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Morningstar: The Malaise - 5. Chapter 5 Exploring New Territory

Feeling each other out.

Morningstar: The Malaise

 

 

Chapter 5

 

 

The stew was delicious by anyone’s standards, rich and meaty with indefinable flavors. Yeah, the guy could cook, and he sure as hell knew his herbs. Conversation was limited as they concentrated on satisfying their hunger. Kellar seemed anxious to get Tobyn back to laying down. He insisted sitting or standing for too long could put pressure on the newly healed tissue and bone. It was only then Tobyn learned his skull had actually been fractured. It blew him away to think this guy could heal something so severe with just his hands and a few plants.

“Are you finished? There’s lots left if you want some more?”

“No... no way, I’m stuffed. Thank you… thanks for everything.”

“No problem. We can have the rest for breakfast. It’s nice to have a guest. You’re the first one at my humble abode,” he admitted with a slight grin.

“Seriously? Don’t you have friends?” Tobyn wished he hadn’t asked such a stupid question, but it had slipped out because of his surprise, and he couldn’t take it back.

Kellar didn’t appear to mind the query, though. “Yeah, sort of. Work friends, you know? They all live in or close to town. I go for a beer once in a while, but that’s it. And there’s this older couple I trade meat for vegetables with because they can’t hunt anymore. They’re pretty cool to talk to. It’s hard to have close ones, though, when you’re… different… like we are. Okay, it’s back to bed for you.” He sounded nonchalant, but Tobyn caught the loneliness in his last remark.

“Hey, I feel fine!" he protested. "Better than I have in a long time, and I happen to really like your humble abode.” He watched as Kellar got up and walked behind him. There was the lightest touch on his scalp, and its pleasant tingle caused him to lift his shoulders and sigh.

“Thanks... it's home. Yeah, there’s still a bit of color that shouldn’t be there, so you need to be laying down. Don’t worry, it should be gone by morning, but brains are tricky.”

“Oh, okay. And have you worked on a lot of them?” Tobyn asked semi-jokingly.

“Yours is the first human one.” The big man followed up with a laugh at his surprised expression. “Close your mouth, dude, and go lay down please.”

Tobyn chuckled before wrapping the blanket back around him, and Kellar supported his arm as he walked back to the well-crafted log bed.

“I’ve worked on animal-brain injuries, though. Trust me. I know what I’m doing. Well, I don’t know how or why it works... I just know it does. Haven’t screwed up yet, but there’s always the first time, I guess,” he said with more humor.

Tobyn sure liked that smile, and grinned at the teasing expression on the man’s face. “Crap… sorry, but I need to piss. I should have mentioned that earlier.”

“No worries. I have a composting toilet if you need it. Mostly, I use it in winter… or you can take a leak outside. I don’t want you walking to the outhouse, though. I haven’t put a proper septic system in yet… just a sunken barrel full of gravel with a bunch of holes in it for the shower and the sinks. It’s not ideal, but I only use environmentally safe soap.”

“That’s fine. I don’t need the toilet.” It was a little unsettling having someone support him as he walked outside naked, but he was given no choice in the matter. It wasn’t the nudity, it was the closeness. It didn’t seem to faze the giant man, though, and it wasn’t long before he unzipped with his free hand and joined his patient in pissing side by side off the end of the rustic front veranda. “So, have you always been a healer?

“Yeah… well, only after I shifted. I thought it was weird I could see colors and patterns in everything, but I figured we all must be like that.”

This color thing intrigued him. He already knew it was tied to the healing. “When did you realize we weren’t?”

“For certain? Today.”

“Oh.” His stream finally dwindled to a stop. “How did you figure out you have the abilities you do?”

Kellar’s flow was still going strong. “I was doing exactly this on the side of the road, in Quebec, when I was on my way to Ontario, and I saw this little kitten in the grass, barely moving. He’d been hit by a car, and I felt this urge to try and save him.” He finished and put his dick away.

“So, you rescued him? That was a kind thing to do.”

“It was strange at the time, you know? My whole focus was on that little guy. I didn’t just want to help him… I needed to. Are you cold?” He had turned to face him with his head tilted to one side, and Tobyn got the feeling he was being read, or at least his condition was.

