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Unforgivable - 7. Chapter 7

Chapter 7

 

Corey loved to run. It helped him organize his thoughts and clear his head. As his feet ate up the pavement, he allowed his mind to wander over the last couple of months. So much had happened since Drew’s wedding. One of the major changes was Jason. Now that he knew they lived in the same city, it seemed as though he saw the man everywhere. The big blonde would be leaving an aisle at the grocery store when Corey entered, or would be walking into his favourite coffee shop as Corey was walking out. They’d exchanged a few pleasantries, but other than the first day’s awkwardness outside his clinic, they hadn’t spoken more than a few words to one another… until yesterday. He got the impression the older man would like to have talked more, but was allowing Corey to decide.

Corey had even seen the muscular man in the gym once or twice while there with a client. Since he didn’t go farther than the reception desk, he was sure Jason didn’t see him. The brunette was reluctant to admit Jason looked really good. He was muscular without being overdone, and obviously took care of himself. Corey caught himself staring as Jason used the squat machine. With a mental slap he’d forced his attention back to his client and friend, Grant.

Zach was another person who seemed to pop up everywhere lately. Their first run in was awkward since the coach was with one of his roommates. Corey had wanted to apologize for hitting his ex-boyfriend, but unfortunately the man didn’t seem interested in hearing him out. Zach might have been an ass that night, but Corey didn’t believe it excused physical violence. After his third attempted apology, he couldn’t help but wonder if his ex didn’t want to acknowledge his smaller boyfriend had knocked him on his ass.

Seeing both men so often, Corey couldn’t help but to compare the two. During their friendship, Jason had always tried to find a way to make him smile, or cheer him up after a bad day, and was a protective big brother to both him and Drew. When he was sixteen, the older boy had even stepped in to have a ‘chat’ with one of his teammates who’d made a derogatory comment about Corey and Drew’s close friendship. At the time, the incident only strengthened the young boy’s crush.

Even now, although they were estranged, Jason had been nothing but polite whenever they saw each other, while Zach seemed cold and bitter. Corey didn’t really blame Zach… he did hit the man after all, but it made Jason’s courtesy even more pronounced. Corey hadn’t hidden his distrust of his best friend’s brother, but the man still managed to treat him respectfully. The fact Jason had also taken the initiative to apologize to Pierre, even after all of these years, impressed Corey as much as it confused him.

In contrast, he was embarrassed to remember what he’d put up with in his relationship with Zach. The man was thoughtless and self-centred, and had laughed off his friends’ derogatory comments about Corey being a ‘bitch’ because he ‘took it up the ass.’ Zach may not have actively participated in the teasing, but he’d done nothing to discourage the behaviour. Corey could, and did, defend himself, but it would have been nice if his boyfriend had said something to his roommates. Given the state of their relationship, even before the breakup, he wasn’t surprised to find he didn’t miss Zach as much as he missed having someone in his life. Working the hours he did, it was difficult to find time to date.

The most surprising turn of events was that he’d be voluntarily seeing Jason again in just under an hour. When he’d seen the big guy go down hard on the trail yesterday afternoon, Corey’s first instinct had been to help. As he guided Jason back to his car, he was surprised to realize how comfortable the other man’s company was, once he made an effort to set aside his old anger. They’d always gotten along really well, and it would be so easy to slip back into that familiar friendship. The question was; did he want to open that door again? True, Jason hadn’t cheated on him, but witnessing the betrayal and Pierre’s pain had been a blow to their friendship. Sighing, he slowed to a walk as he approached Jason’s car in the driveway. Why he’d insisted on driving Jason home, he had no idea. The offer was out of his mouth before he had a chance to think. It may have been an uncomfortable drive, but the big blonde could have managed on his own. Now, here he was with the man’s car, and about to pick him up. Shaking his head, he ran up his front steps and headed for the shower. Introspection could wait... he had appointments to get ready for.

