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Great story in my favorite genre. Love the interactions between James and Silas. I was wonder if earth had been taken over by another race the way the Nova-Torians were talking about the status of the planet.
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Poitr has no idea, they want a magic being to be a battery, have they already tested it, why are they targeting Flynn? The interaction between Flynn and Gary is very touching. Sounds like they may not get Friday night.
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So Alex and Charlie had an interaction over Nathanial. But they are neither saying anything about it.
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Wow, first day of High School. Loved the effort of trying to get the fast food job.
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Absolutely fun, yes, more please.
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Interesting chapter as usual. Neil now has a key to the flat. And they are both working more. Will be interesting to see if the uncle actually gives a gift that is practical.
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They were going to be separated again and probably longer than 3 months. The kiss was needed.
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Taylor is flirting and trying to seduce Ryan to get a better role in the production. Jasper and Ryan really connect between takes for the music video.
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That was a trip literally. Shiloh mind linking and giving him the whole story. The predator going after his prey, then getting killed by a ghost. Damian was distraught. Hopefully he tells his father enough to get help.
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Damn, this was an excellent chapter, I just don’t get why they are each torturing themselves… but it is moving the story along.
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Thokk has a delima. Is Harry having a similar problem? Are they both attracted to each other, is this resonance something they both feel. Thokk certainly was able to see something in the girls selected, but was not attracted to them.
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Levi is learning and growing. His visit with Father Costas gave him more to think about than being given an answer directly. Matt didn’t know Levi had never seen his birth certificate. That seemed to make their relationship more real. Now about this upcoming birthday. If there is a celebration hopefully they will invite Levi’s friends too.
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Taggert’s timing of fully revealing himself to both Ash and Branford it telling that he is comfortable enough to move forward. Ash’s saying I Love You after that was important. This is very interesting that Taggert owns the Yoder Homestead. There may be an eviction coming, or some amazing rent due to keep Zane living there… who will Taggert name as successor? Ash? Will they get married and have a child by surrogacy? Will Taggert partner with Bert to buy the Flemmings ranch? Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reading this, knowing their future is very interesting. Love their interactions and this is filling in some gaps in their histories.
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Great chapter, everything came out ok, including Ariel to his parents.
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Chapter 23 Boy Meets Dark Knight
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 23 Boy Meets Dark Knight
Sam’s confession to Emory led to reconciliation and some hit make up sex. Then Emory got some advice and named the perp who had done similar things to others. Hopefully he is arrested and tried for his evil doings. Sam and Emory are stronger than ever. -
Part XIV. Cold Insultation
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part XIV. Cold Insultation
Robert is running away and it’s not working. He is in better shape, but still not willing to get back into his Mechaman suit… Chad is miserable too…. -
The sister was interesting, not really wanting anything of her deceased brothers. Basically got rid of everything. But was certain it was not suicide.
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Part 13: First Official Date
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 13: First Official Date
This seemed like a really nice date. Bowling can be fun. -
Love this chapter, mix of coming of age and angst teen rom-com vibe. Throw in the supernatural vampire mix and this world is forming.
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The smoldering from the earlier chapters turned into fire in this one. Looking forward to what they get up to after the next session.
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Great chapter? Violet was getting into the script. I thought they had a party to be at? The physical things happening seem like a prelude to an earthquake.
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It seems Roger got hit by a car, damn bad luck all around tonight.
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Loved the ending, seemed to have more personality in this chapter.
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Part XII. Residual Heat
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part XII. Residual Heat
The taking care of each other’s wounds was exactly what they needed.