“No, not at all. It’s cool out, but it feels nice. And that’s when you found out you could heal?”

“Yeah, sort of. Look, I’ll explain it all later. You should be lying down, so stop stalling and march yourself back inside.”

“You can be pretty bossy, can’t you?” Tobyn asked, grinning at the man.

Kellar’s expression changed, and he looked thoughtful at the comment. “Hmm. Maybe. I never bossed anyone around before… except there was one time with my foster-brother….” He didn’t finish, but a satisfied smile appeared on his face. Back at the bed, while helping him get situated and spreading the big comforter over him, he had that thoughtful look again. “Hey, man, are we human?”

“What?”

“What are we, Tobyn? Are we people, or are we animals… or something in between? I’ve always wondered, and I never had anyone to ask before now.”

“Oh, I see. Hell, we’re people of course. We’re born as humans and we can even have children with them… we have to be careful of that, though. They need to know what they’re getting into, and that’s our responsibility. You know, until our first shift, we can have our blood work done and it’s no different from any other human’s. Once we shift it’s a different story. We have to make sure no one tests us, so we need to avoid doctors and hospitals. There used to be ones who’d treat us, but our pack isn’t aware of any… not anymore. You didn’t know any of this?”

“I wasn’t positive, but I suspected it was the case. I had blood drawn a bunch of times when I was a kid, and there were no issues.” Kellar walked out to the sink area and brought him a glass of water with an order to hydrate. He then returned to the kitchen and began cleaning up after their meal, putting the leftover stew in the fridge.

No talking was going on so Tobyn closed his eyes, his thoughts on this uniquely remarkable man. He could almost feel the healer thinking, like there were vibes in the air he could read. What must his life have been like with no one to help guide him and his wolf? He felt his own heart reach out to the beautiful man. It was strange to think of any guy as beautiful, but he was, and Tobyn didn’t balk in the moment at how he was seeing Kellar Haylan. There was a lot he needed to talk to him about, but he also knew more questions were coming from the big guy. There had to be. It was hard to imagine being that isolated as a shifter. All the ones he knew relied completely on... needed... their pack.

He was startled when he felt the dip of what must be a homemade down mattress. It certainly was comfortable. He opened his eyes to see Kellar, naked again, with one knee on the bed. The only light still on came from one small lamp.

“This is the only place to sleep. We have to share, so could you move over a little?”

“Of course… sure.” He was never conscious of nudity… shifters just weren’t… but that wasn’t the case with Kellar’s. He was like a god come to life. Tobyn’s eyes were drawn to the big, heavy-looking package swaying slightly in front of him, and he felt the rush of blood to his own cock, enough to make it move a good distance along his thigh. The man was oversized in every way, and he wondered if his blush was noticeable to the big man.

“So, are you going to?”

“What? Oh yeah, sorry. I guess my brain isn’t alright after all,” he answered sheepishly as he sidled over.

“Your brain is fine. It just needs rest, and so do I. To be honest, healing you took a lot out of me. Did I tell you I healed your stomach ulcers too?”

“No, you didn’t. Thank you. Oh, so that’s why your hand was down there?”

Kellar chuckled as he got under the comforter, twisting to turn the light off. “Why else would my hand be down there?

Tobyn chuckled too, but didn’t say anything.

“This is a day of firsts. I’ve never shared my bed with anyone either.”

“No kidding? What about with a woman?”

“Tried that once. Shared a woman’s bed. Didn’t like it.”

“What, the bed?”

“Nope. The sex. Wasn’t for me.”

Tobyn wasn’t sure how he felt about Kellar’s admission, but his dick grew again. Shit. What was going on with him? He had Tilly waiting at home. True, it wasn’t serious, and they weren’t sleeping together yet, but…. “So, are you gay then?”

“Not sure. Haven’t tried it.” It was said matter-of-factly, and Tobyn knew he should leave it alone.

“Well, do you find guys attractive?” He mentally cringed as the words left his mouth. What the hell was the matter with him that he couldn't shut up and stop asking questions? Thank God for the cover of darkness. It took minutes, but when the answer finally came, he was thrown for another loop.

“I find you attractive… good night, Tobyn. I’m sure you’re fine, but wake me if you feel any pain or pressure in your head, okay? Even a slight headache.”

