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    Chapter 9

    How ever long it takes for you to get inspiration we will be here no worries. I know it's been awhile since the last chapter but is this the first we heard of the murder?I forgot Just what every teen boy like Hunter wants penises on their phone 🙄 come to think of it I wish I had friends like that in highschool
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    Chapter 53

    The Trustees still don't communicate adequately.Adam had to hear from the architect about being the college president.Maybe some of the Trustees don't because he didn't have a brandy with them.It will definitely be a challenge but Adam is up to it Hmmm Onion Pie.Never had it but it sounds great.
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    Chapter 52

    It sounds like some of the trustees were ready to grill Adam on what's been going on only to find out it was them who didn't do their due diligence to begin with and previous staff got away with a lot of stuff.
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    Chapter 14

    I'm sure there's a precedent for what Davey's Dad was trying to do but the California lottery was still fairly new in 86.While what the dad was trying to do was dead wrong Sandy should help out some of that side of the family's issues after all they are relatives to her children and in some cases they have a good relationship like Aunt Bev.It will be interesting how sandy and her materialistic ways will react.This Davey is still pretty smart and with Brian to influence him with his experience I think they will do OK. This Sampson that was mentioned I wonder if he's going to get into this story.This comment I was going to make last chapter but I forgot Jenny is a little different in this timeline and is a molestation victim.Is it possible she won't be supportive of Davey when she learns he is gay
  5. It is still an issue today if somebody isn't careful.I'm worried that among the people if it's not in the media they don't pay attention to it out of sight ,out of mind.I worry that a new strain will come.
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    Hunt: 8.6

    I never thought I would see the words spazzed out Pokemon in a story. Why do I think Cody is somehow going to get in the middle of things again
  7. I'm not surprised about law school in Massachusetts I read somewhere that the state has the most universities per square mile in it and most of them prestigious like Harvard and MIT. Believe it or not I agree about David and Noah I loved that story. While I also loved this story I was very,very bummed about Hayden. I know _ "stuff" happens .Thank you for this great series.
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    Chapter 51

    My first thought was that the meeting was ominous but why should it be?Unless there's a unfounded allegation. Why would have a door to a room plastered over.You can always use a room that makes no sense.
  9. I might be mistaken but I think this is the author's first story it is the first to appear on GA.This is an enjoyable read with characters you grow to like and like most stories one character you despise and one you outright hate even with that character you have a little sympathy toward the character .I won't tell you why you have to read the story for that.The writing got progressively better with each chapter and he plans to write with these characters again so it's a good bet the next one should be better.
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    Epilogue

    I guess your saving the details for the future stories .It would be interesting on how they made the decision on having kids etc.Looking forward to it Thank you.
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    Chapter 50

    Did the Doctor inadvertently tell Adam how Marie feels about things?
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    Chapter 13

    My very first reaction to that is how the hell did Brian remember those numbers?Well it's safe to say they won't move into that place in Ceres but where will they move?Forgive my choice of words but Sandy is portrayed somewhat different in this timeline it sounds like she gets a wild hair up her ass and runs with the idea hastily.God knows how she'll be now that she has money. There is no reason for Davey to take that job and they don't need his financial help anymore but you have to consider unintended consequences this might start a chain of events of who knows what.If Davey gets mad at Brian I hope Brian reminds him of the Super Bowl bets the other Davey did.Be very interesting where this goes. it sounded like Brian has some follow up plan involving his mom and Davey's mom .
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    Hunt: 8.5

    James and Cody seem to be gradually bonding if only Cody would stop calling James a pretty boy twink Is it really a date when the person you're dating (Casper)lives in the same house?
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    Chapter 49

    Remember when we first met Dr. McMillian ? I said he wasn't the sharpest knife in the drawer and this chapter proved that.He goes to Adam angry that Adam interfered with his responsibility and then in the next sentence shows how irresponsible he is by not having a medical record for Ralph. My high school had a nurse on call I bet Marie a Nurse practitioner is more qualified to handle that at the school than Dr. McMillian was. Just a thought. It would be interesting to find out how many car accidents were caused by sleep apnea.Or any kind of accident .
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    GFD: Persona 2

    So now what so far has been real and what so far has been a dream?Was he really a vampire did the incident in the park really happen? Is he really in a psychiatric hospital? Have we really read the last two chapters🤔
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    Chapter 48

    Whatever works for you is fine with me
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    Chapter 48

    This chapter reminds me so much of a tv show I used to watch called Bar Rescue the premise is a bar is about to go out of business and they call this expert in to fix the problem in the bars that had a kitchen and served food all of them were unbelievably filthy any gross thing you can think of they came across.The host of the show would leave and yell "You better have this place clean when I return tomorrow" A lot like Adam in this chapter. Interesting how the board of directors offices are fancy.Can't wait to hear how their living quarters are described.How much was the tuition?
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    Chapter 12

    The last line of the chapter"'Life was good, damn good" Why does that make me feel so uneasy? I heard about that mostly gay beach in Hawaii a friend of mine who is straight visited friends there and one day he decided to go and kick it on a beach alone and do some reading although he didn't pay much attention to the beach goers he noticed it was mostly guys and bodybuilders his friends told him after the fact that it was a gay beach LOL. So Davey seems to be getting convinced that he and Brian are meant for each other.Will it happen with Sean and Brandon again?And will Todd figure in it some way? Marcie has been quiet but it doesn't feel like its over for some reason.What if Marcie got together with that black guy who called Davey a racist and a dark baby comes out of her
  19. Nice chapter .Does Miguel remind Phillip of Javier by any chance?
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    Chapter 15

    Your killing me I'm getting hungry
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    Hunt: 8.4

    James thought he looked manly and Cody said he looked Emo wow quite a gap.
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    Hunt: 8.3

    I have cousins in Adelaide and Mt.Gambier are you in that neck of the woods?
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    Chapter 47

    When I was in high school I worked in a navy mess hall they made us pass a food handlers test after being given a lecture and presentation.This "chef" failed the most basic rules especially about the gloves it I wonder how many kids got sick over the years faculty also for that matter
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    Chapter 2

    There is being fanatical about religion and there is being dangerous and I think this church falls into that category. Matt's dad sound likes the late Reverend Phelps the one who would take a group of his flock outside of a funeral of an aids patient and scream"God hates fags".And Pastor Sampson thinks he qualified to convert that other gay kid this is a nightmare. Part of Ricky's overreaction to Matt at school today probably has something to do Matt's parents if Matt can't talk to Ricky for a week for throwing a spitball I bet Ricky shutters at the reaction to a kiss.
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    Chapter 46

    I assume Adam can't just fire Arlene I'm sure there's some kind of procedure and she has a contract etc. but at the same time the very idea of working FOR Adam probably appalls her so I guess she'll resign or maybe try to sue .Will his extra duties make it tougher to do what he does now?
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