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Chapter 10: Peak Coaching (Jonas)
VBlew commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 10: Peak Coaching (Jonas)
Great story, loved the growth in both men instruction can be very good. Great place to end it as well. -
Interesting introduction to a new character.
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Now that ending of the chapter was an interesting twist.
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Chapter 7: Afterglow and Aftermath
VBlew commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 7: Afterglow and Aftermath
Loved the honest conversation. They both like each other a lot. And this doesn’t seem like a rebound. More like a finally being honest with yourself moving to what’s right relationship. -
Ain was very lucky finding Fenn, just a little later or a different direction and he may not have. They need to discuss what happened and devise a plan in case someone tries capturing them in the future. Niven will be interrogated to find out about how he got his powers and the location of the laboratory.
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Very structured time. I really enjoyed the scene, and had to laugh at the rom-com ending with the father coming in, and the children coming back. Right after everything had been put away.
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The Holiday: More snapshots & the return
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in The Holiday: More snapshots & the return
Great ending to the holiday trip. -
Wow. Just Wow. Amazing chapter. And a huge cliffhanger.
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Fenn didn’t notice the dart until it was too late. Now a captive, hopefully he figures out a way to become a shadow without getting tortured.
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Wow, Will was in amazing form, and having the last was brilliant. Now on to the election.
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Matt was brave enough to admit what he was feeling and that reopened their relationship. Kitt’s home life seems pretty miserable.
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Was Darryl a target for elimination from his own agency or did the data exchange get compromised?
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Love the mysterious beginning. Seems like they work for clandestine agencies, which could put them both at risk for a personal relationship.
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Little B whipped up a tornado inside the room, after he got Shiloh away. CC was awesome toying with the Keller Brothers. No longer a problem. Noah and Shiloh are back together.
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Frosted Hearts: The Truth Is Right There
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Truth Is Right There
Michael got his comeuppance, Five was not putting up with any more BS from him. Percy got called on his relationship, and then after the crew left, he and Five actually had a good conversation about their feelings and the other involved party. The mystery of who has been spying on them is interesting. Time to change the security codes. -
It’s interesting the Heralds attention to Fenn. So we find out that Ain is an author of “romance” novels, and Petre is his translator.
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William Harker’s Journal: Entry 48
VBlew commented on MrM's story chapter in William Harker’s Journal: Entry 48
This is the life of a vampire he was warned about. I’m trying to remember in this world if there are humans that are willing blood donors, so the vampires don’t actually have to kill to feed? -
Jesse is a raw nerve, seems like Hank, steady hand and grounding is helping him.
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Will has all of his family’s support for the debate. Alex was awesome, defending his father. The Jet needs to be an upgrade!
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The visit by the moon goddess was inspired. Jack was horny when he woke up.
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Chapter 5: Stormy Weather (Jeff)
VBlew commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 5: Stormy Weather (Jeff)
What a way to deal with a snowstorm that shuts down the slopes. -
Great chapter. Pete did an excellent job in the debate, unflappable. Got the truth out about Andrew. Very nice.
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Fantastic party for Brian. Cliff’s surprise gift will help them get their own place. The ending was a little dark, but that’s always been there with Shaun…
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Sean figured out that Gabriel’s cover name was fake. And that he has a tell when he’s lying. It’s getting interesting.
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They have learned to make other things with their combined powers. Armor and weapons are a good start. Now to find this mysterious lab that is experimenting on people giving them powers.
