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Ash and Desmond deserve some alone time together, then down to business… Zareth is clueless about what’s happening around him, which is probably to the boy’s advantage. The found the location of the burial site, now to build a defense. As to writing two stories, at the same time. Follow your muse. We will be here reading whatever you write. It’s all amazing.
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Seth is thinking his dad left because he is gay and got found out, it really seems like his dad was gay and his mom couldn’t deal with that, and doesn’t even know Seth is gay… that’s just the way it read to me…
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The end of the date went really well. Setting up for a 2nd one. Was Alan just jealous enough to go have sex with Brandi to prove to himself he wasn’t gay? What is that going to do to their relationship? Maybe for the best if it means Jordan can have a relationship with Cal. Alan was pretty clear up front he just wanted a friends with benefits situation, but they seemed t grow beyond that. Will be interesting to see who says something first about Alan stepping out on their so far monogamous relationship…
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Brandon, going on about who he had fantasized about, hitting pretty close to home for Billy, since he had sex with Bobby when Brandon was out of town…not looking forward to the heartache that Brandon is going to have coming up…
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"The Book Of Disquiet"
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Book Of Disquiet"
Wow, the end of this book tied it up well, each has their separate lives now. And it seems healing. It has been an amazing journey. Some of it reflects past experiences of my own, it more it made me evaluate all of my prior relationships from a very different point of view. Thank you for this. -
Beautiful scene with Ben and Samantha arriving with their children. Touching at the end, the guys thinking about having their own family.
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A very funny family moment. Ryan will have these memories to look back on and laugh with his dads.
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Rick has some pretty amazing fantasies…. Hopefully reality matches.
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Did Sam get Gael out? Or was this Leo’s manipulation, to try and help Alex for himself. This is tragic for both of them. Leo is no better than the others.
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Evil aunt. We know Lucien lives, but what will this do to Amelie?
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Interrogations and Hospitals
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Interrogations and Hospitals
Stephen is a hero even if he doesn’t know it. Leon is very grateful. They are good brothers to each other. Stephen is going to need Michael’s support when he remembers what happened? -
Great business trip. Something changed with Keith, maybe the icy heart is thawing. Could be seeing how good Jon is for his dad… or correct boundaries being set.
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Marc is training his son and starson about managing within the house corporation. Love the new ships, especially the sleek black ops ship. Marc’s following of important people in his past is impressive. He’s always one step ahead. His relationship with Adam has grown as well. Loved the hologram dinner idea of having a family dinner. There must be some amazing tech to have that level of communication between such far off distances.
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Great epilogue, to a wonderful story.
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The revelation that Maverick’s crypto investments would make him a multimillionaire astounded him. Now for some sophisticated additional investments. Orion is helping him. Just like he was mentored. Randy and Maverick are really good together. He will be moving sooner than later.
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Awesome fight scene, light overcoming darkness. Well done.
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Swimmers in competition have amazing bodies and physical stamina, the celebration is going to be amazing.
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Kieran passed the first trial on his second try. He needs to listen to what the Morain says. She gave him a huge clue that he ignored. I really like Garran. Hopefully Rory does not get too jealous of Kieran spending so much time together. I suspect the maid they were given of the plot against Garran, the smell of lavender being a giveaway?
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Like a slow drip. Loving the story, just wishing for more. We learn a little about his beginnings.
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Payback is a bit_h… Noah is completely in charge now. But will this end at the end of the reunion? Or continue on?
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An amazing journey. Thanks for sharing.
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Act II - The Point Of No Return
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - The Point Of No Return
Did the vampires attack the witches and have Gabriel? Or dis something else happen? Ray has an innate sense of what needs to be communicated and just does. Timmy is awesome cheering Ray up from his funk. The suspense you are leaving us with in these chapters is palpable. Can’t wait for the next chapter. -
Cash is a true friend. He loves Jackson and wants him to have something good in his life. That whole rodeo scene was fantastic. All of the tension leading up to the kiss. Jackson needs to figure out what he wants.
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Loved the family time, and the talk about the essay and reading thereof. Good on Toby to leave out the relationship with Russ. He seems more perceptive than the guys were giving him credit for. The family time out at the various places was enjoyable too. Loved they included the Vegan restaurant for Toby. We’ve been vegan for like 13 years now. So always interesting to see people’s inclusion of that in stories.
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Oh, new test subjects for Emerson…
