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So, a chapter about Eddie but it talks more about Jake. The way I see it, Jake is afraid to meet because he knows Eddie can read him just as well as he can read Eddie. The whole "if you don't think I'm good enough for you, you're not right" is Jake saying he doesn't feel good enough himself. Wall upon wall to protect himself... ‘People say cancer survivors, but you never really get over it. These people fight it their whole lives. When part of your body betrays you, it’s personal. They take life seriously, soberly, savoring each moment.’ This hit me hard. So true.
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Do we ever choose who we are or become? Perhaps in minor details, but mostly we are the product of life. For those of us lucky to find a matching jagged edge, we should indeed cherish it. No matter how we express that unity. I'm happy for you both.
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What Is It About Weddings?
Puppilull commented on Rip Skor's story chapter in What Is It About Weddings?
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Chilling to think of those poor boys trapped in life and in death. Brave to go on searching in spite of some sights that would turn anyone's hair white...
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I'm really glad Jody could snap out of that horrible mindset. It's not worth losing everything over an idiot. People really need to find other things in life than just their partners. I must admit I was expecting him to be a zombie hunter or something, with the hints about his unusual job...
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Missing children... This could turn into a really difficult story to read... Koji and André are slowly getting closer.
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I started thinking about the saying "vanity before the fall". Ethan suffered one bout and Caleb would do wisely to take heed. He still needs to be careful so he doesn't underestimate his opponent(-s?).
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A recovering magician... But it seems Caleb (or who could it be...) is reaching for him. Maybe he'll relapse to give it one more try...
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When someone has walked the underwolrd for so long, I guess it's inevitable to start playing mind games just to pass the time. Especially when someone as unusual as Caleb shows up. A dangerous game...
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Oh little human... What a "life"... Rescued but broken. Happy sad.
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I Wrote a Hot Sex Scene, Round Two
Puppilull commented on Hudson Bartholomew's blog entry in HB's Blog
I put another vote in. Your scene is still the better one, technically and emotionally. Let me know if you want another analysis! -
I looked for this and finally found it! And now, some thinking required.
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This seems to work for me! Yay! Will test it tomorrow during a flight.
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Happy birthday!
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I agree. Holding a table for hours in a busy place only buying a cup o' joe isn't fair to the cafe. However, if it's a really slow day, having actual people in there could be a way to get others in there. I know I have issues going into a completely empty place. Maybe ask your favourite place? What do they prefer? Some could prefer the homey feel of steady patrons treating their place as a living room. Some won't. No need to be annoying when you can find out.
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With the continous attacks in various countries happening right now, this is a frightening reminder of how awful life can be for some.
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Addiction makes people so incredibly selfish, but when it's people you expect would care for you it can be hard to see. Instead, those feelings turn inside, eating away at you. Very strong of Jake to not faulter tonight. But I think he'll need a better support system for when things get worse. I think both mom and Nats have problems. Maybe not the same, but still choosing "fun" over Jake isn't healthy.
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Mine! Part Two Chapter Forty
Puppilull commented on Cia's story chapter in Mine! Part Two Chapter Forty
Oh, I enjoyed it very much! And I agree, it's a great place to end it. Things are settled to some degree and the rest can be left to the future, in each of the readers' heads. -
A sweet ending to this story! Just what I needed on a chilly night. I look forward to your next work, but take your time to reboot. No stress. We'll wait.
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I Wrote a Hot Sex Scene and I Need Your Help!!
Puppilull commented on Hudson Bartholomew's blog entry in HB's Blog
Hot sex scene? I'm on it! I voted for you and not to be nice (even if that is a good thing too). Your scene was in my opinion better since it involved more feeling and sensation. The other scene was more a technical rendition of sex. At the end i was very confused since the sucker was supposed to be in a position of power over the suckee. Still she acted differently with licking and cleaning him afterwards. It didn't strike me as a dominant BJ, to be honest. More pleasuring. Maybe it would make more sense if I read the whole story. -
Oh wow, to come home to something like that... So sad. I really hope Harry get help. REally amazing to get to that in such a short period of time for writing.
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So good to see them in such a happy place. Together and enjoying life. Only fly in the soup would be not being able to get married.