Pulling up to Jason’s house, he wasn’t surprised to see the man already outside waiting for him. He’d always been a stickler for punctuality. It was actually one of Jason’s biggest pet peeves with his perpetually late brother. It said a lot about his feelings for Liz that Drew was on time for his own wedding.

“Good morning.” Jason flopped into the passenger seat, smiling at Corey. “Thanks again for doing this.”

Corey still felt odd being alone with Jason again, after the anger he felt towards the man for so long. “Good morning.” He returned the smile tentatively. “How is your ankle today? Any swelling?”

Jason sighed and leaned back in his seat as Corey pulled out of the driveway. “The swelling’s gone down some. It’s still a little tender, but it’s much better than yesterday.”

“I’ll take a look at it when we get to my office. You may want to see a doctor to schedule an x-ray, just to be safe.”

They spent the rest of the short drive talking about possible exercises Jason could do as he healed, and sports injuries that Corey had treated over the years. Jason grimaced when Corey told him about a hockey player whose knee had been blown out by a knee-on-knee hit.

“So I guess a squirrel attack is nothing compared to some of the things you’ve seen.” Jason laughed as Corey pulled into the lot.

“Any injury is potentially bad,” Corey said with a serious expression on his face. “But a stealthy squirrel does make for a good story.” He winked and got out of the car, hearing Jason laugh again as the door shut behind him.

Jason’s ankle, although still swollen, was less tender to the touch than the previous afternoon, validating Corey’s original diagnosis of a mild sprain.

“If it doesn’t start to feel better in a few days, I would recommend getting it looked at by a doctor.”

Jason nodded as he replaced his sock and grabbed the shoe he’d removed. While the blonde finished putting on his shoe, Corey went through the exercises he could do when the ankle started to feel better.

“Once the pain is more manageable and the swelling goes down, you should be able to start rehabbing it. I’d say about a week… maybe less. Don’t push it too soon, but it doesn’t seem to be too bad of a sprain.”

Jason smiled warmly at him as he stood up from the examination table. “Am I ok to drive, doc?”

Corey rolled his eyes. “Your range of motion is pretty good and the pain appears to be manageable, so you should be ok. If you have any problems though, I would recommend finding alternate transportation for at least a week.”

“Oh, are you going to chauffeur me?” Jason joked, winking at him.

Corey felt his unease rear up again. Was he encouraging Jason more than he should? Was he ready to have Jason back in his life as a friend again? He knew he’d been quiet for too long when Jason’s smile slipped.

“Hey, Mr. Smyth! How’s it going?” An exuberant voice called from the front desk, interrupting the rapidly building tension. Corey turned to see Jon wave as he put his name on the sign-in sheet. His assistant, Liam, wasn’t schedule to arrive for another half an hour and the list helped him keep track of the early morning billing.

“Good morning, Jon.” Corey smiled, relieved to have a distraction. “I’m almost done here. Get changed and head over to the exercise room.

“You got it.” The young man saluted him and made his way over to the change room.

“I should get to the office,” Jason said, his voice sounding tentative.

Corey feeling badly for making things uncomfortable, smiled at the other man. “Don’t forget to keep that ankle rested, and iced. You don’t want your therapist to scold you.”

Jason laughed and shook his head. “No, we wouldn’t want that.”

After watching the bigger man slowly make his way out the door, he turned to see his next patient standing at the door to the exercise room.

“New boyfriend?” the teenager asked, with a smirk on his face.

Corey blinked. “No,” he denied, scoffing.

Jon chuckled. “Protesting a little much there, Mr. S.?”

Corey huffed a breath. “Grab the band and get started on your stretches, smartass.”

Snickering, the teen grabbed the stretchy band off of the table and started his routine. “Didn’t mean to piss you off,” he said after finishing his exercises, his breathing a little laboured. Reworking the muscles in his leg and ankle was tough work.

