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Only Prompts - 25. A Trip to the Dog Park

Prompt 836 - Creative

Tag - List of Words

Use the following words in a story - an airline ticket, a silk robe, a blue suitcase, a corgi, and a cursed gold coin.

A Trip to the Dog Park

 

“Mallow!” I hollered. I ran through the long grass.

It was 6 a.m. It was not raining as had been forecast, thankfully.

“Come back here you short, malcontent …” Damn. I stopped. I was panting harder than my perpetually grinning Pembroke Welsh Corgi.

Mallow, heedless of me, ran on through the dog park, while I gasped. “I know what you’re doing!” I could see his large bat-like ears through the longish grass as he made a large circle around me. The little bastard wanted to get behind me to nip my heels and get me moving. The herding instinct had always been strong in Mallow.

“D’ya hear me? I know!”

I waited. Sure enough, the twenty-six-pound, light gold and white creature was behind me. He darted forward to nip at my well-scarred heels.

Dancing away from my faithful companion I cursed him. “Shit. Stop it.” Laughing, I turned around and stopped. Mallow ran into me, spun and stood stock still.

“You are, Daniel McBatten.”

It wasn’t a question. I hadn’t seen this woman enter the park. There wasn’t another dog, either.

I answered her. “I am. How … who’re you?”

“It doesn’t matter who I am.” She opened a black patent leather handbag. It was the kind with the little latch. It sort of thunked when she closed it. In her white-gloved hand she held an envelope. It was thick. She held it out. “This is for you.”

Hesitant, I didn’t reach for it. “What … what is this? What do you want?”

Beside me, Mallow was quiet and watchful. He leaned against my leg.

“I am the messenger.” She waggled the envelope. “Take it. I understand this contains the answers.”

Finally, I reached for the white package. The woman smiled grimly and then … fled.

I bent and pet Mallow’s large ears. “Come on. Let’s see what’s in here.” My little dog followed me to a nearby bench.

Before tearing it open, I examined what I held. It was a business sized, cheap envelope, there was nothing written on it that I could see. I sniffed it, and then held it out for Mallow to inspect with his smart nose. Neither of us could smell anything worthwhile, it seemed.

The flap came away easily when I slid my finger under it. I lifted it carefully.

“Wow, Mallow. This is …” I examined the contents—money. The bills were colourful; pink, green and gold. I removed a golden bill. “Turkish lira? What the fu—” My fingers replaced the cash and pulled out something else. It was folded so I unfolded it. “An airline ticket … huh, to Turkey.”

Mallow gazed up at me.

“What the hell do I want to go to Turkey for?” I scratched Mallow between his ears. “Let’s go home, boy. I need to go through this properly.”

 

Once back in our comfortable house, I fed Mallow, and made coffee for myself. I took a steaming mug of the black brew and the envelope to my small office.

I settled at my oak desk, and sipped my coffee before pulling on a pair of latex gloves. Sort of late, Dan. Yes, but, well, better late than never. Not if there’s a toxin lurking. There isn’t ... I hope.

The gloves stayed on anyway. I stacked the money on one side, then the airline ticket, there was also a letter, which I opened carefully. The script was very sharply right leaning and small. I could barely read ….

Just at that moment Arthur stuck his head around the door. “Hey handsome, I … Holy shit, Danny!”

“Huh?” I looked up at my partner. I may have licked my lips a little.

He was dressed in his black silk robe. It did little to cover his gorgeously hanging junk or his sweet backside. He knew I loved it.

“Is that money?” He was reaching for it when I slapped him.

“Yes, don’t touch it.” I regretted my harshness. “Look, sorry. It’s weird and I don’t want you to get hurt.”

Artie blinked at me for a second. “Okay. So, what is it? Where’d it come from?”

“Dog park. Some woman … there’s this letter. The writing is so awful, I’m not sure it’s even English.”

“No? Let me look.” Artie walked around the desk.

I could smell his maleness and right then none of this mattered. I reached out to stroke his thigh.

“Daniel, control yourself.” He bent over intrigued by the letter. He squinted. “Don’t you have a magnifying glass?”

“Um …” I pulled open the drawer on the top right and groped. “Yes … somewhere. Here!” I handed it to him.

He grinned at me and held the instrument over the page. “It’s Turkish, very tiny.”

“You sure?”

Still bent over, hands on the desk, he twisted to look at me, a wry grin sat on his lips. “No … that’s why I only have a PhD in languages.”

“No need to be a smart ass.” I laughed. He was a very talented linguist. “Can you read it? Tell me what it says?”

