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Walls 6. C. J. Boomers, Gen Xers, & Millenials

   (9 reviews)
Genres: General Fiction
Sub-genres: Coming of Age

The adventure continues. CJ, his family, and friends return for the last two years at School Without Walls High School.

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Names, characters, places, and incidents are products of the author's imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual events, locales, or persons, living or dead, is coincidental.
C. A. Hazday

Story Recommendations (14 members)

  • Action Packed 12
  • Addictive/Pacing 12
  • Characters 14
  • Chills 1
  • Cliffhanger 4
  • Compelling 9
  • Feel-Good 10
  • Humor 7
  • Smoldering 1
  • Tearjerker 3
  • Unique 10
  • World Building 9

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JACC

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6 hours ago, Carlos Hazday said:

 

Thank you! I keep trying to improve and hopefully it's something readers can see. Stick around, much more's on the way.

I can't speak for others, but I can say I DO love your storytelling, the stories and have to admit CJ, the squad and the elite eight, nine or whatever are quietly but surely becoming part of my family! Thank you, Carlos

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3 hours ago, JACC said:

I can't speak for others, but I can say I DO love your storytelling, the stories and have to admit CJ, the squad and the elite eight, nine or whatever are quietly but surely becoming part of my family! Thank you, Caros

 

Then welcome to the family! For I sure as heck seem to think of most of the characters that way. Yesterday, CJ and Cesar had a long detailed conversation about finances in my head. I was doing chores and realized I was rehearsing a possible scene. It won't make it into the story. Too long and too much detail of how some of the investments work. But a line or two will end up as a summary. I realized I've been doing it a lot.

 

I'll stop at the end of a scene and then play with the next one in my mind, often with actual dialogue, Sometimes I discard it, sometimes I run to get one of my pads and write down a summary. No matter what, they are a part of my life now.

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1 minute ago, Reader1810 said:

Carlos, you do make me laugh. 

Have you forgotten, you're the writer and we, the faithful, are readers? :P 

 

I can't very well write a review on my own story! The review feature's activated when the story's marked complete (I guess.) I recently wrote one and it was good to point out good and not so good things. The author wrote me a nice reply, than goodness he wasn't one of those who can't handle negative comments.

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@straightgayguy27

 

Thanks for the praise, bud. I love how you and others followed me over to GA from Nifty.

 

Georgetown is in the process of being written but I have no posting time table right now. I won't start posting until enough chapters are edited to ensure no interruptions in publishing, and the process hasn't begun.

 

I'm leaving town on a motorcycle trip tomorrow and will be back home in 10-14 days (it all depends on how interesting I find the roads) When I get back, I'll approach Mann Ramblings and try to start him editing (keep your fingers crossed he has the time.

 

In the meantime, I'll try to post another scene to the discussion thread sometime soon. And whenever I have an estimate I'll share a date. Hang in there, the story's not abandoned and will return as soon as possible.

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