“I know,” Corey said with a smile, showing he wasn’t angry with the boy.

“So who was that guy?” Jon asked, moving over to the treadmill.

Corey thought about his answer before speaking. “He’s the older brother of a very good friend of mine.”

“You’re not friends? You seemed like you knew each other?” the young man asked, sounding surprised.

Corey again thought carefully about his answer. “We used to be,” he said finally.

“What happened?”

“Now that…,” Corey said, increasing the speed of the treadmill. “… is none of your business.”

“Touchy subject. Got it.”

“Brat,” the brunette muttered with a smile. He was still surprised how accepting some teenagers today seemed to be, compared to when he was in school. Jon was almost certainly straight, but the boy didn’t have any qualms about teasing a gay man about a potential boyfriend, the same way he might tease a buddy about a girl.

After guiding the teen through his routine and sending him on his way, Corey busied himself with paperwork between clients. By the time he finished cleaning the clinic and locking the door, it was well past 6pm. Walking into his empty house that evening, he looked through his fridge for dinner ideas before finally settling on a simple bruschetta chicken. After doing his dishes and tidying the kitchen, he turned on the television, hoping to find something mindless to watch for the rest of the night.

He flicked past a movie before going back. “Evil Dead two,” he said, with a grin. It’d been years since he’d seen that movie. The last time had been with… Jason. They’d had an all night movie marathon, watching B horror movies… and a few action movies to appease Drew. Memories of that evening came back to him, as clear as if they happened yesterday, while familiar scenes played out on the screen.

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“Come on, Drew. Move your ass; the movie is starting,” Jason yelled as he flopped on the couch beside Corey, handing him a can of pop.

“Language, young man!” Mrs. Sedor scolded from the direction of the kitchen.

“Sorry, Mom,” Jason called out, sounding suitably contrite, although he did wink at Corey.

Andrew snorted as he headed for the comfortable loveseat. “Puh-lease, Jase. It’s just Evil Dead. I wasn’t going to miss anything.”

JUST Evil Dead? This isn’t just Evil Dead… it’s Evil Dead part two.”

“What’s the difference?” The younger Sedor shrugged as though he didn’t care, but Corey could see the mischievous twinkle in the thirteen year old’s eye. Drew knew exactly what buttons to push with his older brother.

Corey snickered, listening to the brothers bicker. This wasn’t a new occurrence. The back and forth bantering went on until Jason threw popcorn at his younger sibling, who retaliated by pitching a handful of M&M’s in their direction. Corey ducked out of the line of fire, capturing a few stray chocolates that landed his way, and popping them in his mouth.

He munched happily, laughing at the movie and his friends, until what appeared to be a sock sailed through his line of vision. Suddenly Jason leapt over Corey to get to Drew, causing the boy to be caught between two teens intent on making the other submit. Somehow managing to wriggle off the couch and onto the floor, Corey snagged what was left of the bowl of popcorn, and the mostly empty bag of M&M’s.

“The little bastard stole the snacks,” Jason grumbled a few minutes later, and Corey had just enough time to set the bowl on the table before both Sedors jumped him. They landed in a laughing, tickling, and noogie-inflicting pile. It took two tries before they finished watching the entire movie that night.

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Corey sighed heavily before turning off the television and heading to bed. It wasn’t the same watching campy horror without someone to appreciate it with you. Maybe he missed his friend more than he thought?

A huge thank you to my editor, Gary.  Even though I got this chapter to him really late, he went above and beyond so I could post today.  :glomp:  Thank you, my friend. :thankyou:
Thank you to all of you who read and support this story.  
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An additional thanks to Gary for helping us get our weekly fix. :)
The differences between Zach and Jason are like light and dark. Corey is just now beginning to understand how much he has missed Jason now that his anger has begun to cool. Old grudges are like a cancer to the soul when they are between old friends. Corey has begun the slow path to healing and I suspect we are in for some interesting sights and turns on that journey. This chapter highlights how nice that stroll will be.