Arthur straightened up. “Yeah, I’ll need a bit of time. I’ll start now if you can make breakfast.” He started toward the door. A perfect rounded cheek peeked from under his robe.

“Maybe in an hour.”

“Why? Dan, if I start now …”

I jumped from my chair and pulled him into my arms. We kissed.

“In an hour.” I nibbled his neck and ran my eyes down his sexy form. “That robe is useless.”

Artie snickered. “It is … come on. Let’s go to bed.”

 

Later, in the afternoon, I took Artie coffee. Mallow and I had been out for a walk, while my learned lover translated the words written on the page.

“Found out anything?” I put his mug down on the desk.

Arthur looked up at me, his expression serious. “What have you got on now?”

I considered for a second. “Nothing. I just finished the Harrison thing.” I stared at Artie.

“You need to pack … for us both. Use the blue suitcase … it has more room.”

“Pack? Why? What is going on?”

“Call Marianne and see if she will watch Mallow.”

I raised my voice slightly. “Arthur, tell me what is happening? Where are we going?”

“Turkey, babe. We need to go to Turkey. To find Midas’ golden coins.”

“Are you serious? Is that what the letter says?”

“Yes. You know the original story … as it goes, Dionysus granted Midas the golden touch. However, the letter says there were cursed gold coins … real gold coins.”

I stared at Artie. “Is there anymore?”

“Yes, directions.” Arthur put down his pen. “Are we going?”

I was excited but concerned. “Why has this been sent to us?”

“The letter says our reputation is the main reason. They want fast results. They want it done right. Seems McBatten and Highland are becoming kinda known.” Artie ran a hand over the letter. “It says the last of Midas’ descendants want the coins.”

“This … this is nuts.” I sat in the chair across from Arthur. “We are going to Turkey based only on … on, that?” I flapped a hand at the letter.

Arthur sat back in his chair, stared at me as if I’d grown a second head and said, “What else?”

I knew my boyfriend was right. “I’ll call my sister.”

Mallow lay his head on his paws.

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6 minutes ago, Kitt said:

When has that ever stopped you?

well it hasnt so far, but this might ...

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3 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

Thank you, Kitt.  Oh, i dont know ... this would be a massive project to do properly.

 

3 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

Thanks, Wayne. i've never written a long mystery ... this would take major planning and work. Maybe if i could actually write everyday ... i dont know.

You know if these two start chattering away in your head you're gonna have to give them voice ...

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2 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

Right now @Wayne Gray have a large story we are writing together. Not sure how long that will take us .... A story like this would be isn't easy or simple to write. Thanks though, dugh.

love you you and mum xoxo  and the pup.

Mum sends her love in return the pup just wags his tail.

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23 minutes ago, dughlas said:

 

You know if these two start chattering away in your head you're gonna have to give them voice ...

Well, they just need to be quiet because i have to write this other story. The characters in this deserve it.  Thanks though, dugh xo

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4 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

Thanks, Wayne. i've never written a long mystery ... this would take major planning and work. Maybe if i could actually write everyday ... i dont know.

No worries, tim. If more comes that will be good. If not, you've left us with enough to stir our own imaginations as to what comes next.

I think what we're all saying in one way or another is you have given your readers a very magical (and not in a fantastical sense) tale that captivated our imaginations. You brought Dan, Artie, and even little Mallow alive in such a way that leaves us wanting more because they are interesting and intriguing. 

Whatever comes next is whatever comes next. :) 

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I think I read someone else’s take on this prompt last week. I certainly remember the Corgi because I remember mentioning that I would have gone with the toy cars that were oversized compared with my younger brother’s and my shared collection of Matchboxes and Hot Wheels in the late Sixties and early Seventies. (We weren’t rough with our toys, so when we gave them away when we moved from San Diego, they were still in very good condition.)

Several of my favorite authors write Prompts or Anthology entries that scream out for expansion and sequels. It’s as if there’s a full novel-length story and you’re just giving us the first chapter. I get the feeling you’re all aware of more of their stories than you can squeeze into a short story format…

I cannot imagine being as talented as you clearly are!

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7 hours ago, droughtquake said:

I think I read someone else’s take on this prompt last week. I certainly remember the Corgi because I remember mentioning that I would have gone with the toy cars that were oversized compared with my younger brother’s and my shared collection of Matchboxes and Hot Wheels in the late Sixties and early Seventies. (We weren’t rough with our toys, so when we gave them away when we moved from San Diego, they were still in very good condition.)

