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I love @Wesley8890 thought.If that's what you had planned even if it's a spoiler do it LOL. Could Mark not really find out?If he's a big a dick with his colleagues and people who work under him I'm sure one of them would find a way to send it to his e-mail or cell phone. Emma could find out at school also kids are not too young today.I hope it don't interfere with her going on stage

Although it should be obvious I guess that was Tasha with James.So I guess all this was done with Casper's knowledge because they did say no more secrets. My worry is Father will not let this go. He's going to regroup.

I hope Robert also speaks to his wife about the Uncle 5%/Bobby situation would she rather lose Bobby instead of her brother?And I hope Mark will be able to take a step back but I'm not holding my breath.

It's good of Matt to tell Loe not to F-up like he did. A Chocolate chip oatmeal cookie mocha? Now THAT sounds good I guess the cafe will add it to their menu.Jase will refuse to drink it out of jealousy.

This sort of reminds me off something along the lines ofThe United States might be allied with some country where they hate the leader of the country they think he's a POS but they need them for an allie for whatever reason.

I was thinking the worse when Bobby's problems with Uncle5% was discussed .It wasn't as bad as I thought it was going to be but it was bad enough he's an ass. So Carlito is chatting with Chaz now? I guess he learned some English

Do you foresee who the President is going to be?

Thank you,thank you thank you so much for sharing your gift and a wonderful story.I had it in the back of my head that Marta was going to learn about Rick's craft that didn't surprise me.And out of the two pieces of news Heinrich got that one day I bet I know which one gave him the stroke $$$. I bet you could have done 5 very entertaining chapters on the court case. I obviously recognized the guest characters at the end I have been on GA a little over a year so i have only read about 5 of your stories that's because there are so many other great stories to read that there is rarely a lull to get to your back catalog.That's why I was wondering if Simon was one of your old characters if not that sound like it could be a good story in its own right there seemed to be some parallels between his parents And Zoltan and Magda anyway thank you so much again and I will eagerly looking forward to your next offering whenever that is. God bless

I would love to say Trey are you crazy but I have to say there at least a 50/50 chance I would have done the same thing.The one issue I see is Dallas is open about and Trey wants to do in secret.I'm worried that one of his bigoted teammates might give Trey grief just for being a friend and then he will do or say the wrong thing

That e-mail Sturgis sent that got intercepted by the FBI might mean she's toast I hope so.

Has a person like Davey's Dad someone who was appointed by the president ever needed secret service protection like this? as far as I know this would be unprecedented but maybe something like this has happened.If Davey is trying to lay low and make like he can't remember anything as it has been suggested by @drpaladin perhaps if this situation gets worst it will make him reconsider that. I'm sort of surprised by Sean's insecurity thinking Davey would forget about him now that he's friends with Brian.In this lifeline he hasn't been bullied so where is this coming from?Does he have low self esteem because he's short?

OK forgive me I'm going to sound just as confused as Justin was Tristan is TJ's brother and Tracy is TJ's Father-in-law how does that make Tracy Tristan's Grandfather 🤔 It sounds like Mills and Cartwright want to exploit Tristan for their own purposes

You left out one thing the dinner that Rosa made but Chaz and Bobby didn't know what it was.They never asked Rosa so what was it?Great chapter otherwise

As long as Sean remembers enough about it and Trevor's Dad is still around to fill in the blanks it's possible it can happen.The conversation Davey had with Reagan when he said that if he hadn't lost his memory he would have put himself on the list of people to be eliminated.Under that criteria Sean should be on that list but there is no way Davey is going to tell them that.After the last lifeline it's very hard to imagine a scenario where they have to consider another machine but who knows things may have changed enough already to put a fatal chain of events in action that what makes talking about time travel fun

This is just me but I can't see the whole story being in just Brian's POV.My guess is the story chapters will go back and forth between Brian's and Davey's POV I think you still need Davey's POV in this story. I remember in the first Do Over Davey saying at times Brian could act like a borderline bully and we saw a little of that when he collides with Sean but then he apologized.Reading his thoughts he doesn't sound like he's going to be like that kind of person.He did reveal his thoughts about he along with Brandon and Trevor being "Top Dawgs"of the school and how Davey could fit in with them.That kind of attitude can get out of control but Davey being part of the group I think would moderate that.

And I hope that payment doesn't involve Casper doing a certain something that Father been trying to get him to do. Interesting Father wasn't in his natural form but Tsuru knew who he was. James family has obviously grown to like Casper but they have to be conflicted with his relationship with Father.Tasha will freak out also when she finds out.I was not aware that Father had these kind of healing powers but apparently he does.

Chaz only missed only one thing with Bobby I live in So Cal. and I know it doesn't rain much but it does sometimes he needs a get Bobby a rain outfit for those days it rains when he cycles to school.Otherwise everything was perfect.Cute how Bobby and Carlito became fast friends

If they convert it to a tourist attraction or not the place would still have the same security needs is I don't get canceling the project. Abe sounds like a interesting guy.Can you put Crabs on the grill?

I understand the author has his own website but I haven't gone there because like other authors they post chapters in advance of GA and I don't want to be influenced in these comments.He wrote this in a way where it could have stopped here but I think he has way too much of an imagination to not want to keep going.

A lot to take in but I'm confident in Tsuru.But I confess I have no idea what she is going to do.

Chaz said he had no interest in either Women or Men.Is it possible Chaz is asexual?I don't know a lot about that topic but it may apply here.

Well this chapter sort of ended where Davey met Brian in the first Do Over except Sean is there this time and a different version of Sean at that and of Davey for that matter so we'll see what happens

Sounds like Chaz met some nice people. I have no basis for saying this if some of this is right I got lucky but maybe Bobby knows Spanish and can help Carlito learn English

Way to kick ass Caleb🤛

Except for that ill fated time he spent two weeks with his uncle I'm guessing Bobby hasn't gone on too many trips he's acting like all of this is brand new.