Lisa

H A P P Y D A D D Y ' S D A Y !!!! Happy Daddy's Day to all the daddies on this site!

I'm thrilled you're extending this story! I will really miss it when it's finished. I was really surprised at Cj's parents' reaction to what he did to C & C. Good for his dad! Like Timothy, I just assumed his father was a homophobic prick also. I'm so happy Amber talked Jenny into reporting Cj. He deserves everything he gets and more - especially if he's sent to the big house. Hey, I hear that the thugs, murderers, and rapists in jail HATE people who are cruel to little puppies. lol He'll get what's coming to him. Hmmmm, he probably won't be sent to a maximum security place with those said thugs. Too bad. I was also pleasantly surprised at Clinton's folks' reaction to the news. I'm so proud of them! Good for them for being so supportive of Clinton! But who shocked me more in this chapter was Amber!!! She was a fucking hoot!!! I was cracking up every time she opened her mouth! lol What a terrific friend she turned out to be! Corey definitely has a good support system, that's for sure. And I'll bet kids will be rallying around him, wanting to support him too. I will admit, I did shed a few tears when the puppies were given away. Especially Trouble. Corey did the right thing; Trouble would have been miserable w/o Corey, and having to run and hide everytime his father was around. That's no place for her. Terrific chapter, Krista! As always!

This is such a dark poem, Angel. Very powerful also - so much raw emotion in it. I just wanted to point out two errors: demon's should be demons b/c you're not using as a possessive form such as: 'the demon's eyes were blood red'. Ok, so I'm not a writer, but you get the point. lol The next error is bare should be bear: 'a burden I can no longer bear' - bear as in carry a load, carry a burden... I look forward to your next poem, Angel. Hopefully it'll be a bit more cheerful?

H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y V A L !!!! I hope you have a terrific day, Val!

Omg, Dennis the Menace!!!!! You are wayyyyy too young to have even HEARD of this show! lol Now of course I know why you picked 'Menace' as your username.

Eric, you're back!!! I'm so glad to see a sequel to Earning Danny!! I'm a little confused though: when Steven was thinking and telling us that he moved to Cobb, Cali three months ago b/c of that blowjob incident with Danny and how his folks thought he needed different scenery to keep him safe and not corrupted (something like that anyway), but then Danny and Jake are in this story too. Maybe I read it wrong. I had the feeling that Danny and Jake were in his old hometown and now he moved b/c his parents wanted him away from 'corrupted' Danny. So could you straighten me out please! lol

What a terrific story, Foxx! (I thought that was better than calling you Assassin! lol) You just showed enough of what was going on with Nick that will definitely make me come back for more. His friends sound terrific as does the staff. I can certainly understand why Nick feels hesitant about leaving the institution. I'm sure though that the doctors would have lined up a psychiatrist for Nick to see once he gets settled at home. Anyway...great chapter, Foxx! I can't wait for the next one.

H A P P Y 1 8 t h B I R T H D A Y M E N A C E !!!!! Don't go crazy now that you're eighteen! lol Have a great b-day!!!!

Wow, Angel. That was some poem. I think you should copy it and labor and delivery room nurses should hand it out to every new parent out there. Or better yet, put them in mailboxes across the world. If these stupid people (such as the idiotic people in Texas who are reinstating those asinine "gay camps" - can you even be more ignorant than they are??), actually read this poem and really thought about it, they may think differently about their ridiculous ideas. I thought it was terrific and very honest. Angel, I hope that one day you won't be broken anymore and your new name will be 1HAPPYANGEL.

Wow, my screen just combusted from all that hotness. I think you owe me a new computer, Sasha! I'd like an HP....lol J/K Luke was so right when he defended himself with Coach. Coach was being very doubled-standard there. Good for Luke for not backing down!

Jeez, where have I been that I missed all these awesome chapters? Their date was perfect, all the way down to sneaking in the pool.  They are so cute together. I thought it was sweet the way they’re both nervous about just sleeping next to one another. But my favorite part was after Luke said “I love you” to Erie, his heart started beating faster because he realized that he really did love Erie; it wasn’t just from sex.  Ok, on to the next chapter.

More twins!!! And they’re boys too! I know that Josh and Stephen will be great big brothers. J They are so cute: dults, lol. Took me a few times reading that to realize what he meant. Lol Oh, and I forgot to mention in one of my previous reviews today, how much I loved hearing about Hudgins Design Company. J Great shout-out to Fitz! =)

I so badly for Marcus and his trust issues. Unfortunately, for many people, once you've been burned like that it's hard to let someone in and trust again. But I do have to admit, he did fly off the handle a bit. Ok, now I'm a little confused. Of course I remember Danni from previous chapters and I know Danni's the one who really helped Tony after his attack. But...I thought Danni was a girl. In this chapter Danni's referred to as a 'she', but in the next chapter (I read three chapters back-to-back today), Danni is referred to as a 'he'. Now, is he a boy born into a girl's body and he wants to be referred to as a girl? Anyway, on to chapter fourteen.

