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Interesting twist to end this book. They’re both fighting in different arenas to get back to what they know on Earth.
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Powerful chapter, Travis still has a lot of anger, and Oblivion keep nudging him in that direction. Glad that JJ is taking care of himself. Hopefully there is not a jealous Travis when they get back together.
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Great beginning. Looking forward to the rest of the story. I like the positive interaction between father and son. And Brian’s wanting to have an honest relationship with his son. Hopefully not too much drama with the ex and her bigoted boyfriend. Toby deserves a loving supportive home environment.
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Great beginning to what looks to be an interesting adventure. The boys are getting along, at least from James’ perspective.
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Very lovely short story. Thanks for posting it.
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So sad they messed him up with the imaginary Tin Can visits that he doesn’t believe that this visit from his mother was real.
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What did Lothar gain by this action with Edward, getting him to see Fran’s plight? Maybe it was for Edward to kill Gustave?
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Nice to get a little background into the intervening years. And more on how Tom became a singer. Interesting that he’s more famous outside the US.
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Aiden’s therapy session went well, and now to get down to some phone sex…
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Good for JJ putting himself out there, he needed some friends who had something else in common. And he learned that his poetry was good, and well received.
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The races were good. This is an interesting twist. Looking forward to what they talk about. There is obviously some kind of mating draw for Soren and Connor.
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At last Bazzelthorpe has a place to go find Vanus. Hopefully he will accept the rescue, and maybe Bazzelthorpe can do some damage to this other demon, to get him to leave Vanus alone in the future.
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Awesome ending, loved this story.
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This revelation sure explains the powers. The question that was not answered is was Travis a human baby, with Pro’s consciousness merged, initially? Then where does Oblivion come in, and now Body? Very interesting, looking forward to more.
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Great chapter, honest conversation about the bedroom activities the night before. It was interesting that Greg saw Scott in the mirror helping him with his tie. So was there something different about the mirror that Scott didn’t appear in, from the earlier chapter?
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It’s great how well they are getting along, church should be interesting, but we still have an interesting night ahead.
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The mirror scene was interesting, Scott looking in a mirror at himself? While Greg couldn’t see him in another mirror, very interesting. And then all of that neck action from Scott when they were in bed. Seems like that’s leading somewhere…
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Loved this chapter, the waking up, and very friendly banter, getting breakfast, taking care of business. Then the discussion of the building, that was fascinating. It feels like their friendship I’d deepening. Mutual respect too. Looking forward to more, and this story on Mondays is worth waiting for.
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Now that the kissing is out there for the whole family, Kyan will see that Perry’s house is all setup to move into, and they can save money not renting the other house. Maybe soon. They still have a little more to go on establishing the full extent of their relationship. Here’s hoping.
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This was an amazing chapter. Beyond Rusty’s pity party, there was some more understanding of what the “adults” in his life did to him in the past. He was not in a place to hear the truth that Matty loved him, as he was not loving himself at that point, feeling he was a very flawed person. Hopefully his friends help him see that’s not true, and Matty does not go off and do something crazy to get away from the hurt he is currently feeling. Rusty needs to apologize and realize his feelings for Matty and let him know.
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The Wretched of the Realm, Part 2
VBlew commented on Stephen Wormwood's story chapter in The Wretched of the Realm, Part 2
There is a lot happening in this chapter. At last Fran’s plans to get his title back are in place. Ed and Fran are both working together. And the plot to get rid of Gustave is in play. -
Loved the prom for 2. Josh is such a romantic.
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That was intense. Anderson did save his wife. Where is Bazzelthorpe. Still fighting?
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Into the Light of Another
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Into the Light of Another
Otis is very luck that Hudson is watching out for him. The innocence could have had someone like Jackie really taking advantage of him, and him ending up very abused. I really like where this is going. Hopefully they continue to build a relationship, and can be honest about their feelings.- 18 comments
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Great conversation, the flirting, teasing was fun. They really like each other and the tatoo… night,night…😍