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Zach, Zach who ... forget that bastard ... okay got that outta my system. Corey while currently alone is much better off not partnered to someone undeserving.
It's obviously gonna take some time before he's ready to trust Jason again but it'll come.
The flashback was excellently done. I could "see" those three being goofy together. One of my favorite scenes in the story so far.
A very nice chapter.

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It's interesting to see Corey's perspective about Jason. He seems like a very decent person, even back then. It's hard to imagine he'd use their best friend for sex like that. This actually provides a lot of insight into why Corey was so hurt by that. Jason was sort of his hero, plus he had a crush on the guy. It never would have occurred to him that Jason would ever do anything like that. Anything like his father, who has basically wrecked Corey's family.

 

So Zack is a douche, and Corey is finding out that he doesn't miss the guy. No real surprise there. I like how you've illustrated the difference between Jason and Zack here. Of course Zack was always a jerk, and I'm fairly certain that part of Jason probably feels like he deserves the harsher treatment from Corey. It's certainly not going to be all smooth sailing as Corey and Jason reestablish contact, but I'm enjoying their journey.

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Out of likes. :heart: :heart: :heart:

 

Whether Corey realizes it or not, he is slowly warming up to the man that Jason has become. Of course, having Zach around for comparison and a as reminder of what Corey was subjected to as his boyfriend doesn't hurt either.
Nice chapter Lit. :)

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A study in contrast and awkwardness. Corey not missing Zach (and especially his roommates) is something we were expecting to see. Despite being snubbed, Corey should be glad that being snubbed is all he's getting from his asshole ex and not a beating. Corey is showing how good of a person he is, hurting because he can't apologize. He has an ability to feel remorse.

 

I'm glad things are moving slow between Corey and Jason. It will be interesting to see how Corey deals with (or not) his deep seated anger at his father and how it colours his relationship with Jason going forward. Whether friends or more, Corey needs to come to terms with that part of his psyche if any friendship or more is to develop in any stable way. Ah, but this is a story so there will be plenty of bumps in the road to keep us on our toes, won't there? No road in this world is truly straight, and nor any meaningful relationship truly straightforward and simple.

 

:D

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They should take it slow, even if they're only aiming for friendship. Going too fast could set them up fo a giant fight and more resentment. Since Corey still has such a hard time forgiving Jason, they have ot clea the air. Otherwise, I think they'll be stuck in limbo. Or worse. Forgiveness regardless of outcome of their relationship would be good for Corey. He's kind of locked in the past. Possibly because of his father... Noot a good place to be.

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This is developing nicely. Perhaps they could be friends again, this time as adults. Perhaps the two of them can learn to adapt to the changes their adult selves have wrought in their own lives, and see things differently. But how well you play up the differences Corey sees between Zach and Jason. How Corey could have been so wilfully blind is something I can't fathom.

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On 06/02/2016 01:01 AM, drpaladin said:

An additional thanks to Gary for helping us get our weekly fix. :)

The differences between Zach and Jason are like light and dark. Corey is just now beginning to understand how much he has missed Jason now that his anger has begun to cool. Old grudges are like a cancer to the soul when they are between old friends. Corey has begun the slow path to healing and I suspect we are in for some interesting sights and turns on that journey. This chapter highlights how nice that stroll will be.

Old grudges tend to find a way to attach themselves deep inside and can be tough to shake. I think Corey is trying to get past his. It's an important step in this character for me. Letting go would free him from that negativity, even if nothing comes of it besides being able to become passing acquaintances with Jason.

 

As for the journey? I can't really say, but I'm very happy you've decided to come along for the ride :)

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On 06/02/2016 01:16 AM, dughlas said:

Zach, Zach who ... forget that bastard ... okay got that outta my system. Corey while currently alone is much better off not partnered to someone undeserving.

It's obviously gonna take some time before he's ready to trust Jason again but it'll come.

