART to work, too.  Like they can just take your attention away just by standing there, so I closed my eyes..., and they are gone.  Anyways.  Where was I?  Right..., in gutter land again.

nothing wrong with looking .. nothing at all.

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