“Ah, okay, I will… good night, Kellar, and thanks again, for everything.”

“You’re welcome. Get some sleep.”

His heart was hammering in his chest, and it wasn’t helped when he heard a stirring, and felt a hard and hairy leg settle against his own. He was only able to relax when he heard soft, steady snores come from the man beside him. No doubt about it… Kellar had him rattled in a way he’d never experienced before.

 

Waking up in bed with a man was something entirely new, and Tobyn was unsure of what to do. Sometime during the night, Kellar had embraced him from behind, and hadn’t let go. That by itself wasn’t so bad… upon realizing it, surprisingly, he’d gone right back to sleep. But, he was awake again, and not too sure about the giant erection pressing against him in a most intimate way. He should be leaping out of bed, but he wasn’t. It was like he was powerless where this guy was concerned.

Pressure on his bladder took the need to ponder the situation out of his hands. He had to piss in the worst way, and that wasn’t going to be easy considering his own aroused state. It was that damn glass of water Kellar insisted he drink. There was no light coming through the windows, but his vision was still at its best, allowing him to make out the furnishings in the big open room. Taking a gentle hold on the arm against his chest, he lifted slowly and carefully in an attempt to slide out from under it. Kellar’s reaction was to try to pull him closer, grinding into him as he did so.

Whoa... that was interesting, if just a little unnerving. Another tactic was required. “Kellar? Kellar… you have to let go of me. My bladder’s about to burst.”

“Huh… oh… sorry, I, oh God, I didn’t mean to….”

“Relax. I know. It’s fine... just lift your arm.”

“Yeah, okay. I can’t believe I slept like that. I never sleep so deep. I really am sorry,” he said as Tobyn climbed out of bed, keeping his back to him. “How’s your head?”

“It’s great, and stop apologizing. You were dead to the world, so don’t worry about it.” He carefully maneuvered to the door, groaning silently when he heard the unmistakable sound of someone getting out of bed. Sure enough, he was outside all of ten seconds before his rescuer was at his side, struggling just like he was, to urinate out of a hardon. Christ, the thing was huge. He looked from it up to the tall man's face, seeing one hell of a sexy grin.

“Looks like we both have the same problem.” He looked pointedly downward. “Impressive.”

Tobyn laughed and shook his head, his eyes glancing at the big man’s cock once more. “Says the man with a club for a penis.”

The laughter that followed set the streams to flowing and they both sighed at the shared pleasure a morning piss gives. The sky was beginning to lighten as night hinted at dawn.

“Damn, I have to get my clothes. They’re in the woods.”

“Nope, they’re not. They are in the cabin. I saw where you undressed before you shifted, so I grabbed them when you were sleeping. In case you were wondering, there was no sign of the old grey, or I guess I should say Fendral.”

“You saw me shift?”

“Of course. I picked up your scent when you got out of your truck down the road. I watched you the whole time.”

“Damn, I hate that my senses are so unpredictable.”

“I stayed upwind, so you couldn’t have smelled me until I let you.”

Both men finished at the same time, and Tobyn was thankful they were both flaccid. He was finding it hard not to look at the naked man. It was astonishing how perfectly put together he was. He was feeling rattled again, and it was because no one else had made him think he might be gay… not even Hugh, when they used to jerk each other off a few years back. It’d been so easy to leave that behind, yet here he was, ogling his rescuer.

“What’s the deal with that? Why are you having trouble with your senses, anyway?”

“It’s a long story.”

“Okay, you don’t have to tell me. I don’t mean to pry.” The disappointment in his voice showed he thought it was a rebuff.

“No, I want to tell you. As a matter of fact, you might be able to help me with it… who knows?”

The man appeared intrigued now, no longer disappointed. “I’ll do whatever I can.”

“Do we have time to talk about it this morning, or do you need to go to work?”

“Nope. No work for four months… maybe six. We got layoff notices on Friday. There’s a temporary plant shutdown, so I’m free as a… wolf.”

“Oh, sorry to hear that.”

“I’m not. I’m in good shape money-wise, and employment insurance kicks in in four weeks. I can take the hit, no problem. Let’s get some clothes on. It’s cold enough my dick has shrunk.”

