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Timmy's Journal - 35. Black Bear's Picnic

WARNING: Silly Poem Ahead. Read at your own risk.

Things have not been going well for me. Got fed up with everything yesterday and wrote a silly poem trying to get myself out of the funk I was getting into.

Black Bear's Picnic

Two black bears in town for lunch,
sat watching as they munched.

The townsfolk their invite, did eschew
“That’s not polite,” said Mary to Lou.

The bears ate doughnuts in the square,
while worried residents did declare;

Bears shouldn’t eat doughnuts in town it’s true,
what’s gonna happen to me and you?

An idea started by one bright man,
“Go on home as quick as you can.

Pack up the food from your larder,
they’ll be so full, walking will be harder.”

As more food was left for the bears,
Mary said, “What’s with all this food of theirs?”

Lou grinned and selected a nice ripe pear,
as usual he just didn’t care.

Two black bears full as you please,
waddled off home with full tummies.

Hope that gave you a smile.
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Parker Owens

Yes, that made me smile broadly. Bears with a new center of gravity...but now they'll have to go to the bear gym!

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On 05/19/2016 03:30 AM, Parker Owens said:

Yes, that made me smile broadly. Bears with a new center of gravity...but now they'll have to go to the bear gym!

Obviously, I'm dreaming about food...lol. Thanks Parker glad it made you smile. Your comments make me think of those,.. what are they.. Weebles..lol.

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Headstall

Amusing, tim... I pictured someone telling theirs kids that story at bedtime... I hope it worked at getting you out of your funk... cheers... Gary...

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Defiance19

Hehe.... Yep smiling... Hope it cleared up some of your funk too.. Now I'm humming Teddy Bear's Picnic... :)

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On 05/19/2016 03:55 AM, Headstall said:

Amusing, tim... I pictured someone telling theirs kids that story at bedtime... I hope it worked at getting you out of your funk... cheers... Gary...

Meh.. I'm hungry and I have to go the dentist and then again next week for major stuff/surgery. Not looking forward to it. But writing always helps... Thanks Gary!!! I appreciate it.

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On 05/19/2016 04:05 AM, Defiance19 said:

Hehe.... Yep smiling... Hope it cleared up some of your funk too.. Now I'm humming Teddy Bear's Picnic... :)

A bit...had another tooth break last night..other side.. Not a happy camper right now. But it'll work out I guess. So I decided to write something silly. Glad it made you smile... !!!

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Carlos Hazday

It did make me smile!
Was I the only one who got excited when I read it was a poem about two bears having lunch? I guess my mind automatically thought of a couple of hairy, beefy studs instead of the Jellystone Park dwellers.

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On 05/19/2016 04:57 AM, Carlos Hazday said:

It did make me smile!

Was I the only one who got excited when I read it was a poem about two bears having lunch? I guess my mind automatically thought of a couple of hairy, beefy studs instead of the Jellystone Park dwellers.

Oh geez! Lmao, you made my day with this comment! I'll write one just for you, C! Thanks for reading!

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On 05/19/2016 06:35 AM, skinnydragon said:

It did!

 

Nice work tim ...I hope it brightened you mood too!

It did Skinny, but Carlos comments made me nearly drop my tablet..lol Thanks for reading this bit of foolishness. I appreciate it.

 

xoxo tim

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dughlas

I'm with Gary it puts me in mind of the silly stories I used to make-up to tell my son at bedtime.

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On 05/19/2016 08:56 AM, dughlas said:

I'm with Gary it puts me in mind of the silly stories I used to make-up to tell my son at bedtime.

Aw that's nice dugh.. I bet you had lots of laffs. When the kids were younger they always had me do Madlibs with them.. we'd be in tears from laffing... thanks dugh for reading this silly thing.

 

tim

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Hey tim
Is it bad that I giggled as soon as I read the "warning"? You know, warnings are supposed to be taken seriously, after all...
I really enjoyed this poem you cobbled together to lighten your mood. I hope it helped your funk take a slow boat to China and leave you some peace. I loved how the townsfolk handled the bears - very clever bunch they are. :D
As always, nicely done tim.

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On 05/19/2016 09:19 AM, Reader1810 said:

Hey tim

Is it bad that I giggled as soon as I read the "warning"? You know, warnings are supposed to be taken seriously, after all...

I really enjoyed this poem you cobbled together to lighten your mood. I hope it helped your funk take a slow boat to China and leave you some peace. I loved how the townsfolk handled the bears - very clever bunch they are. :D

As always, nicely done tim.

No Reader, its great you did. I just felt like writing something funny. Hey! Since I'm miserable it maybe time to have Faris with a toothache! Oh you're brilliant Reader! Thanks for your comments and for having fun with this!

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Bucket1

A wonderful piece of whimsy :)
I am torn between Carlos and Gary's interpretation. I could imagine it being in one of those kids books about having two dads

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