The flashback was excellently done. I could "see" those three being goofy together. One of my favorite scenes in the story so far.

A very nice chapter.

lol Zazh was a pretty abrasive guy, and he wasn't fun to have in my head either. I really happy you liked the flashback. I had the picture clear in my head, and the fact that it translated well on the page is gratifying to hear.

 

Thank you for all of your support, and your review, Dugh. :hug:

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On 06/02/2016 01:21 AM, spikey582 said:

It's interesting to see Corey's perspective about Jason. He seems like a very decent person, even back then. It's hard to imagine he'd use their best friend for sex like that. This actually provides a lot of insight into why Corey was so hurt by that. Jason was sort of his hero, plus he had a crush on the guy. It never would have occurred to him that Jason would ever do anything like that. Anything like his father, who has basically wrecked Corey's family.

 

So Zack is a douche, and Corey is finding out that he doesn't miss the guy. No real surprise there. I like how you've illustrated the difference between Jason and Zack here. Of course Zack was always a jerk, and I'm fairly certain that part of Jason probably feels like he deserves the harsher treatment from Corey. It's certainly not going to be all smooth sailing as Corey and Jason reestablish contact, but I'm enjoying their journey.

I think you're right, and Corey was so upset about the betrayal because he could never imagine Jason being 'that guy'. They problem with pedestals is that the person on them usually didn't ask to be there.

 

I don't think Corey had any true emotional connection with Zach, and didn't really hold any allusions about their relationship. I believe Corey thought they were f#@& buddies without being buddies. Looking back now Corey is ashamed about what he allowed himself to put up with and is probably surprised at how well Jason compares. I doubt he expected that.

 

Thank you for your review and your support, spikey. :)

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On 06/02/2016 02:21 AM, Reader1810 said:

Out of likes. :heart: :heart: :heart:

 

Whether Corey realizes it or not, he is slowly warming up to the man that Jason has become. Of course, having Zach around for comparison and a as reminder of what Corey was subjected to as his boyfriend doesn't hurt either.

Nice chapter Lit. :)

lol I guess it is easier to look good if the bar you're set against is so low. lol

 

Thank you for your review and your support, Reader :hug:

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On 06/02/2016 02:35 AM, Lux Apollo said:

A study in contrast and awkwardness. Corey not missing Zach (and especially his roommates) is something we were expecting to see. Despite being snubbed, Corey should be glad that being snubbed is all he's getting from his asshole ex and not a beating. Corey is showing how good of a person he is, hurting because he can't apologize. He has an ability to feel remorse.

 

I'm glad things are moving slow between Corey and Jason. It will be interesting to see how Corey deals with (or not) his deep seated anger at his father and how it colours his relationship with Jason going forward. Whether friends or more, Corey needs to come to terms with that part of his psyche if any friendship or more is to develop in any stable way. Ah, but this is a story so there will be plenty of bumps in the road to keep us on our toes, won't there? No road in this world is truly straight, and nor any meaningful relationship truly straightforward and simple.

 

:D

It is good that Zach hasn't reacted violently. It can sometimes go that way. Corey will defend himself, but physical violence just isn't in his nature, so its very like him to have remorse over what happened.

 

I think its good they're going slow too. Corey is still pretty gun shy where Jason is concerned.

 

Thank you for your support and your review, lux_apollo. :)

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Corey is...maturing. I like that these revelations about Jason, Zach and himself are coming to him slowly. He is able to process and come to conclusions not out of a place of anger but honest introspection and what he sees happening in the present. I also can appreciate him seeing the marked difference with Zach. If anything it shows him how wrong Zach was for him, and he's well to be rid of him..
The one thing that might hinder his 'Thaw' lol, might be his feelings toward his father. Will he be able to see that Jason is not his father.. Jason, will have a time building up that trust.

 

Oh, and I had no more likes so I'll be back with that too..

