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Timmy's Journal - 13. For This Remembrance Day

A new poem for Remembrance Day, Wednesday November 11, 2015

Remember


You joined up to serve your country,
never expecting that you’d die.
You fought bravely with your fellows
while at home your mother cried.
Now is the time of remembrance
of crosses white and poppies, red.
And grateful for your sacrifice, we
stand in thanks, our tears we shed.
We listen to the lone trumpet blow
for you, the men we’ll never know.

Lest We Forget
Copyright © 2017 Mikiesboy; All Rights Reserved.
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In many countries around the world, it is Remembrance Day, here in the US it is Veterans Day, and in others it goes by even more names besides.
However, they are each one and the same. November 11, is a time to remember and honor our veterans, both past and present. So Tim, thank you so much for capturing this day so beautifully :hug:

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Hey Tim
Thank you for putting into words what so many wish to say, but lack the words to do so.
Very eloquently stated.
Nicely done. :hug:

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This is a beautiful verse. You capture the need to remember those who served and what they died for. I will keep this one for Rememberance day

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Wow, I didn't know you could write things like this. And it was from your heart, which makes it even more beautiful.

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On 11/09/2015 01:49 PM, Drew Espinosa said:

In many countries around the world, it is Remembrance Day, here in the US it is Veterans Day, and in others it goes by even more names besides.

However, they are each one and the same. November 11, is a time to remember and honor our veterans, both past and present. So Tim, thank you so much for capturing this day so beautifully :hug:

Thank you Drew. I really wanted to say something and I only really know about In Flanders Field, guaranteed tears if I hear that. I appreciate your comments and all your support.

 

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On 11/09/2015 01:57 PM, Reader1810 said:

Hey Tim

Thank you for putting into words what so many wish to say, but lack the words to do so.

Very eloquently stated.

Nicely done. :hug:

Hi Reader, Thank you so much. Appreciate your comments and support.

 

tim

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On 11/09/2015 01:58 PM, Parker Owens said:

This is a beautiful verse. You capture the need to remember those who served and what they died for. I will keep this one for Rememberance day

Thank you Parker. I was watching the Services from England on Sunday and I wanted to say something about what these men did. I've also seen docs on tv about id'g bodies and it really touched me. One man had a leather heart with a lock of hair in his pocket. It really got to me, he was in an unmarked mass grave in France, in WW1. We forget they were men, like you and me and more often kids.

 

Thank you so much.

 

tim

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On 11/09/2015 02:10 PM, LitLover said:

I loved this, Tim. It was a beautiful tribute.

Thank you, LL. I appreciate all of your support, all of it. Thank you.

 

tim

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On 11/09/2015 02:10 PM, Defiance19 said:

Thank you Tim

This is a beautiful and poignant tribute to fallen heroes.

May we never forget the sacrifice.

Hi Def. Thank you very much. I wanted to say something about soldiers and sacrifice. I'm glad it worked.

 

tim

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On 11/09/2015 02:27 PM, bignick said:

Wow, I didn't know you could write things like this. And it was from your heart, which makes it even more beautiful.

Hey buddy. Thank you for choosing this to read. Surprise! People keep telling me I'm a good poet... I try. I really appreciate you coming over to read it.

 

tim

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On 11/09/2015 02:36 PM, skinnydragon said:

Thank you Tim,

Very lovely thoughts, beautifully expressed.

Hey SkinnyD, thanks my friend. I appreciate you reading this and all your support.

 

tim

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On 11/09/2015 04:41 PM, WolfM said:

The perfect poem for Remembrance Day!

Thanks WolfM, my friend. I appreciate your comments and support.

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On 11/09/2015 09:47 PM, dughlas said:

Thank you!

Dugh, oh man thanks for coming. I know it's hard and I appreciate it so much.

 

tim

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On 11/10/2015 03:11 AM, Headstall said:

Perfect.

Gary. Thank you so much for that comment. I appreciate it. And I appreciate all of the support and friendship you've shown to me. I never forget it. Thanks .. only 4 more sleeps!!! hehe

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On 11/13/2015 09:56 PM, Bucket1 said:

Nicely done

Thanks Bucket.. means a lot that you stopped by and read them. I appreciate it.

 

tim

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To my mind, this has some of the same tenderness as the WW1 poets, most of whom where Gay, like Wilfred Owen and Siegfried Sassoon. That's pretty amazing, and really touches the heart through something like immediacy – as if you had lived through the events and suffered the loss directly. That feature makes this poem a wonderfully rewarding experience.

 

Thank you for posting it. You are a very fine poet, Tim!

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On 11/15/2015 07:30 AM, AC Benus said:

To my mind, this has some of the same tenderness as the WW1 poets, most of whom where Gay, like Wilfred Owen and Siegfried Sassoon. That's pretty amazing, and really touches the heart through something like immediacy – as if you had lived through the events and suffered the loss directly. That feature makes this poem a wonderfully rewarding experience.

 

Thank you for posting it. You are a very fine poet, Tim!

Thank you AC. Your thoughtful comment means a lot to me. I think I'll find some poems by the poets you mention thank you for sharing their names, AC. And thank you for your on-going support, I can never thank you enough.

 

tim

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Thanks to AC's status update, I saw this. I'm sorry I missed it last year.

 

Tim, this was simply beautiful. You have such a way with words. I'm all cried out.

 

I really need to catch up on your writings.

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