“You’re kidding, right? That is shrunk?”

“Yup, that’s shrunk.”

Tobyn muttered, “Good Lord,” as they walked inside, and that deep belly laugh came out of Kellar again. What he felt in his own belly was a warm fuzzy feeling at the sound that was quickly becoming comfortably familiar. In fact, the man himself was becoming the same way.

Thanks to my editor, Timothy M., and to all those who read this story.
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On 09/07/2016 06:06 AM, Parker Owens said:

Tobyn's confusion is a good theme for this chapter. In his place, I'd be both intrigued by and petrified of so powerful a man as Kellar. He must know Kellar won't hurt him, but that doesn't necessarily mean he wouldn't be intimidated. Kellar seems so sure of himself, so completely at rest and serene in his own skin, whatever shape it takes. How could this be the scrawny foster child who once got bullied so easily?

This chapter was a favorite of mine to write. Beneath the surface, I think we can feel Kellar's uncertainty... his loneliness and the sheer joy he feels at having Tobyn around. On the surface, he's this big, strong, confident shifter, but his vulnerability is only lightly concealed. Tobyn has some thinking to do... he's attracted to a man for the first time... but, he has no fear of him... just curiosity... thanks for a great review, Parker... cheers... Gary....

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Interesting how Tobyn is finding himself attracted to Kellar, and that he is amazed about it. And, obvious that the attraction is mutual. Critical match? You are at this point posing more new questions than you are answering, and I can get along with that. The way is open for some movement now, and the allure of questions answered is going to be too powerful for Kellar to resist. And then there is Tobyn, of course... :worship:
Back a.s.a.p.

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On 10/24/2016 02:58 PM, Geron Kees said:

Interesting how Tobyn is finding himself attracted to Kellar, and that he is amazed about it. And, obvious that the attraction is mutual. Critical match? You are at this point posing more new questions than you are answering, and I can get along with that. The way is open for some movement now, and the allure of questions answered is going to be too powerful for Kellar to resist. And then there is Tobyn, of course... :worship:

Back a.s.a.p.

Thanks for hanging in, Geron... it is a story that unfolds slowly as I impart a lot of information without it seeming like a deluge. Tobyn is not the usual character... he's fun to write, but, well, you'll see :) . I appreciate your support immensely, buddy... cheers... Gary....

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Now that I am reading this for the second time I find that I shouldn't have waited so long to do so:yes:

A truly great story! Maybe some day there will part 2 hehe at least I hope so.

 

I just loved this chapter with its rich moments.:thankyou::worship: 

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I totally agree with @MacGreg comment.  The strength in the hold on this reader is the character development.  As Mac said, "I do love the show-don't-tell style you're using with this story,"   I think it's the key to a strong connection to characters that can last through multiple books.  :)   It's the characters that make it possible for me to read some of Stephen King when I'm not a fan of scary books.  It's the attention to character development in Keller's craving to know his kind and his drive to help that are powerful across a whole spectrum of readers.  The trick to a second book is a new story of growth and change for the characters and where most sequels trip themselves up, IMHO.

 

There is one technical bit that tripped me up.  You wrote, “I stayed upwind of you, so you couldn’t have smelled me until I let you.”  I have spent a good chunk of time around hunters, and there seems to be a common mistake with upwind versus downwind when I'm reading stories.  Upwind is the wind at your back and carrying your scent forward.  To be upwind is to be alerting your prey, staying downwind is the key.  Now, there are occasions when upwind can work, say if the direction is just off adjacent to be detected or you're disguising your scent, etc.  Here is a link to the technical explanation. Most wouldn't catch this, and it certainly didn't stop me long enough last time to make a comment.  I was just enjoying the interaction and eager for the next chapter.  :D

 

And yes, I did compare your character development skills to Stephen King's and not lightly. (Especially like "The Green Mile" or "Stand By Me."  ~ Ms. V

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12 hours ago, Y0rite said:

I totally agree with @MacGreg comment.  The strength in the hold on this reader is the character development.  As Mac said, "I do love the show-don't-tell style you're using with this story,"   I think it's the key to a strong connection to characters that can last through multiple books.  :)   It's the characters that make it possible for me to read some of Stephen King when I'm not a fan of scary books.  It's the attention to character development in Keller's craving to know his kind and his drive to help that are powerful across a whole spectrum of readers.  The trick to a second book is a new story of growth and change for the characters and where most sequels trip themselves up, IMHO.

