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Unforgivable - Prologue. Prologue

Unforgivable

Prologue

August 23, 2008…

“Are we there yet?” Pierre called from the backseat, in his best whiny five year old voice, making Corey smile. Pierre had been one of his best friends since the first day the redhead moved to town, in grade 9. Over those four years Pierre had mastered the art of irritating Andrew, the other member of their close-knit group.

“I told you, Perri,” Andrew answered as he pulled into his driveway. “I was busy earlier, and forgot my bag.” When the blonde gave Corey a wink and a smug grin, he could guess what… and who… his friend had been busy with. With his easy going personality, and blue-eyed good looks, Andrew was very popular with the girls in their high school. Having the build of a rugby player didn’t hurt his chances either. Pierre liked to tease Andrew by calling him their ‘token straight friend’, but the blonde would only shrug, swearing that having gay friends made him seem ‘enlightened’, which apparently was as attractive to girls as catnip was to cats.

“Stop with the Perri crap.” Corey could almost hear Pierre’s eye roll. The redhead hated the nickname, and knowing that only made Andrew use it more often. The two had an interesting relationship. Corey firmly believed he was the only sane one of the group.

The three friends were each going to different schools in the fall, and wanted to spend their last week together. They’d made plans to stay at Pierre’s family cottage, and were supposed to leave as soon as Corey got off of work, but had to double back to pick up Andrew’s duffle bag. Luckily, they were only ten minutes out of town when he realized he didn’t have it.

“I’m coming with you,” Corey said, opening his door. “I gotta pee.”

Pierre chuckled as he followed them out of the vehicle. “I warned you about guzzling an extra-large.” Corey smacked his friend, and hurried after Andrew. “Hey!” the redhead called after him, pretending to be hurt. “You’d have been the one peeing on the side of the road if horn-dog here wasn’t too busy getting laid five seconds before picking us up, to remember anything else.”

“Oh, I had her screaming my name for much longer than five seconds.” Andrew grinned at them, lewdly adjusting his dick in his shorts.

With his parents and younger sister away visiting family, and Jason, Andrew’s older brother, helping a friend move out of town, the house was dark. Jason, who was home from University for the summer, also happened to be Pierre’s boyfriend. He’d promised to come up to the cottage in a few days so he and Pierre could spend time together before he left for school. Their goodbye kiss earlier earned the couple gagging noises and good natured teasing from the two other friends.

In the 14 years Corey had known him, he’d always looked up to Andrew’s brother. Jason was two years older than their group, but he’d always taken the time to talk to his brother’s friends. He never made Corey feel like a pest, even when he had good reason to… like the summer Corey and Andrew turned 11, and wrecked Jason’s bike trying to see if they could ride double in the gravel pit. That was also the summer he and Andrew sported matching casts. The college student was one of the very few ‘out’ guys he knew, and his open attitude motivated Corey to come out to his family when he was 15. Over those years, brotherly affection developed into a bit of a crush on the older boy. Although he’d felt a twinge of jealousy when Jason and Pierre began flirting heavily with each other, he was genuinely happy for his friend when the two started dating at the beginning of summer.

Music could be heard coming from the direction of the living room as soon as they entered the house. He looked at Andrew, who appeared to be as confused as Corey felt. As far as they knew there should’ve been no one home. As the three young men walked towards the noise, an image of the last slasher film they’d watched flashed through Corey’s mind, making him chuckle. They were now the dumb teens in those movies who always got killed going into dark rooms and basements.

Faint light from the street was coming through the window, and he could barely make out something moving on the couch across the room. “Jase?” Andrew called out just as his hand reached the light switch.

When the light turned on the sight before them stunned Corey into immobility. It was Jason, balls-deep in some unknown brunette, both muscular bodies glistening with sweat and the stranger’s legs thrown over Jason’s shoulders. The look of surprise on the lovers’ faces might have been comical in different circumstances, but Corey only felt disgust and nausea.

“Jason…?” His best friend’s hurt voice pulled Corey out of his shock. He turned to Pierre, and the tears on the sweet redhead’s face nearly broke his heart.

“Fuck, Drew, what are you doing here?” Jason pulled out of his… friend… and sat at the edge of the couch with his head in his hands. “You guys are supposed to be at the cottage by now.”

“That’s all you have to say for yourself, you cheating asshole?” Corey’s voice was an angry hiss. He stormed up to his friend’s naked sibling and punched him on the jaw. “How could you do this to Pierre?”

The brunette started to pull on his clothes beside them. “I’m going to head out, Jase. I’ll be at the club if you make it back.” Grabbing his shoes, the other man quietly left the tension-filled room.

“How could you do this to me, Jason?” Pierre’s voice was rough with emotion. “How could you do this to us?”

