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Timmy's Journal - 43. Couple of Poems

Two .. always good on a Saturday

Yours

You pull him close, his head on your chest

Ask in a whisper: Love me, boy?

Tears glisten brightly as he nods, yes

You tell him I love you; I know what’s best

 

He reaches ‘cross your hard belly

Slim fingers with a gossamer touch

You gently stroke his lithesome back

And kiss his sweet, soft neck

 

Tell him: The first time I saw you, I knew

You’d be my own special love

We’ll be always and forever, together

Until death, when we then have to part

 

But until that day I’ll love you, boy

Cherish and keep you safe

Know you’re mine in everyway

And in our lives and love; rejoice

 

 

You

I think about you everyday

Praying you’ll never go

And when I cry these bitter tears

When darkness covers me

I’m in that place ruled by fear

It’s only me you see

You’re so strong; hold out your hand

I flounder, but grasp it tight

Together, all, we can withstand

Until the world’s again bright

Thanks for reading 'em!!
Copyright © 2017 Mikiesboy; All Rights Reserved.
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mollyhousemouse

Your way with words moves me.
This time first to a smile, and the second, almost to tears.
Thank you, again, for sharing your gifts with us.

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AC Benus

Very solid form. The play and exploration of a theme in this pairing is very subtle and rewarding. I enjoyed them a lot. Thanks for posting them

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LitLover

Both of these poems were beautiful testaments to how much love and support can give you strength. They made me smile, tim. Thank you. :)

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Reader1810
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Hey tim
Beautiful, just beautiful ...the both of them. :hug:
As always, nicely done.

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skinnydragon

Well done, tim.

 

Like two sides of a coin, we have both sides of the love. Very well expressed and interestingly placed.
Quite a pair!

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dughlas

Love is what sustains us and bears us up in times of darkness and fear and too in those times when the light is bright and all the things of this world are well.
It is good to see your words again. You have been quiet little brother.

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Headstall

You made me cry, tim, but I'm not complaining. I've been overemotional lately, but these were beautiful. It started with the first, which was so touching and full of heart, and continued with the second... the reminder of your strength... your resilience... and the love you are blessed with... thanks for these... cheers... Gary xo

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Mikiesboy
On 08/07/2016 08:08 AM, mollyhousemouse said:

Your way with words moves me.

This time first to a smile, and the second, almost to tears.

Thank you, again, for sharing your gifts with us.

Thank you for that lovely compliment, molly. I don’t think there can be a greater thing than that. Thank you for reading and for commenting. I appreciate it very much.

tim xo

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Mikiesboy
On 08/07/2016 08:30 AM, AC Benus said:

Very solid form. The play and exploration of a theme in this pairing is very subtle and rewarding. I enjoyed them a lot. Thanks for posting them

Thank you very much AC. I kinda made up my own rules for ‘You’, doesn’t all rhyme. But it worked in my head. And well, rules are made to be broken…

tim xo

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On 08/07/2016 08:44 AM, LitLover said:

Both of these poems were beautiful testaments to how much love and support can give you strength. They made me smile, tim. Thank you. :)

I’m glad they made you smile, Lit. I appreciate you reading them. And you’re right, love does give us strength. Thanks for taking the time to read these. I appreciate it.

tim xo

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Mikiesboy
On 08/07/2016 08:51 AM, Reader1810 said:

Hey tim

Beautiful, just beautiful ...the both of them. :hug:

As always, nicely done.

Thank you Reader. I’m glad you enjoyed them! I appreciate you reading them !!

tim xo

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Mikiesboy
On 08/07/2016 09:12 AM, skinnydragon said:

Well done, tim.

 

Like two sides of a coin, we have both sides of the love. Very well expressed and interestingly placed.

Quite a pair!

Hey skinny!. Thank you for reading these. They are told from two points of view. I’m glad you think they worked. Appreciate your comments.

tim xo

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On 08/07/2016 11:15 AM, dughlas said:

Love is what sustains us and bears us up in times of darkness and fear and too in those times when the light is bright and all the things of this world are well.

It is good to see your words again. You have been quiet little brother.

Thank you, dugh. We aren’t much without love in our lives. I think we need it, like water and air. I have been quiet, there was no poetry in me for some time. I just let it be, I can’t make it be there. There is strength in patience and quietness, so I just waited. Thank you so much your insight, I appreciate you reading these, dugh.

tim xo

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On 08/07/2016 11:59 AM, Headstall said:

You made me cry, tim, but I'm not complaining. I've been overemotional lately, but these were beautiful. It started with the first, which was so touching and full of heart, and continued with the second... the reminder of your strength... your resilience... and the love you are blessed with... thanks for these... cheers... Gary xo

Aw Gary! Well you have reason to be emotional, don’t blame you at all. I’m glad you liked these Gary. I am blessed with the love of a wonderful man. He is devoted to me and us, and it never ceases amaze me. Thank for reading and for your insight, I appreciate it Gary.

tim xo

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Emi GS

Two different emotions, two different people. Their main motivation and strength is Love. Their fear and darkness is the thought of loosing that Love. Love is more than air and water sometimes. You have shown it well.

 

I loved those too poems. Really solid as Ben said. Thank you for sharing.

 

~Emi GS.

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Parker Owens

Each of these is a gem. Yours is a blessing to us who read it; to know there is such tenderness and love in the world makes all of it warmer and more deeply colorful. You both hurts and strengthens, for it is hard to experience another man's pain, and yet heartening to know the hope and enduring love that shines through. Thank you for sharing these.

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Defiance19

These are all kinds of wonderful and I really liked them. Love is so much more than an emotion isn't it...

 

Well done tim...

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Mikiesboy
On 08/08/2016 05:40 PM, Emi GS said:

Two different emotions, two different people. Their main motivation and strength is Love. Their fear and darkness is the thought of loosing that Love. Love is more than air and water sometimes. You have shown it well.

 

I loved those too poems. Really solid as Ben said. Thank you for sharing.

 

~Emi GS.

Emi thank you for reading these. You’re right love can be all encompassing sometimes. I appreciate your insightful review!!

Thanks again, tim xxoo

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Mikiesboy
On 08/08/2016 10:17 PM, Parker Owens said:

Each of these is a gem. Yours is a blessing to us who read it; to know there is such tenderness and love in the world makes all of it warmer and more deeply colorful. You both hurts and strengthens, for it is hard to experience another man's pain, and yet heartening to know the hope and enduring love that shines through. Thank you for sharing these.

Thank you Parker. I’m glad these spoke to you. To me they were a sort of conversation between two people. I always like to hear what you and everyone thinks. Thanks again.

tim xoxo

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On 08/09/2016 06:06 AM, Defiance19 said:

These are all kinds of wonderful and I really liked them. Love is so much more than an emotion isn't it...

 

Well done tim...

I guess love is a lot of things. Enough is written about it, songs, poems, stories, it's something we all long for anc cherish... Thanks for reading these Def .. i've missed you by the way .. tim xoxo

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MichaelS36

boy, those words in the poem are true. ..I will love you until the end. Never doubt it. Beautiful,  both of them. xoxo 

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Mikiesboy
7 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

boy, those words in the poem are true. ..I will love you until the end. Never doubt it. Beautiful,  both of them. xoxo 

i know.. love you, too xoxox

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