 

There is one technical bit that tripped me up.  You wrote, “I stayed upwind of you, so you couldn’t have smelled me until I let you.”  I have spent a good chunk of time around hunters, and there seems to be a common mistake with upwind versus downwind when I'm reading stories.  Upwind is the wind at your back and carrying your scent forward.  To be upwind is to be alerting your prey, staying downwind is the key.  Now, there are occasions when upwind can work, say if the direction is just off adjacent to be detected or you're disguising your scent, etc.  Here is a link to the technical explanation. Most wouldn't catch this, and it certainly didn't stop me long enough last time to make a comment.  I was just enjoying the interaction and eager for the next chapter.  :D

 

And yes, I did compare your character development skills to Stephen King's and not lightly. (Especially like "The Green Mile" or "Stand By Me."  ~ Ms. V

Wow... you are very kind. I had a really tough day, so this means a lot. I agree with you, though, about the importance of character development. And yes, it is definitely the key to connecting with the reader. A character can be flawed or floundering, and need only be heroic in moments, or headed towards a personal epiphany, but the reader must feel they know him/her. That is what brings a story alive... and done well, the reader can tell when an action is out of character. To me, as a reader, that is a betrayal... these characters must stay true to how you presented them in the first place... though that doesn't mean it can't take time to reveal what makes them tick. :)  We meet Kellar as a kid, yet three years later, he is still the same person who has always managed to survive whatever has been thrown at him. And he is still lonely.

 

Comparing my character development to Stephen King's is a little shocking, but a great compliment. I still have much to learn... much... much ... much... but, thank you. I am humbly honored.

Re the upwind thing. I remembered researching it at the time, and I admit to getting confused. Below is one example of a googled explanation... I took it to mean Kellar should be upwind... if he was downwind, the wind would be at his back, and thus, Tobyn would be able to catch his scent. As it was, Tobyn was downwind of Kellar... does that make sense to you? I'm tired, and still confused, but let me know what you think... Thanks, Ms. V, for making another one of my days. :hug: 

 

 

"When you walk towards the wind (blowing in your face), you are upwind (or going against the direction of the wind). When you walk with the wind blowing on your back, you are downwind (going with the direction of the wind).

When hunting you want to walk upwind, so you keep the wind in your face. That way animals like deer won't be able to smell you as you get closer to them.

If a deer is downwind from you, it will be able to smell you, since the wind is blowing your smell towards the deer.  If he's upwind from you, he won't be able to smell you, since the wind is blowing your smell behind you (not towards the deer).

The smoke from a campfire, along with your scent will be carried by the wind and float downwind from the campfire.

Upwind is when wind blows directly in your face.

Downwind is when wind blows on your back."

 

 

 

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G-man's story is spreading like the the tendrilled roots of an old oak.

So much to comment on but I love that this is Kellar's world. Tobyn is having to make one exception, after another, not to judge Kellar's actions by the standard mores of the outside world, to which he does not belong.

As a consequence, Tobyn has had to accept Kellar's huge junk in his face and hardness in his behind and pissing erect off the porch and not consider it, in anyway unusual. 🙂

Kellar is an independent, intelligent thinker. The whole sexuality dialogue was amusing, even if only for the fact that Tobyn couldn't shut himself up probing Kellar about his attraction to males. It took Kellar a full two minutes to consider all his male interactions before he came back with his measured response: effectively, a "just you!" 

Who could deny that we have anthing but two earth mates here.

 

 

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9 minutes ago, Bard Simpson said:

G-man's story is spreading like the the tendrilled roots of an old oak.

So much to comment on but I love that this is Kellar's world. Tobyn is having to make one exception, after another, not to judge Kellar's actions by the standard mores of the outside world, to which he does not belong.

As a consequence, Tobyn has had to accept Kellar's huge junk in his face and hardness in his behind and pissing erect off the porch and not consider in anyway unusual. 🙂

Kellar is an independent, intelligent thinker. The whole sexuality dialogue was amusing, even if only for the fact that Tobyn couldn't shut himself up probing Kellar about his attraction to males. It took Kellar a full two minutes to consider all his male interactions before he came back with his measured response: effectively, a "just you!" 

