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Timmy's Journal - 31. Untitled Poem

Parker Owens, a good friend, sent me a line, Oh love that rides the cresting wave, and said here, write a poem using this line and I will too. Well here is mine.. it's not a contest, just a little challenge for fun. I haven't seen his yet but I'm sure it will be wonderful like all his poetry! No title yet...

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Oh love that rides the cresting wave

Like surfers carve the sea

Balance well, my heart to save

It’s your love that rescued me

 

Alone I was — solitary

Among a thousand stars

You touched my soul, set me free

The universe was ours

 

And then it died; our love ran foul

No choice but you should go

Turned away; pulled up my cowl

My soul – shot with your arrow

 

No more will your voice sing to me

I cannot be more your slave

Leave me, go! Hear my plea

Oh love that rides the cresting wave

Thanks Parker. I ignored this for a few days but thought last night.. get it done.
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On 03/21/2016 08:07 AM, Headstall said:

Good job on Parker's prompt... some interesting phrasing and rhyming... we don't know the whys, and we don't have to, but you tell a tale of love gone wrong... it has an old world quality because of some of the word choice, and I liked that... cheers... Gary...

Thanks Gary. It was fun and the differences in what we both wrote was interesting..

 

Thanks again for your support.

 

tim

On 03/21/2016 10:54 AM, Parker Owens said:

You know I liked this - had me going in two different directions emotionally. Ecstatic, elated, hurt, sad, angry...all it took was four stanzas. Really showed off your talents, here Tim! Loved the image of ...turned up my cowl...reminded me of trying vainly to shut out the storms of life and love.

Yes I know Parker. Thanks my friend for your comments. I really wasnt going to bother writing this, cuz I've been busy but I cant say no too well.. so.. it was fun and interesting how diff our two poems turned out!!

 

tim xo

On 03/21/2016 05:07 PM, Emi GS said:

Sad I was, but its Love.

We desire and dive,

but some times we cripple

and would fall.

The hurt make us wail and cry.

 

This is what your poem did to me. Just woken up my desire to write this. Very beautiful poem Tim. You have done great job on it... :)

 

~Emi.

Love your poetic comment!! Brilliant Emi. Thank you so much for reading this.. it means a lot to me.

 

tim xo

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