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Ok, this chapter really had me LOL’ing. Stranger Danger! Omg, Miguel should win an an academy award! Hysterical! Thank you, @Topher Lydon; we needed a little comic relief. 😆

Wait, what????? That’s the end of the story????? What happens to Adam? What happens to Ross? What happens to his ignorant father??? Wait, never mind; I don’t give a shit about his asinine father. Seriously, though, that’s the end of the story?????

I love this story already! I love how you put in some pop culture naming names & movies. And mentioning shipping & how straight women will love this movie — it’s just perfect! Oh, one thing: it’s Timothee w/the accent over one of the ‘e’s. Ok, on to chapter two. ❤️

Jason, I’m so sorry to hear about your ankle surgery. Foot, knee, & leg surgeries are very painful. I’m wishing you an easy recovery & not a lot of pain during pt. 🙏🤞❤️

@weinerdog, is he working on Tyler’s Dilemma? 🙏🤞

I ditto @Kileoli: where’s the next chapter?? I finally caught up, & I’m waiting with bated breath to see what happens next. What an excellent & suspenseful chapter, Jason! 😀

Although, I’ve always wanted to go to Hershey Park. 😀

You have me hooked again, Jason. This is another hella-awesome story you wrote! 😀

Hey, what’s wrong with Connecticut? I happen to live in CT. 🤣

I KNEW it!!! Damn that boy!

Oh, that’s awesome about your thread; I’ll have to check it out! I’m also so glad you’ll be working on the next part of Tyler’s Dilemma. I love that story, also! OK, I will try to wait patiently for the next chapter. I’ve been binge-reading it till I got to the latest chapter tonight. I kept refreshing the page hoping I would get a surprise & there’d be another chapter posted. 😀 I would also love to read about your other ending that you’ve written. And as far as who I think whacked Five — I think it was Ethan. I just don’t trust him at all. It seemed like something was off with him when Percy baby was talking to him, trying to let him down gently. I actually thought he was the one who took Percy’s undies from the hot tub area that day.

Jason! I need my Percy/Five fix!! It’s been almost a month since you last posted; I hope everything’s OK.

Jon! Hey, I hope everything is OK with you. It’s exactly two years to the day since you’ve updated this hella awesome story. I’m just checking in to see how you’re doing. Hoping you & your family have a wonderful New Year! ❤️🎊🎉🍾🥳

Wow. What an amazing story, @CasualWanderer82. I do agree with @austinbiguy; I felt sadness at the end. I really thought the last chapter would have Jackson, Cash, and Blake living together, but I get it now. Jackson and Daisy knew Blake could never settle down in one town, and I got chills in the last chapter when Blake asked Cash about Jackson not really coming for him. Jackson just made it seem like he was coming for him. I could also feel Jackson and Blake’s sadness during their Sunday call. I like to think that Cash is making the roof big enough for the three of them at some point in time, like @The Donling said. Where someday they can all live together. One of your commenters pointed out how there were so many metaphors and similes in the story; I also saw a lot of personification. I must say, @CasualWanderer82, I reread sentences multiple times because I just loved the way you painted such a great picture of rooms holding their breath and doors breathing and the air just shifting when, in the earlier chapters, Blake would show up at their rodeo in town. There was one line in particular that I read quite a few times because I thought it was just so beautiful. I’ll have to scour through the chapters to find it. Thank you for sharing your incredible talent, @CasualWanderer82. This is definitely one of those stories that touches your heart, and you think about it long after you’ve finished reading.

Thanks, Myr! I’ll give it a shot!