[DomLuka] With Trust 6

[Former Member]

YAY it's up!!!!!!!

 

And again we beat Dom to this

 

Tob

[Meleth of Legolas]

OH, I can't wait for more, but I bet Milo has second thoughts about kissing and gets all wierd again. I love this story!

 

Meleth!

[LittleBuddhaTW]

That had to be the hottest, most erotic kiss scene I have ever read ... WOW!!!

 

EXCELLENT chapter, Dom ... probably the best chapter of the whole story so far.

 

I feel ... I feel ... sated ... *sigh*

[Chaz]

So I just read all of the six chapters in one sitting. These were great my boyfriend was right I am addicted now.

 

Chaz

[Conner]

So I just read all of the six chapters in one sitting. These were great my boyfriend was right I am addicted now.

 

Chaz

 

Six chapters in one sitting! In DomLuka land, we call that an overdose. It's not lethal, but the symptoms can be annoying...well, at least distracting. You better have your bf keep an eye on you over the next 24 hours...just in case.

 

Dom doesn't have have fans. He has addicts. Fans will settle for an autograph. Addicts want a piece of clothing. Given the Jarred 2 story that he's writing with Dan, I think he likes having addicts.

 

Great chapter, Dom. Yes, that kiss was erotic +++. I need a cigarette.

 

Hugs,

Conner

[BoyNeedsTherapy]

AWWWW, I loved it!! I really wanted to give Milo a hug at some points (in a comforting way not the way in which Nels wanted to, lol). But I can definitely empathize with Milo about the birth video, when we watched it in school the girls made the teacher rewind it I swear the only thing worse that seeing it come out was seeing it go back in.

[Xandra Kitee]

I just love it when people's eyes pop out of their head because of your bluntness so I think Nelson is becoming one of my favorite Dom's character for now. I really really am fond of bold natures. ^^

Edited March 13, 2006 by Xandra Kitee

[Caipirinha]

Not to split hairs, but I always thought you won gold medals for Jackassery not Jackassism.

 

Regardless, awesome chapter, and I'm already ravenously awaiting 7 ;-)

[sat8997]

I swear the only thing worse that seeing it come out was seeing it go back in.

 

Sharon

[Innoce Ludo]

It stopped! Wah! Why?!

Great chapter I really loved Nelson and Milo getting closer (sucker for romance) and I love the bluntness. I admire the bluntness, I want to tell people what's on my mind. Alas people would be too shocked, except for my sis, she knows that I'm not the shy, prude person everyone seems to think I am.

 

And... girls asking to rewind the 'birth'-video? o.0 I'm shocked, at least when they showed it in my class (we were 14 or something ), it made me reconsider ever wanting kids... Now my sister is studying to become a midwife and I know more of the dirty details than I ever wished to know. I doubt even more and my sister keeps asking me why. Evil she is.

 

A new chapter See the grin? My day is made!

Thanks

[NaperVic]

I just hoped that I could get Milo housebroken before I invited him in.

 

 

Loved this chapter

[Drewbie]

Love the Chapter Dom. I wonder if Milo will slap Nelson in the next chapter. You always know how to have us begging for more.

[feralCherry]

joygasm!

 

wait...

 

why did it stop??!!

[Briar]

That last scene... killed me. It's a nice change having the story told from the point of view from the one making all the moves.

 

Milo and the birth video. There's more too his reaction than just not being able watching someone give birth. I think it might have to do with his mother? Died in childbirth maybe? We know his Dad is marrying someone new but we haven't (if my memory serves me correctly) heard about Milo's mother. So yes. heh.

 

Joe is so... grr. He is so self-centred and immature. What he did wasn't just an accident as he said. He was trying to be a deliquent when he aimed the car for Milo and Jame to scare them and I think he did intent to destory the crates. His total dismissal of any wrong-doing on his part disgusts me. I think he needs a wake-up call personally.

[TalonRider]

Nelson's definately getting inside Milo's head. I don't think it will long before he's in his heart as well.

 

Loved this chapter Dom.