Jason looked up at the three angry young men before settling on his boyfriend’s tear streaked face. “Come on, Pierre,” he answered with a sigh, running a hand through his sweaty hair. “We’re both young. Did you think we were going to get married or something? This was supposed to be fun. Hell, we’re both moving in a week.”

“Jase….” Andrew sounded shocked and disappointed as he stared, wide-eyed, at his brother.

Pierre recoiled as if he’d been hit. “Fun? That’s what this was to you? A fling?”

“Well this isn’t fun,” the naked man muttered so quietly only Corey would have been able to hear him. He glared at the jerk.

”Was he the only one?” Pierre stepped closer to the couch. “Were there more?”

Jason met his gaze, but didn’t answer. There was no need… the truth was written all over his face. Pierre nodded, turned, and walked out of the room without another word.

“You disgust me,” Corey spat at his one-time friend, before chasing after Pierre who was, by now, outside. He silently climbed in the back seat with the other boy and put his arms around his slim shoulders, hoping to give comfort. A few minutes later Andrew walked out of the house with an angry scowl on his face. He hopped in the front seat and started the car, before turning to his friends in the back.

“Did you know?” Pierre whispered, blinking back fresh tears.

“Fuck no!” Andrew protested vehemently. “I’d have kicked his ass myself.”

Pierre sniffled, and rested his head on Corey’s shoulder. Andrew stared at their devastated friend for a moment before taking a deep breath and backing out of the driveway. Pierre was understandably upset and cried off and on during the drive, refusing any attempts to talk. Feeling helpless in the face of his friend’s pain, Corey was relieved when Pierre finally drifted into an exhausted sleep around an hour into their trip.

“I know he’s your brother, Drew,” Corey said quietly. “But Jason’s a fucking asshole.”

Andrew’s lips tightened in a grimace as he glanced in the rear-view mirror. “You’ll get no argument from me. I can’t believe he did this. I mean, I know he’s a flirt and all, but I never thought he was actually cheating.” Andrew sighed. “I hope Perri’s going to be ok.”

“He’ll be fine. He’s strong.” Corey continued to rub the redhead’s back. “We’ll be at the cottage with him for the rest of the week, and then he’ll be in Sarnia. The distance should help.”

The two friends lapsed into silence. Corey rested his head against the seat, still having a hard time believing Jason cheated… more than once… even though he’d seen the proof with his own eyes. He thought he knew the man, and would never would have suspected him capable of such callous disregard for another person. How could Jason have fooled them… fooled him so easily? Any respect he had for Jason Sedor died in that car, as his friend’s tears dried on his t-shirt.

Although Pierre would be too hurt to see it, it was good that he learned what kind of man his boyfriend was before they went off to different schools for the year. Who knows how many people Jason would’ve slept with while he was away? If his father’s never-ending string of affairs, and his mother’s naïve belief that ‘this would be the last time’ taught him anything, it was once a cheater… always a cheater.

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Great start. I like all three of the boys. Please say this is the last we see of Jason? :pissed: Or is that the Unforgivable of the title?? I've got some ideas as to how this is going to go, like a meet up in the future? But it IS your story, so I'll just sit back and enjoy this ride. :read:

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Excellent start. I'm hooked. All three boys are sympathetically drawn, and I want to know what happens. But who is unforgivable, and in whose eyes? Great questions, and I bet we'll learn some answers...and be delighted at reading it along the way!

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On 04/15/2016 12:48 AM, Bucket1 said:

What a start! So Jason got punched in the face and didn't really react - guilty conscience anyone?

What's next for this trio?

I would say a pretty big guilty conscience. Chapter 1 is with Gary now, so the next phase of the story is coming soon, promise.

 

Thank you for your review and your support, B. :hug:

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On 04/15/2016 12:52 AM, LadyDe said:

Great start. I like all three of the boys. Please say this is the last we see of Jason? :pissed: Or is that the Unforgivable of the title?? I've got some ideas as to how this is going to go, like a meet up in the future? But it IS your story, so I'll just sit back and enjoy this ride. :read:

Well I can't really say too much about future chapters, but yes, we will see Jason again. I'm really happy you enjoyed the prologue and hope the rest of the story will keep you just as interested.

 

Thank you for your review and your support, LadyDe. :)

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On 04/15/2016 01:26 AM, Parker Owens said:

Excellent start. I'm hooked. All three boys are sympathetically drawn, and I want to know what happens. But who is unforgivable, and in whose eyes? Great questions, and I bet we'll learn some answers...and be delighted at reading it along the way!

Thank you, Parker. I hope the rest of the story will live up to your expectations. The questions are good ones, and the answers are coming.

 

Thank you for your review and your support. :)

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Oh, you know I'm in.. Awesome start Lit.. Straight to the one, two punch. I can't wait to see where this leads..

