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of that i'm sure of.

don't you mean 50 shades of abuse. i still say if the guy had lived in a trailer, it would be an episode on Law & Order:SUV

for me i hope it is about the real stuff. i'm not D or s, just want to understand better. be able to ask a question or 2 (or more) and not be judged or laughed at.

i'll join, if just for the education value

the poem reminds me that, it is a beautiful thing to be loved for who you are and better yet, to love who you are. you invoke the reader's soul with your writing-'tis a good thing

there are no words i can say that can release your pain. 10 years later, through your words i can feel your love and pain. when you live with a chronic conditions (or more), very day you stand at the border between life and surrendering yourself to the abyss. too often the blackness wins and nothing, no one can pull you away. know he had to go. It’s not what you wanted. And, although a piece of your soul was ripped out as he left you behind, i know you are better for loving him. Being held within the hearts you leave behind, is to live forever. Kevin struggles no longer in his pain, and you are struggling with yours. i wish you peace.

only criticism is it not long enough but the story is drawing me in. keep it coming and i hope it brings you what you need to heal moggy

my dad died in 1992. when he died i wasn't sad that he died, wasn't happy either. i was numb. we didn't have much of a relationship by then (too long of a story to go into). sadness did come, but later and in unexpected times. No one can tell another how to grieve or how long to grieve. tomorrow tell them you'll remember Pawpaw in your own way, just like they are. i was at the viewing with a group of his co-workers. we were laughing about something that i had said and my dad would have found extremely funny, but i was vilified because i dared to laugh. if they ask if you're sad, tell them you will miss him(assuming that true), but right now you're numb. moggy PS. sorry you have to deal with all this

diffidently, most diffidently was.

i don't tend to read the more sci-fi stories on this site. i follow/read 3... two are yours. love both, it feels like a Christmas present for me every time you update. can't wait for the next one.

maybe, if Devon thought the "wild vampires" as being sick as opposed to being violent, he could handle the ending of their lives. much like when an animal that is sick and in pain and the we/vet help them past

not want more of this love story? you're kidding, right? of course i want more. i've fallen in love with the characters (and your writing) here and want to continue. more packs, more love. i'm up for that. i can only hope you are too moggy

maybe it's the right direction, even if a bit disconcerting

my heart breaks for these two. but keep the chapters coming

i'm not an author here on GA, but the people i've "met" here i've enjoyed "talking with" in some forums. i love all the stories i read (and re-read) and i wonder when people stop updating, but worse is when the stories/authors are just gone. wiped off the site. i have no idea if they were hit by a bus, the update bug got them or they left. it makes me sad.its happened 3 times in the last couple of months. the people here had made my life better in knowing you all. every night i thank the Master of the universe and i say a prayer to keep you safe through the day.

oh my word. the pure, raw emotion shines through in this chapter. it reminded me of a conversation i had once with the pastor of the church e started to attend. the pastor knew of my past. i'd been abused, battered, beaten and raped on more than one occasion, but my faith was strong. he was struggling with the death of his 16 year old from an aggressive form of brain cancer. like Tony he asked "don't you ever get mad at God?" and much like Mitch, i told him "yes i get pissed and i let Him know, because who better than God, to take on my anger". this whole chapter brought this conversation back. keep up the great work.

not sure why the re-write, but that is an author's prerogative. hope this is simmering somewhere and you get to finish it. i did notice, i think it was the last chapter, you changed Seth's horse's name from Sammy to Sonny. hope to see a new chapter. moggy

tim, i just found you and i need you to stay but as others have said, doctors are frequently wrong. very wrong. i been declared dead twice in my life and that i wouldn't make it out of my 30's. 1st doctor told my mother when she was 6-7 months pregnant that all she would deliver is a dead fetus. surprise! died on the operating table at 17, they were sure i would be brain dead. surprise! and now i'm in my mid 50's. my bother was told his liver was dying and would put out of a job within 2years and dead within 5 years. he wouldn't see his 4 year old graduated from high school. that was back 1982. he finally retired early from his job in 2015, and his son now has a 4 year old. take care yourself (sounds like you're working that and know that many, more than you may know, love and care that you stay around. moggy PS "remember the squirrel" is that like "remember the Alamo"?

it's been more then a year. yet another good story is abandoned

they only bad thing to say about this chapter--is that it's too short. but i am a greedy reader moggy

i really hope you come back and finish this up. its a great start...

i'm so sorry

this was my second round of reading this, but i fear you have just abandoned it. too bad, it has so much potential to be a great story if you decide to finish it. moggy

at 1st i didn't want the story to end, i want more, but you are right Robbie and Saki are happy. great way ro end the story. maybe Shinji can have his story written. melt his cold heart moggy

i think Jeff and Paul(especially Paul) would be more inclined to do the "legal" way than the "clean up" way moggy