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Reinard needs to meet with his old family to resolve a few issues...but I'm hoping he finds his home with his new family...the Tiger and the Neko!!!
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Marvelous chapter!! You gotta love JJ's 'exit strategy'...pillow and a blanket in the closet, to avoid 3 hurricanes...works for me!! Stef needs a 'Will intervention' and a maturity check...what's going on with him?? And pleaseeeeeee...My foot would be Dillon's 'uber' back to the campus!! This guy's a total tool!!In any event...beautiful writing...
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Wish that we all could die loving and knowing such awesome love... Thank you for this amazingly beautiful story...hoping the tears will stop in a few...so I can re-read this stunning chapter!!!😭
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They will all forgive Leon and Logan...true friends would always take their friend's ultimate survival into consideration!! I have a sneaking suspicion that these friends would move heaven and earth for each other...be damned the consequences...THEY WILL SURVIVE THIS!! Love this very difficult chapter...
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Oh my, Gary...sorry to hear about your shoulder, that's a painful and difficult recovery...I hope you're doing better If you wrote that after and during shoulder surgery and recovery, then you truly are amazing ( I was an ortho scrub nurse for years)!! The story stood alone...but it was just sooooooooo darn cute...it's a heart kickstart...if the heart is dying, this story will give a jolt..
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Ok, Gary...just to let you know...I'm in the "cheep, cheep, cheeping" section with this one...I mean comon, who wouldn't want to see a few dozen more chapters of this?? So...don't judge me..😜 This was indeed, vintage Gary the Gifted!! Again..
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Chapter 1 Fly Me to the Moon
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 Fly Me to the Moon
Oh...Gary the gifted one...you astound us again with your beautiful writing!! Some how, you always manage to make us think, feel, smile, cry, when you write... This was poignantly BEAUTIFUL... -
ALWAYS a fan and a follower!! Write a nursery rhyme and I'll be there...🤗
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You guys took us on an awesome journey with this loving family...for that we thank you both...from the heart!! We await the continuation of the antics of this hilarious and formidable family of misfits...that fit so perfectly with each other!!
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Des and Blair are brothers...how Des got left with that psycho granny is THE mystery!!!🤔 Daniel is the one that saw the scars on Des's back, long ago and sparred him his full wrath...not so sure Blair and Felix should put their faith in him to keep his mouth shut, though!!! Just speculating here...😜 All I know is that Kaytya has me down to my last nail...the others are refusing to grow back out until this fabulous story ends!!
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Can we at least get them into the living room before they kill each other!!! This is rich...can't wait...
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Rayhe is trying my last nerve!!! He should know by now when to take Des seriously...by now he should trust in Des's instincts and senses!!! He should have known this was serious, the minute he saw Des and Spectre playing together 🤔 Greatttttttttt chapter!
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This one will be as fabulous...as ALL your others!!! Ready to "Go With The Flow", Sui!
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So happy to see you back!!! Love these characters, love all your characters...sooooooo, epilogue means "end"..."fini"... "thats all folks"...????? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... 😭please..."Don't leave us this way, I can't survive...." (old song..but appropriate ) Awesome chapter Jo...thanks bunches for the update!
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No question, the "bad seeds" are going to be trouble...but remember Caleb's no push over and he's right where he needs to be...by Wren's side!! So, more than likely, the cowardice of bullies will come shining through with down n dirty tactics...this is gonna get ugly...but good!
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Everyone's said it all!!!! Kudos on some AWESOME writing and a few fabulous characters...even the ones we're going to "love to hate"(the uncles)!!!
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Love it!!! The excitement is unbearable!!
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lol...okkkkkkkkkkk Ethan!! Guess I'm just going to trust those sweeeeeeet writing skills of yours, to snatch Noah from the toilet...before I flush!! I'm putting my faith in you!!!!!!
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Yea!!! Jordan...moving right along!!! Noah...too late, to put the big boy britches on now! You'll need them to move on and find some one you won't keep pushing away and placing in 2nd place!!
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Make no mistake...the story is compelling and definitely has our attention...AND IS VERY WELL WRITTEN!! Otherwise, you wouldn't be getting all these different opinions on the characters...NOTICE: No one is leaving for the exits...we're all still here, waiting and longing for the next chapter...you've got skills, Sir Ethan!
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It's hard to compare a homophobic, judgemental, _itch of a mother, to a real, loving mother!! Noah is going to have to give more than stupid platitudes of apology, he's all over the place and nowhere, at the same time ...Jordan is a good man and I have to agree with whiny Noah..."he deserves better"! Nicely written chapter, just difficult to understand Noah's character, sometimes.
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Noah...may not be worth all of Jordan's stress and heartache!! He always appears to be a bit selfish and self-righteous at times...he is his own worse enemy! Grow up and grow "some", Noah...or live with your bigoted Momma all your life!!!
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Fabulous characters...intriguing and fun story line...awesome epilogue...and beautiful last line.."The end is...and they lived happily ever after"!!! Thank you ...and now...😭😭😭