 

DrP worked magic so you can't tell my faux pas:p

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On 06/02/2016 05:09 AM, Puppilull said:

They should take it slow, even if they're only aiming for friendship. Going too fast could set them up fo a giant fight and more resentment. Since Corey still has such a hard time forgiving Jason, they have ot clea the air. Otherwise, I think they'll be stuck in limbo. Or worse. Forgiveness regardless of outcome of their relationship would be good for Corey. He's kind of locked in the past. Possibly because of his father... Noot a good place to be.

No, its never good to be locked in the past, especially when the only person truly hurt by your anger and bitterness is you.

 

Thank you for your review and your support, Puppi :)

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I see a lot of positives in this chapter... some of them rising from the negatives... the biggest one being Zach. His inability to see and admit to his reprehensible behavior at the wedding, nor accept Corey's attempt at an apology for hitting him, with him being a grown man, when compared to Jason's remorse for behavior as little more than a kid, puts things in a different perspective; I think it's one Corey is starting to see. I understand the impact his father's philandering has had on his judgement, but his father too exhibits his difference from a man like Jason. He would never admit to how despicable he's been for a lifetime of cheating--Jason did it once, a long time ago, and has paid the price, and accepts the cost of it. All in all, well and subtly illustrated. Well done, my friend... cheers... Gary...

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On 06/02/2016 05:35 AM, Parker Owens said:

This is developing nicely. Perhaps they could be friends again, this time as adults. Perhaps the two of them can learn to adapt to the changes their adult selves have wrought in their own lives, and see things differently. But how well you play up the differences Corey sees between Zach and Jason. How Corey could have been so wilfully blind is something I can't fathom.

I honestly don't think Corey had any real deep-seated feelings towards Zach, so it was easy to dismiss the guy's behaviour because, in the end, Zach didn't matter to him. Yes, Corey wanted to be treated well, and in hindsight was embarrassed about how allowed himself to be treated, but he always knew that he was allowing it. Sometimes loneliness (and horniness) can cause people to make some bad decisions.

 

Thank you for your review and your support, Parker :)

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On 06/02/2016 10:26 AM, Defiance19 said:

Corey is...maturing. I like that these revelations about Jason, Zach and himself are coming to him slowly. He is able to process and come to conclusions not out of a place of anger but honest introspection and what he sees happening in the present. I also can appreciate him seeing the marked difference with Zach. If anything it shows him how wrong Zach was for him, and he's well to be rid of him..

The one thing that might hinder his 'Thaw' lol, might be his feelings toward his father. Will he be able to see that Jason is not his father.. Jason, will have a time building up that trust.

 

Oh, and I had no more likes so I'll be back with that too..

 

DrP worked magic so you can't tell my faux pas:p

lol I was originally going to ask if I left you speechless ;) Thank you Dr.P for the fix.

 

Corey has been slow to have these revelations, but a big part of that was probably also the distance. It's easy to keep introspection on the back burner if you never see the object of your ire.

 

Corey's father... yeah, his part to play in this could cause some waves.

 

Thank you for your support and your lovely review, Def. :hug:

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On 06/02/2016 10:31 AM, Headstall said:

I see a lot of positives in this chapter... some of them rising from the negatives... the biggest one being Zach. His inability to see and admit to his reprehensible behavior at the wedding, nor accept Corey's attempt at an apology for hitting him, with him being a grown man, when compared to Jason's remorse for behavior as little more than a kid, puts things in a different perspective; I think it's one Corey is starting to see. I understand the impact his father's philandering has had on his judgement, but his father too exhibits his difference from a man like Jason. He would never admit to how despicable he's been for a lifetime of cheating--Jason did it once, a long time ago, and has paid the price, and accepts the cost of it. All in all, well and subtly illustrated. Well done, my friend... cheers... Gary...