[LittleBuddhaTW]

I loved how Milo slipped that there was just more than one "pornographic" painting of Nels. That was just too precious. Bless his heart! hehe

 

I also liked how Milo just walked into Nelson's room and started picking things up and looking around ... very out of character for him.

 

And this story is so much more descriptive and detailed than DD, which makes it that much stronger and easier to visualize, IMO, although some of the descriptions (like how Nels described every little detail of the school in an earlier chapter) were a bit much. This particular chapter was just right, though.

[C James]

I loved this chapter!

 

Nelson, though, is certainly VERY forward! I can see why he would rattle a still deeply closeted and insecure guy like Milo.

 

On the other hand, the kiss was Milo's suggestion (sure, he was trying to get Nelson to leave, but... ) So, Milo, I think, is fighting an inner battle. He desperately wants to be "normal" and not gay, and the idea of being attracted to someone scares the heck out of him. But, obviously,

 

On yet another hand, he seemed comfortable talking to Nelson in class, such as mentioning past crushes. I'd have thought that would make him nervous due to the risk of being overheard.

 

I love all the small details in the story, like the smell of Tacos. Very well done (except it made me hungry!).

 

It's a longshot, but I think Milo's housekeeper might know about him. After all, she sent Nelson to Milo's room, both times.

 

And, finally, one thing this story hasn't shown so far is a real antagonist. Hmmm... Maybe it's the goat?

[Guest raz]

I love Milo. God. And Nelson and Milo. That last scene was so hot, but not in a raunchy way. It just makes you feel warm inside, love it. I've said it before, and I'll say it yet again: this is my favorite story. Can't wait for the next installment.

[nifter]

I just sat down tonight and read all 6 chapters. For the last few weeks I refused to read any chapters of WT until DD was over. I don't know about anyone else but the stress of waiting for chapters of two Dom stories would be to much for me to handle. All I can say is i know what I did was right but i can't believe what i was missing

 

Wow what a great chapter no what a great story Dom. I cant wait for the next one.

[rknapp]

Which ones?

 

^^^has wormed its way into my favorite Dom quotes

Edited March 14, 2006 by rknapp

[NickolasJames8]

Ok, so Out With Milo Trust is my favorite story right now, and I have a prediction that no one is probably gonna agree with.......Joe is going to be the one who's there for Nelson when he comes out...Hailey and Caleb are gonna turn against him, but Joe's going to stick by his side. I just have a feeling about it

[GREEN]

Fantastico! I love this chapter. I just want to know how he does it. His stories get better every time they come out or maybe they seem better, I don't know. He's still a grade A+ author. I can honestly say that I love Milo and his uncertainty. I also Love Nelson and his personality. I also love that this story doesn't have a clear direction yet like the second half of DD has. So it can go anywhere from here. I am excited for this story more than his others (TOU is still my fav though, not that his other stories are any less great) because it's so original already.

 

Nelson is great, I love how he's dealing with Milo and I am still waiting to see what the deal is with Juanita. So who here thinks that Joe might be on our team? I don't know I feel like that might be the case.

 

Then there is this whole problem with Haily. I think she might be the whole undoing of Milo and Nelson's soon to be relationship if Jame (assface) doesn't get to them first. Might be Calleb also. Speaking of calleb I think he might be the most hurt, If and when he finds out about Milo and Nelson.

 

GREEN

[Rocketcnj]

Green,....I am wondering if Caleb will be like Brad from TOU....pissed but comes around..

 

I wonder if Joe is on our team too...

 

I also wonder if Juanita is the sister (Milo says she is his family and not the help) of his Mom and I bet she passed away either during child birth of Milo or when he was a small child.

 

I wouldn't doubt if Juanita knows that Milo is Gay....probably as his relative cleans up after him and may have seen the paintings.

 

The kiss was just the romantic most sensual wonderful description of a kiss..it rates up there with Rory and Seth touching from thumbs to fingers and that very tacticle incredibly hot and sensual scene.

