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    Cory Arrives

    JeffreyL commented on Dayne Mora's story chapter in Cory Arrives

    It has been more than a while since I read this story. I am excited to revisit Cory and Erfain and see what changes you've made! Thanks.
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    Poor April. How can he find out details of Jett's feelings about Theo. I can't wait to find out how these two will hook up for HEA. I am really enjoying this story! Thanks.
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    Takes the Biscuit

    JeffreyL commented on northie's story chapter in Takes the Biscuit

    This is very clever and a lot of fun! Thanks.
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    Christmas Present

    JeffreyL commented on northie's story chapter in Christmas Present

    This is a perfect holiday story, but it could be enjoyed any time. It is sweet in the best meaning of the word. It nicely illustrates that kindness doesn't cost anything and can have a big effect. Thanks.
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    A Night To Remember

    JeffreyL commented on northie's story chapter in A Night To Remember

    Drew is a lot of fun, but Sam is the one I would like to know more about. I enjoyed this and wouldn't mind reading more about these characters. Thanks.
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    Chapter 1

    JeffreyL commented on DavidJ's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Great start! I look forward to reading more! Thanks.
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    Red Noon

    JeffreyL commented on WolfM's story chapter in Red Noon

    You paint an evocative picture with your words. Thanks.
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    From the Ashes

    JeffreyL commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in From the Ashes

    A promising start and two very interesting characters! Having enjoyed other stories you've written, I am certain this will be another good one. Especially after Mollyhousemouse's comment! Thanks for sharing another story with us.
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    Great chapter! Thanks.
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    WTF?

    JeffreyL commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in WTF?

    I really enjoyed this chapter, and I'm all caught up. Can't wait for another chapter! Thanks.
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    I am playing catch up with several stories now that the holidays are over. You have added some great new characters to an already pretty impressive cast! You have also pitched a couple of curveballs! I look forward to reading more! Thanks.
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    Home Again

    JeffreyL commented on lofie's story chapter in Home Again

    This was a sad, but interesting story. It nicely stands as it is, but I think I would enjoy reading more about these characters. Thanks.
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    Friday

    JeffreyL commented on Drew Payne's story chapter in Friday

    Although I marked this chapter with a heart because I love these characters you have created, it was mostly sad to read. It has been such a positive thing to see Simon open up to his new friends! His parents, as many others have noted, are a big disappointment to put it kindly. I enjoyed reading the many comments and the speculation on why they are reacting as they do. This chapter had Simon spiraling down and closing himself off. Neither parent seems to have noticed. Hooray for Niki and Freddy for being outspoken and supporting him. Thanks for sharing this story.
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    I wanted to give this wonderful story five stars. I was going to write a review, but after reading Mollyhousemouse's I don't think there is more to say. So read her review, if you haven't, and know I agree and highly recommend this story!
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    Thanks Wayne for this wonderful ending! I can't imagine it being any better! I will miss these characters I have grown to love. 😍 I hope we hear more from them one day. It was a memorable journey. Thanks again.
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    Chapter 8

    JeffreyL commented on MozLover21's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Wow! The drama meter is about to go off the scale! I wish Aubrey would unclench, tell a few people to get lost, and give Andrew a chance. I also wish Aubrey would think more about earlier days when he was concerned about his writing and not what some people were saying. More good storytelling! Thanks.
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    Encounters 3

    JeffreyL commented on gabz2000's story chapter in Encounters 3

    I can only take the mystery so long. It's time to drop a few hints about Victor. I wonder what is going on with "his dad?" I really like your characters. It is early in the story, but you already have them nicely fleshed out. I like the relationship between Chris and his dad. It feels like Dad will be a support for Chris no matter what. I look forward to reading more. Thanks.
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    Encounters 1

    JeffreyL commented on gabz2000's story chapter in Encounters 1

    Your characters are interesting, and their dialogue has a realistic feel to it. The introductory chapter promises this will be a good story to read! I look forward to reading the more. Thanks.
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    Chapter 2 - Rush

    JeffreyL commented on Bndmetl's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Rush

    I enjoyed chapter two! There are some interesting dynamics developing among the royals. I look forward to reading more. Thanks.
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    Firsts

    JeffreyL commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Firsts

    A new and interesting story by two of my favorite GA authors! How exciting! You have some intriguing characters that are not perfect, but enjoyably human with a few flaws. The set up is also interesting. A story about co-writers, written by co-writers. Hmmm. If I read between the lines is Ben really Tim and Frank is Wayne? 😄😄😄 Or is it the other way around? 😉 I look forward to more. Have fun with this shared experience. And thanks.
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    Prisons

    JeffreyL commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Prisons

    Tim, you are such a talented writer! I am wishing for a swing back toward more positive thinking for you. In the mean time, read the comments and feel the outpouring of love and concern. This poem really spoke to me. Even in this down time, your writing is amazing. Thanks. Michael, I assume you will read this, so I am asking you to give Tim a big hug from me. If I lived close a knew you both, I would be knocking on your door to give him a hug myself. Thanks.
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    Killers

    JeffreyL commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Killers

    I want to repeat your advice to pedestrians. Wear light and/or reflective clothing, especially at night. There are places in my smaller town where there are few or no street lights. Several times I have not noticed the pedestrians until I was almost too close. I try to watch for people, but they need to make themselves visible. Soapbox speech is over. Thanks Tim for this very thought provoking poem.
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    Aaaaaaghh! Only two chapters left? 😥What will I do? 🤔 I know. Since I live in Washington (state), it shouldn't be more than a day or two to drive to the campground. I could meet the guys in person and have a little holiday! 😃 So if you will give me directions, I can start planning. Another great chapter! I especially enjoyed the conversation between Harlan and Corbin. I do hope Corbin and Paul turn up at the campground for a visit before this ends. Bonus points to Joseph for including Elias in the lunch plans. He is correct. Orson and Elias are a package deal. Thanks once again for this story.
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    Chapter 1 - Tanner

    JeffreyL commented on Bndmetl's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Tanner

    Interesting start! I look forward to reading more. Thanks.
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    The Death of Love

    JeffreyL commented on Yeoldebard's story chapter in The Death of Love

    For some reason this odd little story really tickled me! I loved the narrator's almost flippant attitude toward the disasters in her life. And Death's falling in love with his victim made me wonder if the near misses in the narrator's life were Death pulling his punches. Very clever, and you packed a lot of story into 500+ words! Thanks.
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