Timothy M.

I simply love Preston rescuing Indie from that bastard of an ex. And my favorite phrase of this chapter was: Efrain’s gay roommate gay kissing my gay best friend into a little gay puddle of gay surrender

One of my favorite chapters together with the previous one. Every time I get to the playing gay chicken I die laughing.

This time Michael didn’t object when his dad took him into the guest room. Grethe followed, after saying good night to Patrick, and the cardmaker managed to keep cool and act normally. As soon as she disappeared into her room, he rose, switched off the lights and went upstairs to get ready for bed. A quick shower ended his preparations and he slipped into the silk briefs he’d bought on the way back from the solicitor’s office. He came out of the bathroom to find his lover waiting for him in the

I know, right? Of course Patrick should be able to welcome his man home with a kiss on the door step. Surprise is OK, but condemnation certainly isn't. Next chapter coming up - you've waited long enough.

Yep, one huge combustion chapter coming up - I hope. I'm glad you thought this chapter was sweet.

Thanks, Caz. We don't have this teasing chant, but I can recall this song used by girls in my childhood (substitute names as relevant): Under den hvide bro Sejler en båd for to Båden den vipped, og Peter han skreg Patrick, jeg elsker dig! Have fun with google translate.

Are you a jerk or not? Good question for Logan. Who by the way seems somewhat dim - I mean who forgets where you normally put your cell phone during working hours? The one I want to ask Aiden is: Are you an adult with intelligence or not? Landing a job and a bed at the fire station was very clever, but drinking that beer wasn't. He should have emptied it over Logan's crotch. It would have served the idiot right, and Aiden wouldn't wake up with a hangover and in Logan's bed. Uhm, and does Aiden realize how much food firefighters can eat? I hope the chief is nice enough to insist they pay him for the ingredients.

I can recall thinking Romeo and Juliet was probably wastly overrated as a romance before I read or saw it. I thought people were simply praising it as one of the best tragic romances ever, because it was 'the thing' to do. To my surprise when I read it in college I found it stunningly romantic when they meet. So in spite of the later, rather unrealistic development with the fake dying and miscommunication, the love story is genuinely beautiful. Other than that I like Hamlet, of course.

I thought you would appreciate it, if you hadn't seen it before.

Freudian slip ? Or on purpose ? did you watch the video?

I guess I'm being unfair, but I'm getting fed up with Luke's inability to deal with his orientation and come out to Ryan and Elliot. But I guess it's a moot point while he cannot decide which of them he would like to date. I'm also not sure I like Estella being pushy, and Sam can piss off and tell Becky to leave Simon alone. Oh, and Luke has a good point about his mum and her perfectionism, just as he has had several other clever insights. But since he never shares them with her, he's preventing her from ever changing and improving. Also annoying...

I can't believe I forgot to reply to your review, Gary ! I think I read it just before going to bed and I wanted to be fresh and read it again before replying. Toying with you? Now, would I ever do that? I'm glad you liked Rob, Trevor and Japser joking around, I had such fun writing it. I think Rob is enjoying the chance to be 'one of the guys' without having to watch what he says. Trevor might do exactly what you say, but I think he would prefer a real date. Anyway, you're right about Rob's tactics usually working.

Tillykke med fødselsdagen to my favorite biker. I guess you'd prefer a case of Carlsberg to Danish birthday flags

This chapter should be mandatory reading for all the haters and bigots in NC and elsewhere who do not (want to) undestand the problems of LGBTQ youth. Tiffany's plight is heart-wrenching but at least she finally feels someone understands her. And in return she gave Bobby the courage to admit he is gay.

Thank you for the feature. I'm I managed a current prompt. Poor JAR, I just sent him the edits for an unprompted MetaPrompt chapter. Now he has to work the Prompt 494 word list into the chapter.

I'm glad Ross has quickly realized that Stuart is a bad boyfriend for him. But he only needs to keep things under wraps for another few weeks and then he'll know about the draft. However, if he's reacting so badly now to innocent stuff like Neil and Liam holding hands and Tony giving Jim a kiss, that menas he's too highly strung. I fear it may affect his performance at the combine. My suspicion about Kevin is getting stronger. I like the guy a lot and I hope he'll figure himself out. I guess we have several prospects for the first out AFL footballer, eh? Neil's mum needs to get away from the church, his dad needs a job, and they want the chance to be closer to him when he goes to college. Hopefully, evrything will work out.