I love this. The negatives as it pertain to Zach were probably some of the biggest moments for Corey in this chapter. Seeing his ex, compared to someone he's considered reprehensible for so many years, would rattle Corey. Seeing Jason, the man, also helps him remember the boy he cared so much about all of those years ago.

 

Thank you for another wonderful review, and all of your work helping me get this chapter ready to post. :hug:

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Good chapter. I liked the flashback of when Corey, Drew and Jason were like the three musketeers. Its too bad Jason turned out to be a total dick. I still say Corey should keep him at arms length tho. Everyone talks about how Jason has changed and grown up, but the truth is he didn't give a shit what he did to his friends and brother for 8, count them, 8 years!! If he hadn't gotten some well deserved karma, he still wouldn't give a shit. I, for one, don't believe that is worthy of praise and forgiveness.

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On 06/02/2016 11:02 AM, jaysalmn said:

Good chapter. I liked the flashback of when Corey, Drew and Jason were like the three musketeers. Its too bad Jason turned out to be a total dick. I still say Corey should keep him at arms length tho. Everyone talks about how Jason has changed and grown up, but the truth is he didn't give a shit what he did to his friends and brother for 8, count them, 8 years!! If he hadn't gotten some well deserved karma, he still wouldn't give a shit. I, for one, don't believe that is worthy of praise and forgiveness.

So that pitchfork is still handy then?

 

I know you don't think Jason cared for the last 8 years, but I think he did. He made an effort to rebuild his relationship with his brother, and he has missed Corey, but he knew the guy hated him. His brother didn't discuss Pierre or Corey, so he left it alone. Not seeing them during those years made that easier to do. If they saw each other every day, who knows how things would have played out. Was that wrong for him to not try to seek out Pierre or Corey years ago? Perhaps, but it didn't mean he didn't care that he hurt Corey. Did he think about what happened every day? No... but neither did Corey or Pierre.

 

Thank you for your review, and for hanging in, even if you want to string Jason up by his toenails. ;) I appreciate the support :)

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Zach is certainly proving--to everyone--what a jerk he really is. And it's making it easier for Corey to recognize the good qualities Jason brings to the table. It will be interesting to see both Corey and Jason clearly define what they want for each of their lives and from each other. (That lack of clear definition of what's needed to make a relationship work is what soured their current relationship.)
Nicely done chapter--there's a real sense of hope and optimism that comes through.
Can't wait for mre!

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On 06/02/2016 11:17 AM, Robert Rex said:

Zach is certainly proving--to everyone--what a jerk he really is. And it's making it easier for Corey to recognize the good qualities Jason brings to the table. It will be interesting to see both Corey and Jason clearly define what they want for each of their lives and from each other. (That lack of clear definition of what's needed to make a relationship work is what soured their current relationship.)

Nicely done chapter--there's a real sense of hope and optimism that comes through.

Can't wait for mre!

Zach is inadvertently making Jason look better. Luckily for Jason, Corey has also been working on letting go of his anger, so there might be a chance for friendship between them... something Jason probably never imagined he could hope for.

 

Thank you for your review and your support, Robert. :)

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Compare and Contrast. The first implies similarities and the last, differences. So yeah, Jason was a huge jerk eight years ago and that would have been something similar he had with Zach, but now? Nope! And that's a good thing! :)
Besides, there are far more contrasts between them. Zach was a terrible boyfriend, and is a terrible ex-boyfriend. Jason was a great friend, and is a great ex-friend (well, he's no longer an ex-friend, but isn't a 'friend' just yet :huh:). Where Zach is bitter, Jason is sweet.

 

Plus, what really got to me, was how Zach's friends made horrible remarks about Corey because he bottomed. And Zach didn't stop them. :thumbdown: I really hate bottom-shaming. :(

 

All around, I'm just happy Corey finally broke up with Zach, and now he can go meet a better boyfriend. Maybe he's just around the corner... ;) hehe.

 

Lit, thank you for another awesome chapter! :hug:

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