I knew there were more than one song to sing inside you. Great! XO A.

Controlling the interactions with a look, a touch, a simple command. Words are hardly necessary. You own the moment. You demonstrate how the passage of time is important, for both of you. And with it, your boy's patience, concentration, compliance. You've written a compelling piece, Mike. Thanks.

On ‎7‎/‎16‎/‎2017 at 10:36 PM, mogwhy said:

wow. i've read 3 love poems today (JIMHO) and all were different in flavor but all left me saying wow

Thank you moggy. I'll take wow, anytime. 

On ‎7‎/‎16‎/‎2017 at 10:36 PM, Mikiesboy said:

Wonderful, Michael, Sir

Thank you, boy.

On ‎7‎/‎17‎/‎2017 at 1:36 AM, Lyssa said:

I knew there were more than one song to sing inside you. Great! XO A.

Perhaps, but you do not want me to sing! Thank you, A xo

On ‎7‎/‎17‎/‎2017 at 2:37 AM, BlindAmbition said:

The intricate dance of power, control, desire, release and ultimate completeness of two souls. A need and feeling beyond anything.

thank you, my boy. it is a dance of sorts - a most satisfying one. 

On ‎7‎/‎17‎/‎2017 at 3:29 AM, Caz Pedroso said:

Very well written

Thank you very much Caz. 

On ‎7‎/‎17‎/‎2017 at 6:23 AM, Kitt said:

An insight to the D/s dynamic. Lovely work.

Thank you very much Kitt. It's interesting to write it. 

On ‎7‎/‎17‎/‎2017 at 8:21 AM, clochette said:

Great writing, very intense and powerful.

I appreciate that very much, clochette. 

On ‎7‎/‎17‎/‎2017 at 8:47 AM, Defiance19 said:

So, maybe a poet yet?  This was very well expressed Mike. Well done. 

Lol, Def. I am not so sure about that. But on this topic, I feel somewhat inspired. Thank you. 

On ‎7‎/‎17‎/‎2017 at 0:45 PM, Reader1810 said:

Mike, your words bring this scene to life with perfect clarity. 

Nicely done.  

 

Reader, thank you very much !

On ‎7‎/‎17‎/‎2017 at 4:34 PM, MacGreg said:

Controlling the interactions with a look, a touch, a simple command. Words are hardly necessary. You own the moment. You demonstrate how the passage of time is important, for both of you. And with it, your boy's patience, concentration, compliance. You've written a compelling piece, Mike. Thanks.

Thank you for your comments, Mac. It's wonderful when you get to that place but, someone or something new is good too!.. 

2 minutes ago, MichaelS36 said:

Thank you for your comments, Mac. It's wonderful when you get to that place but, someone or something new is good too!.. 

This is true!

36 minutes ago, MichaelS36 said:

Perhaps, but you do not want me to sing! Thank you, A xo

Why shouldn`t I? XO A

7 minutes ago, Lyssa said:

Why shouldn`t I? XO A

I'm not a choir boy anymore. LOL 

Just now, MichaelS36 said:

I'm not a choir boy anymore. LOL 

LOL Thought you were more a basso profondo.

1 minute ago, Lyssa said:

LOL Thought you were more a basso profondo.

Yes but very out of tune.