 

I have a feeling that deep down inside our poor tortured Milo has a bit of our Quinn inside him but he at least can say things like crushes and he needs someone like our Nels who has a boldness and honesty to him that he doesn't get in his life (I sense that Mr. Trust is some macho guy that has rules and no son of his will be anything but a breeder heir to the throne kind of thing..poor Milo) I think Milo is a sensitive soul...a bit tortured given his background and whatever family history/upbringing to be revealed but also where he will need Nelson to bring him honesty, love and the freedom to be Milo..a talented, pretty smart and down to earth guy.

 

In any event its a great story.......its pure Domaholic bliss..and I have to say it also has the best one liners I have ever read.....Nelson has an incredibly funny dry and sarcastic wit and very charming and disarming..I love his honesty and that he is comfortable in his own skin..way cool:) a basically very good guy with a brain, aggressive sexiness and doesn't take himself too seriously but loyal to his family and friends and very persistent to get his Man:) way cool:)

 

Michael

[AFriendlyFace]

But I can definitely empathize with Milo about the birth video, when we watched it in school the girls made the teacher rewind it I swear the only thing worse that seeing it come out was seeing it go back in.

 

Milo and the birth video. There's more too his reaction than just not being able watching someone give birth. I think it might have to do with his mother? Died in childbirth maybe? We know his Dad is marrying someone new but we haven't (if my memory serves me correctly) heard about Milo's mother.

That's what I thought too.

 

 

Joe is so... grr...

...His total dismissal of any wrong-doing on his part disgusts me. I think he needs a wake-up call personally.

Yep, I just hope his wake up call isn't along the same lines as Aaron's.

 

It's a longshot, but I think Milo's housekeeper might know about him. After all, she sent Nelson to Milo's room, both times.

I thought that too! LOL but we must remember Jaunita isn't the "housekeeper"

 

 

And, finally, one thing this story hasn't shown so far is a real antagonist. Hmmm... Maybe it's the goat?

I think it's going to be Milo's dad, and some combination of their friends. Also probably some sort of internal struggle for Milo.

 

I have a prediction that no one is probably gonna agree with.......Joe is going to be the one who's there for Nelson when he comes out...Hailey and Caleb are gonna turn against him, but Joe's going to stick by his side. I just have a feeling about it

Actually I completely agree, Nick. In fact I made the same prediction myself in With Trust Predictions after the first chapter:

 

-Nelson and Milo eventually end up together.

-Haily and Jame eventually end up together.

-Caleb freaks out when he finds out Nelson is gay, and much of the storyline is about them working it out.

-Joe takes it well, and shows some of that fierce loyalty to his friends that was hinted at.

-Haily initially freaks out. Jame, who is of course already ok with Milo, helps her sort out her feelings. I'm guessing that during the course of this that's when their relationship develops.

-Look for Caleb to be serious trouble, and feel extremely isolated from his friends when all the above things occur (bestfriend being gay, Haily (who I get the impression is basically like a sister to him), dating his rival, and Joe mostly being ok with these things).

-I'm thinking somehow an important dream is going to figure into this and that'll help him (Caleb) work stuff out.

-It'll be interesting to see what happens with Nelson and Milo both being artists, and maybe I'm just being silly and overly-romantic, but I'm thinking they're going to "collaborate" to recreate the paintings lost in the first chapter.

-I have no guesses whatsoever about what specific roles Nelson's family (and Leanna) will play, but I suspect mostly supportive ones.

 

I wonder if Joe is on our team too...

Hmmm, I hadn't thought so. I think he's just going to be supportive as a friend. I guess anything's possible though.

 

 

Anyway I look forward to the next chapter. Take care everyone and have an awesome day!

Kevin

[Camy]

I think I've figured out why I like this so much more than DD - which is not to say I didn't like DD which was excellent in its own way too.

 

Firstly it's the location. I've no idea where it is, but it's certainly less hot and arid than Arizona. It seems somehow 'cosier'.

 

Secondly DD revolved around a lot of openly gay people. WT doesn't, though no doubt there will probably be some suprises.

 

Personally, I Identify most with Milo; because he acts the way I probably would in his situation. On the one hand I'd love to find a 'Nelson', but at the same time would be terrified of the possible consequences too.

 

The kiss was just... Stellar. Want one!

 

Thanks Mr. Luka, and more please. I want to know how 'I' end up.

Edited March 14, 2006 by Camy