Puppilull

Conflict - very important! It's an excellent way to give readers a chance to really get to know your characters. When faced with conflict, we reveal our true selves. I agree it doesn't have to be spectacular. Less is often more, unless you are writing some epic hero tale filled with quests to save the world or something. Adding some drama and some flaws in each character (even the hero) makes for a much more interesting read.

I think you've gotten a lot of good advice already, so I just thought I'd add my own personal, introvert experience. It took me quite the while to realize I was an introvert. For a long time, I thought I was shy (which I actually am, but this goes deeper). It wasn't until a few years ago that I learned it's part of who I am. I will never be the life of the entire party, but in a more intimate setting I can be hilarious and reduce people to tears (of happiness). When I feel safe, I can do anything. If I'm in my field of expertise, I can be more assertive than most and have no problems arguing my case. So being an introvert doesn't mean you will never be able to command a room or be the boss. I've been in management for the past five years and I love it. It gives me the opportunity to have one-on-ones with people to help them grow, and that is so much fun. I can guide them on their way through their work life and perhaps even life. So don't think introversion is an obstacle. It doesn't have to be. That intuition is a powerful thing. When I hire, I try to find a balance between extros and intros. We all complement each other and a good boss knows this. Though extroverts have an advantage in this world of ours, even here in Sweden (where most are more or less introverted...). So, my advice would be to find your field where you feel at home and a place to do it in. Then you will shine. It sounds as if you already know quite a lot about your preferences and strengths. Build on that and don't let the douchy extros get you down. You have so much to offer and if someone doesn't see what you've got, it's their loss. Go wreak that quiet havoc!

Swift dealing with the traitors. Still, I doubt it was easy. Deke is right. The nightmares will eventually show up, for a time of processing.

What a strange thing to do, pretend to reconcile. What could Stuart possibly hope to gain? Their plan for a lease is good, but I think mum's new beau will want cold, hard cash upfront.

The numbers are racking up. Not possible to ignore anymore, regardless of consequences.

Ehum... Kit really knows how to pick his moments. Daring to blurt that out when Simon is midbite.

Find oneself again is a good thing. Obviously, Boyd missed being Boyd. What did they fish out of the water?

Sweet Halloween! I'm glad Basil finally could fulfil his dream.

Scary bony hands grabbing... 😫 I'm thinking the mummy has resided in the closet for many years, picking off victims when it suited it. I wonder how it got there?

Angry neighbours can be a true danger... I guess people scare me mote than ghosts.

Well, the fire fighters gave Rush some new information to digest. I'm not going to try. Cute to see Brenda and Brandon being rather sweet together. And I hope they aren't siblings like their 90210 namesakes... 😁

Oh no... Another traitor! And they were just about to take the next step in their relationship. Will they never have a moment's peace?

Happy to see you back at working on this story! It makes sense now, D's weird behaviour. Will Noël be able to save him? Next chapter is very much awaited.

Curious bonding gift, a creature to share. Mingle them both. Like a child. 😂

A short regrouping (or groping...) before the war. It'll be a showdown, so Heather is probably right on the money.

It's a bit worrying Freska hasn't arrived yet. Selling the ship is a big step, but worth it to reach the end goal. Mackinack sounds interesting for someone with Kohen's past. Not very orderly...

More interruptions! Gah!

What a sad chapter... Revenge will be brutal.

Nothing like a little full body contact to get the point across. Have fun, guys!

I think Joy will find herself in dire need of assistance. Douglas is bad news. I can feel it. Will Geoff help?

Nice little relaxation at the end. I doubt the Captain is so sensitive he can't even handle a question. It was a fair one and Kohen only has limited knowledge of all the workings of the ship and its equipment.

Kitryn is not so very subtle. Why not just talk about it and get it over with? Silly kitty! And surely, Simon can't be that innocent?

A bit a respit, before more trouble? At least they got to cuddle a little.

For me, this distance and inanity to connect with Envy is because he's always posing, never feeling or reacting. If he'd open the lid even just a little to his true self, he'd be a total mess and thereby lose all ability to impress Siccu. A fate worse than death. This fake persona creates a divide between us and him. To write a story from a person POV and still have that person be like a mirror impression wise, is pretty impressive to me. Very consistent writing.

I've missed the demons! Nice to get more and what a chapter!