Jeez, I think I've been hiding under a rock! I missed so many chapters! The portrait that Tony's dad made for them was a really beautiful idea. I'm glad Tony's attacker is dead, but it would have been much better if he had been tortured for a few years. Ok, on to the next chapter.

Wow, that was another great chapter, KC!! Kudos to Stephanie for telling the truth despite the fact that she might lose everything. But where has Michael been these past three days?

Omg, where was I last week that I missed this gem of a chapter???? I was at the edge of my seat! That scumbag Petersen is such a slime. Grrrr, I want to beat his smug ass. lol Asher's relationships don't have anything to do with the trial. And Ziggy's going to be cross-examined too, right? I mean, he was the target in the first place! lol Very exciting courtroom scene, KC! I hope Asher was just having a panic attack and not a heart attack!!!! Ok, on to the next chapter...

I ditto Timothy - Fuck. And now I know why you waited to reply to my review. lol Corbin (and I), actually thought he got away with lying to Pete. But then again, while he's moaning and screaming when Mike is plowing him, who the hell knows who was walking by! I could just see Pete walking by after looking for him at the event. Oh, and Pete texted him and Corbin never got back to him. I can see Pete wanting to find out what Corbin's doing. Tsk, tsk, Corbs, shoulda let Mike go back. The person who really surprised me here is Mike. Wow. He really is laying it all on the line for Corbin, basically telling him that he is/was/who knows? straight but he's falling for Corbin. His speech really got me all choked up. And of course he's right - his advice to Corbin is right on the money. Corbin has to know if anything is there as far as Pete's concerned. He can't be with Mike the way Mike wants him to if he's so hung up on the Brit. Omg, I can't believe Mike is really falling for him! After all those times of treating Corbin like some blowjob sex slave/toy, now he has real feelings for him. Kudos to Mike. Now, the question is: if Pete found out last night that Corbin lied to him (by walking by his room and hearing screaming, for example! Hmmmm, I wonder if he heard the "Oh, Pete, that feels amazing" part? lol), why was he so friendly with him today? Why did Pete want to hang out with Corbs knowing that he was lied to? And with the Vmee of all people! And if he didn't find out last night, when did he and how did he? And what was with that kiss? It certainly seemed like it meant a whole lot to Pete. Did he just 'come to his senses' and realize what he was doing and whom he was doing it with? This doesn't look good for Team Pete. Or Team Mike b/c Mike doesn't want to be the person Corbin "settled" on, you know? He doesn't want to be second best. Terrific chapter, Jon! There were so many emotions in this chapter, with all three boys. Can't wait for the next one.

It's great that Mark knew exactly what Trey was doing and why he was acting like that. Any other person would have probably blown up at him. After all, it's so much easier to leave someone you love if you're angry with them. I used to pick fights with my mom every time I went back to school. It's good that Mark didn't feed into that. =)

I like it too!!!

Bitch-slap the mom? How about bitch-slap Hyacinth (did I spell it right?)! She's the one who spilled the beans. It is about time that Mikeal learns the truth. I'm glad Adam was able to get him to see that even though he found out he's adopted, his family's love for him is still as strong as it was all those years ago when his mom found him. His parents think of him no differently than their biological kids. I'm glad he decided to see them for Christmas. Great chapter, Cassie!

Heya Layla, I'm so sorry to hear that you're going through such a hard time. My best friend's daughter also has bi-polar disorder and she's on meds which help a lot. I hope you can relax during your time away. It's great that you have such a supportive roommate. Feel better, Layla. Lisa

Welcome November! I must say, I am impressed already! You've been here one day and you already know what the 'likes' mean and how to past part of a quote in your post! I just learned that this past year and I've been here for three years I think. So kudos to you! =) I hope you enjoy it here; GA is a great place for reading awesomely wonderful stories, interacting with all the talented authors, hanging around in the forums or the chat room (which I'm never in....I should visit once in awhile), or even helping out if you have writing/editing/beta'ing experience. It's a great community to get involved in.

Comsie! I'm so excited to read these two new chapters! Plus you have another story you just updated also!! I feel like I won the lottery. lol

Wow. Totallyy, you are so talented. This poem and your first one are fantastic. The words just bring so many memories to the front of my mind. And through the sadness, at least I know that there are people out there that felt the same feelings I felt when their heart was torn into bits and pieces. Keep writing, Totallyy - you have such a gift. Thank you for sharing.

Great poem, Ron! It gave me goose bumps. Hmm, now I think RJ owes YOU a poem. lol