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Trash Talking and Walking
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Trash Talking and Walking
I disagree. At this point I don't think there is anything Shane could do or say to redeem himself. Why would Donovan want to be with someone who seems to have so much disgust towards him as a person?? Donovan needs to set the bar way higher. He's kinda scraping the bottom of the barrel with Shane. He deserves better. Hopefully he realizes that.- 47 comments
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Trash Talking and Walking
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Trash Talking and Walking
Well, Donovan, that's what u get for trying to date an asshole! This coming from Shane is no surprise for me. First impressions mean everything to me, and the few cutesy chapters in between didn't waver me from the shitty first impression we got from him. I am, however, very disappointed in Drew. I thought he of all people would come to Donovan's defense, instead of being a asshole like Shane and the rest of the DAKS. If Donovan ever goes back to Shane, he's a damn fool!- 47 comments
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I'm happy Scott has Alex for support. He and Marie sound like very supportive, loving people. Hopefully Scott can redeem himself and take a more positive road than the last.
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Nope...still don't feel bad for Scott. Bobby was absolutely correct when he said Scott deserved it. Karma is a bitch! We'll see if he learned his lesson when he gets to Arkansas, or if he needs another big dose of karma.
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So happy to see a new chapter! I just love Ariel and Tyler as a couple. I could picture Tyler in his shiny shorts, tshirt and barefoot. Ariel is right, that is hot! Lol! I really think these two are meant for each other.
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I don't think I'll ever feel bad for him.
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Wow! Great chapter! A lot going on. Can't believe Carson is the boy's half brother! I hope they get Carson soon. They should have put both Penelope and Randolph to death right fron the courtroom! My heart breaks for Nan, but its still not right for her to take it out on the poor kids. On a positive note, I just knew Levi and Brody were gonna be more than friends. I think its sweet. I can't imagine that circus adding a St Bernard to the mix! Lol!! Maybe they can come up with an acceptable alternative for Cody. I can't even begin to imagine what's coming next!
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Yeah, I have a feeling he'll be getting that call pretty soon! Lol!
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As usual, grest chapter! Really love Adam and Troy. Always excited to see a new chapter. Good trick Adam and Mom played in Troy. He was a good sport about it. Congrats to Troy for passing his driver's test! I'm happy to see that they're getting back into a normal routine, now with some wheels!
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Nobody cares about grammatical errors. Everyone makes them, with the exception of you apparently. Us readers care about good stories. These authors take time out of their lives to share these stories with us. It is rude and unfair for you to go through each chapter and nitpick things that don't matter to the majority of us readers. I think "good chapter" is way more meaningful than "you did this wrong" EVERY chapter! If you intend to continue, please consider doing it via private message.
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Nobody cares! You need to stop!!!
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Even after hearing Scott's story so far, still doesn't excuse his actions. Still doesn't give him any sympathy from me. I think he deserved everything he got from Mark and his friends!
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I absolutely understand his feelings. I took care of both of my parents most of my adult life. When there is no help, which I also had none, its like working three full time jobs. There's minimal down time, there's no going home after your shift and not worrying about work until the next day. Its constant, 24/7 work. Its extremely draining. My mom died when I was 29, my dad when I was 34. I miss them every day, but it was truly a relief to only have to worry about myself for a change. Being a caregiver is not an easy job at all.
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The lone star state - Touchdown!
jaysalmn commented on FSELL's story chapter in The lone star state - Touchdown!
The annoying grammar police has been corrected!! Lmao! -
CH18 The Big Apple and Beyond
jaysalmn commented on FSELL's story chapter in CH18 The Big Apple and Beyond
Great chapter! SOOO happy Jamie went beck to Texas and Ben! I would have been very disappointed if he had went on to London. Excited that he and Ben are going to France together. I think that's how it should be. Wonder what Ben's mother gave him before they boarded... maybe an engagement ring for Jamie?? -
I totally agree. I've commented to him before that we as readers don't care about correct grammar and that he should lighten up and stop with the nit picking. Guess he didn't take my advice. U all are wonderful enough to share ur stories with us. Why be so rude to the writers just to feed some, I'm guessing, over-inflated ego??
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No, not helpful at all. I've seen this person do this on MANY other stories. Its SOOOO annoying every time I see his name pop up on my notifications because I kno exactly what its gonna be.
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We're at this again, Will, huh??
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The Young and the Hopeless
jaysalmn commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in The Young and the Hopeless
I'm kinda surprised as to where Dustin is. He seemed to be so much better and even helped Billy through some issues in Commencement. He seems to have slipped back into a very dark place. I never disliked Dustin in W.A.R, but I'm having a hard time liking him just a little here so far. -
Great writing, but don't exactly agree with the whole "victim falls for the bully" storyline.
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Wait, why the fuck does EMBER have to make anything right??? He did nothing wrong! He was the one being bullied, not the other way around! Also, Aaron's logic is pure bullshit! Doesn't matter if Brady ever said a thing or not! He stood there and let Paul spew his shit and did absolutely nothing! As far as I'm concerned, that makes him just as guilty! If Paul had harmed Ember physically, or killed him, and Brady watched but did nothing, he would still be charged with a crime. Extreme example, but same logic.
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It was Not Another Teen Movie, and Jaime Pressley said it. One of my faves! Lol!
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Calling Shane "less than desirable" is putting it lightly. At this point, Aaron and Drew are the only character I really like. Maybe we can just cut Donovan and Shane out of the story all together and continue it with Aaron and Drew falling in love! Lol!
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Sorry, but Shane telling the whole group about their night was as big an asshole move as there can be. It should have been Donovan that got pissed, got up and walked out before the conversation even got that far. I sure as hell would have. No way in fuck would I be apologizing to him! However, it was a dick move for Donovan to bring up the barebacking.
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How to say stupid things - Shane 1/2
jaysalmn commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in How to say stupid things - Shane 1/2
Its gonna take ALOT for me to change my view on Shane. Like I said on a previous comment, first impressions are everything to me. Treating people like shit isn't an endearing quality. Yes, I'm absolutely #teamdrew!!