Several of my favorite authors write Prompts or Anthology entries that scream out for expansion and sequels. It’s as if there’s a full novel-length story and you’re just giving us the first chapter. I get the feeling you’re all aware of more of their stories than you can squeeze into a short story format…

I cannot imagine being as talented as you clearly are!

i asked @Wayne Gray to read the first edition of this prompt for me. We discussed that this could be much more a novella at the very least. I had to research what is written here, not for a long time and frankly i was very lucky about what i came across. In order to make such a story right, i would need hours and hours of research. i would have to learn enough about Turkey, Dionysus, Midas, and Phrygia to make it real and believable. Since there were no cursed coins, i would have to make that up, which is fine but again, it would have to fit.

And planning, mysteries need much planning, an outline certainly, character building, scene mapping ... it could be a great project. It would take a year minimum.  Changes took 13 months to research and write .. this would be much longer i think.   It could be less if i didnt have to work. But i do work fulltime and that, home and Husband, all reduce the time i have to write.

So yes, most of us are likely aware of what could be. Short stories are just that... they have a beginning, middle/climax, end ... they are not just cut down longer pieces. This story would not fit the short story format i don't think, not without a lot of gaps.

We all have our own talents ... and should celebrate each others. xo

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Well, you’re not going to leave us hanging over the cliff by our fingertips, are you?  C’mon!  Get those gray cells charging and get the story going!  What a great start!

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1 hour ago, Mikiesboy said:

Short stories are just that... they have a beginning, middle/climax, end ... they are not just cut down longer pieces. This story would not fit the short story format i don't think, not without a lot of gaps.

I wasn’t suggesting that you are cutting down a larger piece. It’s more like you’re giving us just a glimpse of what your characters are experiencing. A bit like the grand promise of Star Wars: A New Hope (before the limitations of George Lucas’ storytelling abilities became apparent with the first Trilogy) or the glorious adventure in Raiders of the Lost Arc (before George tried to milk the franchise one too many times).

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Just now, droughtquake said:

I wasn’t suggesting that you are cutting down a larger piece. It’s more like you’re giving us just a glimpse of what your characters are experiencing. A bit like the grand promise of Star Wars: A New Hope (before the limitations of George Lucas’ storytelling abilities became apparent with the first Trilogy) or the glorious adventure in Raiders of the Lost Arc (before George tried to milk the franchise one too many times).

oh, i know you weren't.. just talking about things that's all.  but to me prompts are just short pieces ... however i've written lots of things from short beginnings.. The Searcher, Changes and After the Past all come from first chapters i wrote years before they were written into longer pieces.  i think, somehow they write themselves when i'm not trying to.  They were chapters i liked but at the time i wrote them, there was nothing more. So i put them in a folder and every once in a while i'd read them. Then one day ... the story was ready.  Maybe some research was needed, but the story was there.

Will that happen here? i dont know.  Maybe.  But it's not ready now ... not yet.

nice to have you back xoxo

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23 minutes ago, Clancy59 said:

Well, you’re not going to leave us hanging over the cliff by our fingertips, are you?  C’mon!  Get those gray cells charging and get the story going!  What a great start!

i'm glad you enjoyed it ... prompts are short pieces, it's possible this might be more at some point as i explained in other comments.  I appreciate your comments and time. Thank you.

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10 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

nice to have you back xoxo

I have mixed feelings, but you are one of the positive reasons I return.
;–)

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4 minutes ago, droughtquake said:

I have mixed feelings, but you are one of the positive reasons I return.
;–)

i love you too.  i enjoy your comments and thoughts. i like to hear what you have to say.

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9 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

i love you too.  i enjoy your comments and thoughts. i like to hear what you have to say.

That sentiment is clearly not universal…
;–)

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7 minutes ago, droughtquake said:

That sentiment is clearly not universal…
;–)

That's their issue, not yours. i am certainly not liked by all, and well, that's how it is. And that's okay.

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This is a great set up and use of the prompts! For me, it needs a bit more to feel finished. Often when I read a short story, I have a feeling for what happens to the characters after the story ends. This time I don't. I think I need a couple more hints. You know I always enjoy what you write... That is a true statement and a big hint! 😷🧡😁

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2 hours ago, JeffreyL said:

This is a great set up and use of the prompts! For me, it needs a bit more to feel finished. Often when I read a short story, I have a feeling for what happens to the characters after the story ends. This time I don't. I think I need a couple more hints. You know I always enjoy what you write... That is a true statement and a big hint! 😷🧡😁

Thanks. Yeah, i enjoy prompts but sometimes they lead to THINGS. They stir things up and make a mess. This one did. And this one would need so so much work and research to do right. I draw the line at going to Turkey myself. :)  It is sitting on the very very far right back burner.

no promises, cuz right now things are just .. yeah.

thanks for reading, your support and comments, Jeffrey. i hope you are well xo

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