Timmy's Journal - 45. Love Song

It's a lovely song, Tim. Meant to be a duet...

Echo AC's comment. I definitely hear a duet. And it is such a beautiful song, it is worth hearing over and over again. Thank you Tim, for writing something that at needed to be sung, said, and remembered.

won't you write a song for me

Such powerful emotions in that one simple request, tim. It jolted me.
The poem was a beautifully phrased request.

Nice work!

It seems as if the reconnecting worked, nicely done. And I agree, it would be a great duet.

Wow... tears... it's beautiful, tim ... xoxoxo

You brought me smile
and you brought these tears.
A simple song of love
proved as great as pure.

You had wrote it with such intense it came as perfect as your love for him. And I would like to see both of you do Salsa on this...

~Emi.

Perfect and beautiful... Yeah, that it...

It's lovely and strikes very near as it's not yet a fortnight since my mum's love went beyond ...

On 08/24/2016 04:00 AM, dughlas said:

It's lovely and strikes very near as it's not yet a fortnight since my mum's love went beyond ...

aww, yes I'm sorry dugh. I hope you are all bearing up especially your mum. When my mum died i wanted anything from her that she'd written... diary, letters anything, but daddy made sure there wasnt. I encourage people to leave their family something.. hugs my friend xoxxo

On 08/24/2016 01:30 AM, Defiance19 said:

Perfect and beautiful... Yeah, that it...

thanks def .. xoxox i appreciate it

On 08/23/2016 03:34 PM, Emi GS said:

You brought me smile

and you brought these tears.

A simple song of love

proved as great as pure.

 

You had wrote it with such intense it came as perfect as your love for him. And I would like to see both of you do Salsa on this...

 

~Emi.

Thanks Emi for the lovely review. You like would not like to see Michael and me dancing the salsa. Trust me.

thanks again tim

xoxo

On 08/23/2016 11:41 AM, Headstall said:

Wow... tears... it's beautiful, tim ... xoxoxo

Awww Gary.. thank you my friend.. I appreciate it

xxoxo

On 08/23/2016 11:13 AM, Bucket1 said:

It seems as if the reconnecting worked, nicely done. And I agree, it would be a great duet.

Things are good. Mmm no duets around here .. no

thanks b xoxo

On 08/23/2016 11:10 AM, skinnydragon said:

won't you write a song for me

 

Such powerful emotions in that one simple request, tim. It jolted me.

The poem was a beautifully phrased request.

 

Nice work!

Hey skinnyd.. thank you my friend. I appreciate it. I'll try not to jolt you too much in the future...

tim xoxo

On 08/23/2016 10:54 AM, Reader1810 said:

Hey tim

I do see a song in the future. It will be no less true than words set to music, but it will be in disguise - befitting the songwriter.

As always, nicely done!

Awww thank you Reader ... i appreciate it. This was a hard one to write.. made me rather teary..

tim xoxo

On 08/23/2016 10:13 AM, Parker Owens said:

Echo AC's comment. I definitely hear a duet. And it is such a beautiful song, it is worth hearing over and over again. Thank you Tim, for writing something that at needed to be sung, said, and remembered.

Awww thank you so much Parker...Having been so close for so long, Mike and I were a bit surprised by the way things had changed. So we decided that we wouldn't let it happen again.

Thanks for reading this...

tim xoxxoo

On 08/23/2016 10:09 AM, AC Benus said:

It's a lovely song, Tim. Meant to be a duet...

Thanks AC. It was pretty emotional for to write this, but it felt right. Thanks for your comments...and support.

tim xoxoxo

I do adore your love poems to Mike. They always make me smile for the rest of the day.

On 08/30/2016 01:57 AM, LitLover said:

I do adore your love poems to Mike. They always make me smile for the rest of the day.

Thanks LL.. I'm glad they do...

thanks for reading and for your support!!