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On 04/15/2016 01:59 AM, Defiance19 said:

Oh, you know I'm in.. Awesome start Lit.. Straight to the one, two punch. I can't wait to see where this leads..

Thank you, Def! It was a pretty abrupt start to the story. I hope I keep you interested. :hug:

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On 04/15/2016 03:06 AM, dughlas said:

Well this one's off to an excellently "bad" start ...

lol I think this is the first time I've been this happy to have a 'bad' start.

 

Thank you for your review and your support, Dugh. :hug:

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Great start! Right to the drama! Feel so sorry for Pierre! Luckily he has his friends for support. What a self centered, heartless asshole Jason is! I hope karma comes around and kicks his balls into his throat! I do believe sometimes karma needs a helping hand, and maybe the boys can be just that

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On 04/15/2016 10:24 AM, jaysalmn said:

Great start! Right to the drama! Feel so sorry for Pierre! Luckily he has his friends for support. What a self centered, heartless asshole Jason is! I hope karma comes around and kicks his balls into his throat! I do believe sometimes karma needs a helping hand, and maybe the boys can be just that

Jason was a self-centred, heartless asshole. Pierre is lucky to have his friends to help him get through what happened. It'll be a more somber week than they were anticipating.

 

Thank you for your review and your support, Jaysalmn. :)

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Ok so I'm torn here, Jason cheated on Pierre not Corey, yet Corey is the viewpoint character. I almost wanted to say we were seeing the story from the wrong viewpoint character, but looking at the story description it appears the protagonist is in fact Corey.

 

So, that being said, instead of having a full on knee-jerk reaction to what happened in the prologue, I'm going to assume that Corey will encounter Jason some time in the future and then the question will be presented, can Jason ever be trusted? Corey might be reevaluating his notions about whether someone will ultimately always betray another's trust like that. I honestly don't know if someone who once cheated in a relationship always will cheat every time. Perhaps Jason might learn some hard lesions and go through a personal change of his own.

 

We'll see.

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On 04/19/2016 12:46 AM, spikey582 said:

Ok so I'm torn here, Jason cheated on Pierre not Corey, yet Corey is the viewpoint character. I almost wanted to say we were seeing the story from the wrong viewpoint character, but looking at the story description it appears the protagonist is in fact Corey.

 

So, that being said, instead of having a full on knee-jerk reaction to what happened in the prologue, I'm going to assume that Corey will encounter Jason some time in the future and then the question will be presented, can Jason ever be trusted? Corey might be reevaluating his notions about whether someone will ultimately always betray another's trust like that. I honestly don't know if someone who once cheated in a relationship always will cheat every time. Perhaps Jason might learn some hard lesions and go through a personal change of his own.

 

We'll see.

It does seem like the story is starting with an odd viewpoint, but everything will become clear in the next few chapters. I hope you'll like the direction I take the story.

 

thank you for your review and your support. :)

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Well, this started off with a 'bang'...and cheating is a sensitive topic for me. I always sought a 'true' relationship rather than one-nighters, and several times thought I'd found it, only to be disappointed...until my last one. By then, I'd about given up, but a supposedly homophobic ex-soldier turned out to be surprisingly versatile and loving. A couple times a year, he'd go off for a few days to explore his 'straight' side, but would come back within days...I cut him some slack due to the pressure his family put him through--pressure which ultimately took him from this world about ten years into our relationship.
None of my siblings had only one marriage, and my parents both had previous spouses, and were cheating on one another before they divorced when I was in college...I hope this story works out to prove that a relationship can last.

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On 01/12/2017 06:55 PM, ColumbusGuy said:

Well, this started off with a 'bang'...and cheating is a sensitive topic for me. I always sought a 'true' relationship rather than one-nighters, and several times thought I'd found it, only to be disappointed...until my last one. By then, I'd about given up, but a supposedly homophobic ex-soldier turned out to be surprisingly versatile and loving. A couple times a year, he'd go off for a few days to explore his 'straight' side, but would come back within days...I cut him some slack due to the pressure his family put him through--pressure which ultimately took him from this world about ten years into our relationship.

None of my siblings had only one marriage, and my parents both had previous spouses, and were cheating on one another before they divorced when I was in college...I hope this story works out to prove that a relationship can last.

Cheating is a hot button topic for me too. I would have a hard time forgiving or trusting someone who had cheated. One of the reasons I decided to write this story was because of a debate I had with someone about whether or not a cheater can ever be trusted. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

 

Thank you for your review and your support, CG :hug:

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Great start. Already got me hating a character and respecting 3. That's what I call an intro!

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6 hours ago, Higster said:

Great start. Already got me hating a character and respecting 3. That's what I call an intro!

 

Thank you, Hig!  I appreciate the feedback and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :) 

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