Who could deny that we have anthing but two earth mates here.

 

 

LOL... well I do love trees. :)  I love this comment... there is something so innocent about Kellar, that we can't help fall in love with him. We see too, beneath all the power and confidence this big man has, he is vulnerable as well. I'm glad you noticed how Tobyn had no control over his curiosity. He got more than he bargained for, I think. :gikkle:  I don't know about earth mates, but these two seem to be connecting on some level. Tobyn's whole outlook has gone off-kilter, but he doesn't pull away. I think he senses that would hurt the big healer. You're exactly right... Tobyn is in Kellar's world, but he isn't afraid of it. But he's not sure of it either. Cheers, my friend... happy reading... Gary....

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Really enjoyed this chapter. It seems the two are slowly warming up to one another, that's good, really good. Thanks for your hard work. I am glad you shared this incredible story with us. 

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1 hour ago, Jasmine94 said:

Really enjoyed this chapter. It seems the two are slowly warming up to one another, that's good, really good. Thanks for your hard work. I am glad you shared this incredible story with us. 

I'm enjoying it again, reading right along with you. It might sound strange, since I am the author, but I honestly never tire of reading this story. Thank you for another kind comment, Jasmine. Nothing makes me happier than when a new reader is drawn in by this story and these characters. :hug: 

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God this chapter is just so good! I love this line

Of course… sure.” He was never conscious of nudity… shifters just weren’t… but that wasn’t the case with Kellar’s. He was like a god come to life.

And this one

Let’s get some clothes on. It’s cold enough my dick has shrunk.”

“You’re kidding, right? That is shrunk?”

“Yup, that’s shrunk.”

Tobyn muttered, “Good Lord,” as they walked inside, and that deep belly laugh came out of Kellar again. What Tobyn felt in his own belly was a warm fuzzy feeling at the sound that was quickly becoming comfortably familiar. In fact, the man himself was becoming the same way.

Great chapter:yes::thankyou:

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51 minutes ago, Albert1434 said:

God this chapter is just so good! I love this line

Of course… sure.” He was never conscious of nudity… shifters just weren’t… but that wasn’t the case with Kellar’s. He was like a god come to life.

And this one

Let’s get some clothes on. It’s cold enough my dick has shrunk.”

“You’re kidding, right? That is shrunk?”

“Yup, that’s shrunk.”

Tobyn muttered, “Good Lord,” as they walked inside, and that deep belly laugh came out of Kellar again. What Tobyn felt in his own belly was a warm fuzzy feeling at the sound that was quickly becoming comfortably familiar. In fact, the man himself was becoming the same way.

Great chapter:yes::thankyou:

You just reminded me. with what you quoted, of how much fun it was to write these two characters... right from the very beginning. They stole my heart and have never let go.

 

I liked the vulnerability Kellar shows with this line as they were getting ready for bed...

“What are we, Tobyn? Are we people or are we animals… or something in between? I’ve always wondered, and I never had anyone to ask before now.”

To me, this was a powerful moment, and showed how isolated Kellar was. I will admit to you that line made me quite emotional when I wrote it. :) 

Thanks, buddy, for bringing me back to this. :hug: 

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Thanks a lot, Gary! Now you went and done it! You made me want to picture Kellar in the nude with his manhood sticking out in full mast! That is not a nice thing to do to a old lady! lol 

I love the way this story is going! It gives me some ideas of my own. And no, not the kind that requires touching! lol

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50 minutes ago, Story Reader said:

Thanks a lot, Gary! Now you went and done it! You made me want to picture Kellar in the nude with his manhood sticking out in full mast! That is not a nice thing to do to a old lady! lol 

I love the way this story is going! It gives me some ideas of my own. And no, not the kind that requires touching! lol

Lol. Just doing my job, ma'am. :P  Glad your enjoying the way it's going. :D  This was a favorite chapter of mine to write. We get to see more of what the big man is about. Thanks and cheers, Sherye. :hug: 

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I have always loved this chapter and this story. I have to at met that this most likely will not be the last time I read this story :yes:

Love this bit as well!