I guess we're about to find out whether José is really CJ's friend or not. Or perhaps he's sensible enough to realized what CJ's fathers will do to him and his cousin if they get CJ roofied and rape him. It's not gonna be pretty. My final thought is CJ being smart enough to realize something is wrong and calling for help. That would prevent anything bad and still land the two guys in the trouble they deserve.

Leo and Mario are a good match. I would have strangled the cat.

Rude awakening? Yep, it sure was and for both Kellar and his foster brother. My most burning question is this: Are humans in this world aware of the existence of shifters or not? The answer may take the story in one of several different directions. Kellar obviously wasn't aware what was happening with his genetically based shift from scrawny pup to fully developed male, and it was interesting that rage and not the full moon was the transformation trigger. Now I wonder how he'll turn back.

Good for Luke that he didn't let Jackson's disgusting behavior slide but actually called him on it. I have a lot more respect for Luke and lost it for Jackson, even though he did admit to himself he'd gone too far. It's not good enough, because it all fits into the pattern of him not thinking about the consequences. I'll even admit his parents have a point, even though they are as much to blame for him becoming this way and I don't think much of their method of trying to change him. But his mom actually found a person who could have been a good influence and a proper friend, perhaps even boyfriend. Shame Jackson spoiled it by refusing to look past the loser image and prefering to 'impress' his old friends and get back at Connor and Cindy rather than be a decent person. I hope his remorse lasts longer than a few hours or until his mom has talked to Cindy and starts yelling at him. After that he'll refuse to admit to fault, because she's being over the top.

Yes! You get it perfectly, love is making Patrick consider and do things he would never have thought of before, and the support goes both ways of corse. I'm glad you thought Peter hurrying home romantic (now I cannot wait to see what you say of ch. 12). All Vikings yearn to return home. Yep, the neighbor should be shunned and ignored for sheer stupidity. But maybe she'll keep her views to herself. I'm glad everyone is supportive of Patrick getting in touch with Fiona. I promise I'll get there eventually.

Now I want to know what Daniel and Silas were saying to each other. Carlos should know you can never own a kitten, it claims you. I think he just realized he's been well and truly hooked.

Corey probably hasn't spent much thought on Jason in the years gone by. It may hit him that much harder when he sees the guy who broke his friend's heart and destroyed Corey's own cruch. Zach needs to get the boot, Corey is virtually dating his own hand again as it it. Didn't Corey dislike his mom being too nice and putting up with bad behavior? Pot - kettle eh?

Why Victor, do you really mean to say there should be more drama in Eric and Nelson's relationship? Hmm, I'll see what I can do, but I'm going to blame you if things go wrong. You're easy to satisfy if this short glimpse of Nelson makes you happy. I promise to write another chapter soon with him and Eric on their own. Yes, Eric for GSA president will keep him busy, but as you say there's a long way to go.

Hey Batman, I'm sorry about being so late. But never fear, Robin will get there in the end. This chapter was about winning, trust and staking claims. Of course Nate and Bodie did all of that. They trusted in each other and in their feelings enought to say the Love words. They may be young but they are not afraid to claim the boy they love and lots of kisses too. They win and so do their families. I loved the scene where Bodie's mom tells Michael what their arrival in Bodie's life means. And I laughed so much when she claimed the whole family with those Christmas sweaters. She knows good peaple whe she sees them. M&K claimed their puppies, and I liked their trust in Bodie's opinion and training of the dogs. I don't think they would have considered getting a dog without his enthusiasm. In fact he was so good they took two puppies, lol. Although, I suppose you can say the puppies claimed our guys first. Kendall showed a specific trust in Michael today. he didn't once worry about his knee, showing he trusted his man to be sensible, even when in a snowball fight or chasing Nate down and tickling him or whatever. Bodie was clever with his reaction and I loved the 'kiss it better' joke. I think Michael did right in trusting Nate with the 'secret' about his parens wanting to fly over to surprise him. And the plan to do a short Christmas visit was great. I'm looking forward to M&K having a romantic walk. Did I forget anything? Oh right: it was another wonderful chapter, buddy.