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Sorry to beat a dead horse but things are too good right now. BTW does Philip have any kind of a relationship with Javier's brother Juan?
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I'm worried one of the reporters might stumble on to the skinny dipping parties then things might go kablooey
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Pretty good cliffhanger there as you know I like to guess but other then it's something significant I have no idea what they found but if it's stuff from 1700 and 1800's it should be a doozy.
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Casper won't be there to help come up with a plan for James so one part would be for James to fly up to the second story window. The other part?Somehow create a diversion?James won't be strong enough to open or break the window.Can't wait to see what you come up with. These kids Lewis referred to maybe they are his own kids who have some kind of power that is the only thing I can think of.
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This part of your comment got me thinking.None of what I'm about to write this may happen depending on which direction the author will go.But if Mayson has lost his legs then Hunter will realize as you say karma has paid him back.Since Mayson can't really hurt anyone anymore at least not the same way perhaps Hunter may not cooperate with the police investigation or he will say nothing sexual took place the reason would be obvious he doesn't want to be outed and like any victim would not want the details to become public.Other factors might come up to make this more complicated.Then again I may be way off nothing new there LOL.Can't wait to find out
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Spanking would not be a punishment if everybody did it the way Philip did it
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Philip is awesome.I have one worry that one kid unintentionally opens his big mouth and draws attention to what goes on there.Philip now being public that would be a sensationalized story but I hope it doesn't go there
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I agree with @CaJu I think the accident Dale overheard the ladies talking about was Mayson. I'm guessing it will be revealed that Hunter was in a drugged state all this time.If it was Mayson that had the accident he may have been unfit to drive. After that crap Olivia said it would be very hard to stay friends with her.If it was me and I had been friends with somebody for a long time I would do some soul searching but I would be leaning toward dropping him/her as a friend.How did Madox miss this side of her?
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When some these bullies get positions of authority as an adult watch out.I think more school systems still turn a blind eye then the ones that try to have anti-bullying programs and society pays for it later on. In school my peers and I all did a little of what Mathew is doing gay and straight.One good one is walking or riding your bike pass the house of the person your interested even though it way out of the way you're going but when Jonah passed the restroom to go to his locker and then doubled back to go to the restroom and Mathew still followed not very smooth. Is Mathew as big of a tub of lard as he says he is or is he exagerating because he has low self esteem
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I guess details will be revealed in the next chapter. but the place in Philadelphia did it get sold does the family still own the land or did something hinkey happen? That story of John on how he started dating his former classmate that could be a GA story in it's own right. If my math is right when Angela and Maria become freshmen in HS Vic will be a senior.If the girls are as pretty as their Mother then Vic will still have a full time job making sure suitors treat his sisters right
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I hope Casper had enough time so that his text to James made sense. I imagine it will have to do with James flying outside the window of the floor Tasha is on. One of the kids Casper spoke to Alistair his sarcastic comment to Casper about meeting a super human who isn't full of himself makes me think there's a rebellious streak in him.He might be pretending to be going along with the Family program but really isn't and is waiting to find a way out. Or I'm way off again LOL
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I'm curious what Philip's answer to the reporters will be
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I guess the police fund will take care of the brothers. 40 bucks a month huh?Am I too old to join that program kidding LOL
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Hey no hurry post at your own pace we ain't going anywhere. I have to admit I'm not familiar with cross breeding Friuts and vegetables are there any examples? Just like Brad and Tom took Peter and John under their wing Charlie remembered he was better at farm equipment then school and offered to help John there are some good people at Tony's farm.One day maybe John can do Tony's books he has a lot to keep track of
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Perfect there's nothing to add to Rick and Gus beautiful first time. Other observations I guess Mrs.Lee's chickens being in Rick's back yard will lead to Mrs. Lee finding out how Rick's night went. My first reaction to Rick's Dream is I'm thinking it's the place where Gus lived as a boy where all that stuff happened.My guesses are usually wrong but that's what came to mind. You mentioned at the top of the chapter that anyone looking for Rita or Heinrich will be disappointed.You mean there are actually people looking for Rita and Heinrich???
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I said in a earlier comment that I said hope Dale,Evan and maybe even Madox(that's how I worded it) would help Hunter but I didn't see it happening like this.There was also another figure in Mayson's video I wonder how that is going to figure in this.I'm hoping that Olivia while still a little homophobic might be changing perhaps Vicky spoke to her or is that wishful thinking?
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I'm staying with this story. The only thing I'll say is it affecting his performance on the football field and if that continues he'll lose his scholarship anyway for these day the are arranged one year at a time and they can cut him loose if he doesn't perform at a certain level.So Hunter might as well come clean and hope the coach is not a homophobe because this way is unsustainable.
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I got one of my predictions right about Vicky.And while I thought Mayson may be a jerk no way did I think he was going to be a big of POS as he turned out to be.Well now Hunter besides being a victim has another dilemma if he can''t come out because he's afraid of being kicked off the football team then reporting being raped is totally off the table. I'm hoping Dale,Evan and hopefully even Madox might help him out on this but first they have to be made aware.BTW I don't think they can take away Hunter's scholarship for being gay but they might try something else to kick him off if that's what they want to do.
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Ok just discovered this and I'm in the process of binge reading this and love what I'm reading so far.I wasn't going to post a comment until I caught up.But I'm compelled to make a few predictions.Vicky is not Dale's GF she's his bestie which would explain her taking Hunter by the hand to sit next to them and her whispering in Dale's ear and Dale then blushing.Hunter said Mayson seemed cool the first day he moved in I think Mayson heard he was a jock and made assumptions after that.I sort of did the same thing I thought Hunter would be somewhat arrogant and think about his status but clearly he's not that kind of guy. I'm wrong more than I'm right when I guess like this but I'll find out soon enough on to the next chapter
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Hunter told Casper that his name was Lewis and there was no indication in the narrative that Casper knew he was lying I wonder if that is significant maybe his name is Hunter Lewis.I wonder If the Family will be mad that Hunter brought Casper to their headquarters especially if(when?)they escape
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Philip's dad is suppose to be showing up soon will that mean a moratorium of their fun while he's there?
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If Patrick was able to find these guys on the cam then the rest of the staff could also.Maybe they only look if something is missing etc.Perhaps the staff watches the activity that goes on there and gets turned on.Patrick and the gentlemen's club should take precautions.
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I remember in the U.S.dyslexia wasn't part of the public discourse until the late eighties in this story's time period it was unheard of by the general public.Brad and Tom were pretty smart to be able to detect it.
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Just discovered this and I binged read the 4 chapters and I'm loving it but it's really late now after reading this @#$%& kidding LOL.You wrote that this is your first story on GA have you written on other sites?This reads like you have wrote before. Not only can I see the combination of Michael and Jonathan helping Ethan I also think Jonathan could relate totally to what Michael has gone through interesting times ahead
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This story can go so many directions some we probably will see coming but with you writing it I bet there will be plenty of surprises .I'm anxious too see what happens