 “Of course… sure.” He was never conscious of nudity… shifters just weren’t… but that wasn’t the case with Kellar’s. He was like a god come to life. Tobyn’s eyes were drawn to the big, heavy-looking package swaying slightly in front of him, and he felt the rush of blood to his own cock, enough to make it move a good distance along his thigh. The man was oversized in every way, and he wondered if his blush was noticeable to the big man.

I also love this bit And you wrote

 I hope someday, there will be a Book 2 as well. :)

Thanks for sharing:thankyou:

 

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52 minutes ago, Albert1434 said:

I have always loved this chapter and this story. I have to at met that this most likely will not be the last time I read this story :yes:

Love this bit as well!

 “Of course… sure.” He was never conscious of nudity… shifters just weren’t… but that wasn’t the case with Kellar’s. He was like a god come to life. Tobyn’s eyes were drawn to the big, heavy-looking package swaying slightly in front of him, and he felt the rush of blood to his own cock, enough to make it move a good distance along his thigh. The man was oversized in every way, and he wondered if his blush was noticeable to the big man.

I also love this bit And you wrote

 I hope someday, there will be a Book 2 as well. :)

Thanks for sharing:thankyou:

 

Hey, buddy! I've always loved this chapter too. It was fun to write, and I found Kellar as intriguing as Tobyn did. Love what you quoted... Tobyn being caught by surprise at these new feelings he was having. There is humor in this chapter, easy humor between the two, but there is such vulnerability in Kellar that it is bittersweet. As powerful as the man is, Tobyn is the stronger one in this chapter, because he has the benefit of knowing his history after years of support from his pack. Kellar had none of that. It's astonishing to me and Tobyn both that he's created this life and lives with such ease in his own skin despite being so different form the people he knows. 

Thanks for bringing me back to this, Albert. You rock, as always. :hug: 

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These two have just met yet their comfort level is as natural as breathing. Not becoming a couple would be a crime.

 

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11 minutes ago, drpaladin said:

These two have just met yet their comfort level is as natural as breathing. Not becoming a couple would be a crime.

 

It would seem so. :)  There is so much about this chapter I like. For example... 

Back at the bed, while helping Tobyn get situated and spreading the big comforter over him, he had that thoughtful look again. “Hey, man, are we human?”

“What?”

“What are we, Tobyn? Are we people or are we animals… or something in between? I’ve always wondered, and I never had anyone to ask before now.”

I think this shows just how vulnerable Kellar is. There is this innocence that doesn't quite match with how impressive he looks. I think this is the chapter where readers fall in love with him. I know the writer did. :) 

And yes, there is a comfort level there despite Tobyn not being sure what to think. You might find that typical of Tobyn. :unsure:

Thanks, Dr. P. I always enjoy reading along with new readers, and I never tire of this story for some reason... at least not yet. Cheers! :hug:  

 

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It's fun reading this again and seeing more of the emotions and actions of Kellar and Tobyn as they get to know each other better.  Kellar's angry wolf is much more mellow three years later, but Kellar is still a bit innocent.  Tobyn started the chapter as a worn out person, and by the end seems to have gained strength and energy from being with Kellar.  

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5 hours ago, raven1 said:

It's fun reading this again and seeing more of the emotions and actions of Kellar and Tobyn as they get to know each other better.  Kellar's angry wolf is much more mellow three years later, but Kellar is still a bit innocent.  Tobyn started the chapter as a worn out person, and by the end seems to have gained strength and energy from being with Kellar.  

And it's fun for me to read your comments on this reread. :) We are learning lot's more about these characters through their interactions, always the best way in my writing experience. Yes, Tobyn was weary, but meeting Kellar has given him new life... new hope. Cheers! :hug: 

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1 hour ago, gdaniel said:

Being on the "small" side, descriptions of Kellar's size don't really float my boat. 🤪

Lol. I totally get what you're saying. He is a mountain of a man in all aspects, and it appears Tobyn doesn't mind that. :P I hope this doesn't turn you off the story, buddy, because I truly believe it is a rewarding journey if you can hang in there. At any rate, thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts with me. I love interacting with readers about the different chapters. Cheers... Gary....  

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