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Well because of Adam Billy has the option of running for Liechtenstein but one thing I would have been tempted to do when the one trainer said Billy wasn't any good was to challenge their "best" runner to a race.When he wins the medal I would like Adam to tell someone from the media that he could have ran for the U.S. but his coach said "he wasn't any good". I might have this wrong bit two times you mentioned a Bobby was that suppose to be Scotty?
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I didn't get the notification on the previous that seems to happen occasionally on other stories also.I have a feeling Ethan jumped the gun with his outburst and didn't let the Coach finish his thought.The Coach may have been a ally.Or maybe he's just an a-hole like the rest of the faculty seems to be LOL.But that hasn't been established yet.The coach may have been emphasizing 'You" because he heard Ethan was a swimmer in California.He probably is unaware of Wayne's ability. I'm not writing the story this is just me thinking but one thing I would consider if I were Wayne and Ethan is go to the trials if both of their times are among the best and then the coach announces that they made the team Ethan and Wayne would announce they are not joining the team they just wanted to show that they are good enough
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Define Pompous Ass: Those two prima donna's who left the seminar You think those two were a plant that they had a connection to Arlene and the others?
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I'm thinking maybe once every two weeks or so the academy can have a pizza day with the pizzas supplied by Moma . I'm sure Marcel wouldn't mind the break.Once word got out enrollment would increase even more.
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Needless to say that chalet is going to get built.So Billy is training for the Olympics it would be cool If Adam could score some tickets for that for him and Billy's family maybe even Johnny could come hint, hint.
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You momentarily confused me when you named the new kid Adam.They are going to have to come up with a name for him at the cabin for the grandparents to call him.The poor kid was going to stay at the academy all summer?Why did his folks even bother to have a son if they are too busy for him.
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The way all those kids reacted at the cabin when Adam went to say good night to them makes me think not only are the kids away from home a lot but when they are home they don't have much fun.It also seems before Adam arrived the academy didn't organize many fun activities the Fair should help a lot with that
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What was a great night with Ricky has turned into a nightmare for Matt.So I guess this is a "Pray the gay away" program.And for what? Coming to the aid of Charles" One of them "That's suppose to be proof that Matt is gay and needs to be fixed? It could be for the way he yelled at the parents the previous day still that's extreme. Charles is still going to school so I assume that Matt will also.Unlike Charles who seems so far at least to be a little passive and has no friends Matt will probably tell Ricky what's going on I'm scared that Matt will try to escape or something and then he will be in lockdown mode. The Pastor must have the local law enforcement and politicians in his pocket to be able to get away with this.I feel like saying a lot more but I'll wait to see what happens.
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Do all the boys have a running program at the academy as part of their routine?Otherwise I'm surprised Adam would get them up to run if they weren't daily runners.
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Pretty cool that West and Casper are heroes to the little kids.I'm guessing by tone of chapter that Neil's older brother being Teresa fiance is not a good thing.
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Is Tristan talking about a literal nightmare the kind you get when you sleep or is something really happening?As far as Tristan wanting privacy as long as Hunter can teleport everywhere is the there any place he can be alone? I was on the GA site when the notification pop up and Wesley was finished 8 minutes before I was.You should give us a test after the next chapter to see if Wesley is actually reading these LOL
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Book Two: Winter. Prologue.
weinerdog commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Book Two: Winter. Prologue.
Very interesting chapter.It makes me wonder if Charlie is in his right mind.Did the Whale not unlike Father or any other cult leader brainwash Charlie?Will there be a confrontation does Peter have a another way of finding out that Charlie returned other than going there? It's also interesting to note Jackie could not find hide nor hair of Charlie but Charlie knew she was there. -
What would Scotty be now a freshman or 10th grader?If someone is watching him now I would say a scholarship is in his future unless he gets injured.I chuckled at the Susanna being a Marie clone.
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Two Truths and a Liar
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Two Truths and a Liar
I'm grasping at straws here.My first thought is G is manipulating the situation to cover his own ass.Maybe the dream Tyler had was a hypnotic suggestion.IF Tyler really is guilty of something then did the murder of his family really happen?My money is still on G being the bad guy here -
I totally get what you're saying I have recommended this story to a number of people directly and the one thing I said to all of them is the first eight chapters or so are really rough.I am motivated to reply to your comment to tell you to stay with the story you won't regret it.I can't tell you much without giving it away but what you said does get dealt with hang in there like Stephan is doing.
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I can't wait to see where they place the fake ring will they have a security cam to record it? Why do I think that the person who tries to steal it is going to be somebody that is hired by the stepmother
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In all honesty Wesley commenting first sets the tone of how the comment go here.Now whether that's a good thing or a bad thing🤔........
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Man I had a dilemma You and Dabeagel posted a new chapter at the same time I had to flip a coin.I had no idea Jeff and Kevin could be so evil.They better put Jackson in a room protected by a force field if he can't have any stress. So they wiped Julian's memory? I borrowed $100 from him I was going to pay him back but don't want to take a chance in messing up his recovery
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In addition to Sturgis there are corrupt Judges that are in on this.There was a Law and Order SVU episode that dealt with this very topic. I wonder if Farmer will use the kids he's helped to communicate with Phillip about taking his place? I do have one question I may be reading too much into this I'm not sure how the Dirty Laundry video is relevant.That was a song about sleazy media and I hope that's not a clue having to do with Stacy Scott.
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I don't think I could ever have a safe like that I've lost my share of keys in my lifetime.Herb said lose the key and you lose everything?Surely there is something they can do if that does happen anybody could lose a key.I can also see myself messing up the two second limit.
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Is Gerry's sleeping problem related to his Father dying?
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If Mr Jackson tries to get back at Ethan and Wayne with some trumped up charge that would be a huge mistake because unlike with Wayne Ethan's Dad will raise some hell with the School Board
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So the plans called for 100 dorms which equals 200 students and they had 60 students more evidence how incompetent the previous administration was.With the type of families the students have you would have thought it would be filled.That tells me some word of mouth of the school was negative.I would be curious to find out how many students in a given year didn't return.
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It's cool that all the kids are calling Adam Dad
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The way this ended it sounds like the author was leaving the door open for yet another Do Over but we know that is not going to happen.I could have done without hearing what Brian had to go through but in the end they are back together all six of them with their life experiences and together with their soul mates at the age of 12 or 13 so that part is good. A good read.Going to miss commenting on this series
