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Chapter 6: Hidden Agendas
VBlew commented on Jason D. Karl's story chapter in Chapter 6: Hidden Agendas
Fun time turning out a Mormon boy. That seems like a really bad use of Shawn’s powers to get picked up like that… -
Wow, what a way to end a book… there is a lot of love between these guys.
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Another great chapter. The “parents” needed some alone time. I agree that a marriage proposal mid sex is not the best timing… the grandparents are very supportive. Slav did great with his explanation of his meeting Rory and subsequent interactions. They both really are enamored of the other.
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That fight scene was amazing. Kind of Matrix like in my head. Although how the paradox of having two Alecs in the same place is curious. Nobody died in this time to unravel the future… looking forward to the end of this book and the next one.
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Wow, that funeral home was eerily quiet, then the Halloween party at the Velvet room, someone tipped off Vinnie or Carmine about Ralph, so that Ralph’s office building was burning by the time the guys got there… seemed too quick. Hope Ronnie is not bugged or they will be caught unawares the hole time they search for Josh. Ronnie is a wimp win faced with bullets flying. Not the same bravado as he had in the beginning. They are armed now. Hopefully the real estate list will help them find Josh. Zeke’s game playing really translated to real life fighting.
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It’s interesting how Jack smells like cinnamon to Theodore, and not sure why it irritates him so. Fated mates scents are interesting.
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Excellent work Hugo. So much better than getting shot, even with a bulletproof vest. Now what happens in the lounge with Alec and Harry?
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Leo seriously needs to go back to counseling…. Going out with an Egaro and lying about being bonded is very bad…
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A very eventful reunion. 30 yrs for Hugo… loved Alex’s marriage proposal then wedding ceremony. Will be interesting to see what happens differently this time.
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Vane went too far, will there be disciplinary action?
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Jace is still in love with Noah, Matteo is still the same snake spewing lies. The children are stuck between all of this.
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Loved the house tours. I liked the second one with the private waterfall. I can see why they liked the first one, it fits their artistic needs.
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It took both aggregates in the form of Stoker and Thomas working together to fix the transit station. And now Thomas is no longer trapped in the mirror universe, and had 2 friends, they just need to go get Hugo.
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Awesome coming out for Jasper.
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Very serious chapter, both sharing very personal things about their past and Max’s inner dialogue was almost out of control, but Roman calmed him down…
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The negotiations to this relationship were intense. Max had so much processing to do to get to yes. Especially with regards to what his relationship with Sam had been. So much insight. The whole thing about what their safe words meant was very interesting. Very happy they worked it out.
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Chapter 13: Roommates Share Everything
VBlew commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 13: Roommates Share Everything
What is Mason going to be like after this? Will he be ok with it or be a jerk? He really got off on telling Eli exactly what he wanted… -
[Memory, Early December, Sophomore Year] – Don’t Read Into It
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Early December, Sophomore Year] – Don’t Read Into It
Another blinders on moment for Lyn. Not seeing Alexander’s true feelings for him. -
Danny gave great advice about loving who you love and not caring about what sex they are. It’s great to see that they love each other and know that they love each other even if it’s not being in love with each other.
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Will’s bad timed reveal about Edmonton almost got Jimmy spiraling. But Will knew exactly what to do to get him back…. This Andrew was not so fortunate, having a manipulative b—ch of a girlfriend, drove him to need real help, and Jimmy could not be that. Hopefully he survived and made it through. You said you spoke recently and got more perspective on what happened, so I assume he is ok now.
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What a cliffhanger, Billy manning up to keep Hugo from being lobotomized! Can Thomas leave the hall of mirrors? Will he need a watch, or his aggregate enough for him to travel? So may questions.
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Jasper, where is that man of confidence?
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That’s a terrific achievement, with nary an I to be seen. Beautiful short story.
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Glad the men have broken through the fever and are recovering. Avery, what were you thinking, telling that to the captain? Loved Andrew Pit’s reply to Blake, he does know his brother…
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Mark was driving the car, but did he have a watch then? Billy has the watch Hugo gave him. Could he do something with that and reset this timeline? Hugo with all of this paradox unraveling it being undone.
