NaPoWriMo - 2017 - 8. April 8 : Emi, A Man of Mistakes

Oh boy, my poem of mistakes could go on for pages and pages. And more pages. Yours are definitely relatable, Emi! In particular, being harsh and repugnant about our own selves. It's an easy pattern to fall into. We are our own worst critics. Thanks for sharing. Cheers - Mac 

Hi Emi,

you poem holds many emotions. And I think there are really a lot of things everyone of us felt. But how nice it is, that we are nonconforming creatures. That makes us all sharing something, dosen`t it? Don`t be too hard on yourself, in your life. We have all the time we need, to become what we can be.

Hugs Lyssa

There are some that say we are on Earth as part of our education, so we can earn our place at God's side. I don't believe that myself, but it's interesting. If it were true, then this is the time and place to make mistakes and learn from them. Don't be too hard on yourself, but do as you do, Emi. You are honest, but the hardest person to be honest with is ourselves. Love yourself enough to be, but i think you already are. Very insightful poem, Emi. Very nice.  xo 

That was beautiful, Emi. I think everyone could relate to much, if not all, of your mistakes. I, personally, relate to all of them!

As Mac, Lyssa, and Tim said, don't be so hard on yourself. We are our own worst critics. It's so true.

We're all works in progress, and your poem reminds us to keep that in mind. Always. Well said.  

On 09/04/2017 at 1:22 AM, MacGreg said:

Oh boy, my poem of mistakes could go on for pages and pages. And more pages. Yours are definitely relatable, Emi! In particular, being harsh and repugnant about our own selves. It's an easy pattern to fall into. We are our own worst critics. Thanks for sharing. Cheers - Mac 

I know no human in this world perfect. Everyone do mistakes. But confessing them is like understanding yourself to the core. As well as self loathing is common in everyone. I am glad I took this prompt. And I totally agree that we are our worst critics. I am glad to share these feelings and all. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it. 

~Emi. 

On 09/04/2017 at 3:04 AM, Lyssa said:

Hi Emi,

you poem holds many emotions. And I think there are really a lot of things everyone of us felt. But how nice it is, that we are nonconforming creatures. That makes us all sharing something, dosen`t it? Don`t be too hard on yourself, in your life. We have all the time we need, to become what we can be.

Hugs Lyssa

Thanks Lyssa, for supporting me and all. I can understand about being nonconforming creatures. That really makes us special and bond us here on GA. I am glad I found this site and you guys. Love you all. And about time, I hope for that too. Thanks for reading and reviewing my work Lyssa. I really appreciate it. 

~Emi. 

On 09/04/2017 at 5:48 AM, Mikiesboy said:

There are some that say we are on Earth as part of our education, so we can earn our place at God's side. I don't believe that myself, but it's interesting. If it were true, then this is the time and place to make mistakes and learn from them. Don't be too hard on yourself, but do as you do, Emi. You are honest, but the hardest person to be honest with is ourselves. Love yourself enough to be, but i think you already are. Very insightful poem, Emi. Very nice.  xo 

I do believe in this God's play and all. And I totally agree with you about learning from the mistakes. I am glad I got you guys to make me realise how important I am to me. So don't worry. And thank you so much for reading and reviewing for my poem. I appreciate it. 

~Emi. 

On 14/04/2017 at 8:04 AM, Lisa said:

That was beautiful, Emi. I think everyone could relate to much, if not all, of your mistakes. I, personally, relate to all of them!

 

As Mac, Lyssa, and Tim said, don't be so hard on yourself. We are our own worst critics. It's so true.

I totally agree with you on that Lisa. We do think of ourselves low. But I am glad I had you guys to look into myself. And I am glad you liked reading this poem. I really appreciate your efforts to read and review for my work. Thank you for the review. 

~Emi. 

On 14/04/2017 at 5:44 PM, Valkyrie said:

I can't say it much better than Mac, Lyssa, and tim said.  We all make mistakes.  It's how we deal with them that matters.

Thanks for the great tip Val. And thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it. 

~Emi. 

On 17/04/2017 at 11:48 PM, AC Benus said:

We're all works in progress, and your poem reminds us to keep that in mind. Always. Well said.  

I am glad you think like that about my poem. Thank you for the review and compliments that made me blush.  

~Emi.