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Cards on the Table - 57. Chapter 57 Revealing Duplicate Hands

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Warning: Sexual content.

Cards on the Table

 

 

Chapter 57

 

 

Michael was experiencing an irritating case of nerves. Christmas was in two days, and he was having regrets over not consulting Kendall about getting ‘Eyebrows.’ They made decisions together, and a puppy that grew into a big dog that pooped and peed with regularity was a big deal; not to mention the attention it would need. He wouldn’t be so worried if it hadn’t been for Kendall’s passing comment a few days before. It was about how he was glad that all of Dinah’s offspring had been spoken for, because it would have been a lot to take on with the new house, a wedding, and a baby coming.

He fretted, while constantly checking on the macaroni and cheese casserole baking in the apartment’s oven, like the inexperienced cook he was. Removing the glass lid was the last step. His excitement built as the time approached for Kendall to be walking through the door. It would be nice to get the Christmas holidays officially started.

They had an opportunity to spend the night at the apartment because Bodie was sleeping over at Michael’s parents’ house, and he wanted to make the most of it. He just hoped his first attempt at a non-take-out dinner was a success. There was a mixed grill of pork chop, bacon, and sausage to go with the heat-and-serve casserole picked up from Rama Foods earlier that day, already fried up and keeping warm on the stovetop. Thank God his mom gave him step by step instructions, after she got over the shock of his request. She’d been giggling when he ended the phone call. To be more accurate, she’d giggled through the entire conversation. A mixed green salad that came out of a bag was now in bowls on the counter set for two, waiting for Kendall’s favorite Catalina dressing to be added.

Checking a few minutes later, Michael saw the small brown circles his mom had told him to watch for on the surface of the bubbling yellow, and was quick to turn off the heat at the same time he checked the clock. The uncertainty of what to do next was taken care of by the sound of a key in the lock, and he quickly removed the hot Corning-ware dish his mom had suggested he use, from the oven.

He was fast enough to meet Kendall in the entry, where he was hanging up his coat. “Welcome home, Babe. I’ve been waiting for you.”

“What smells so damn good? Is Mom here?”

“Ha ha. Very funny. I’ll have you know it was all me, except for some help from Rama and one phone call.”

“To Mom?” Kendall teased as he turned from the closet to wrap his arms around his raven-haired cop. Michael sighed at the feeling it always gave him. Kendall was his home, and he breathed him in.

“Yeah, you caught me,” he admitted, grinning before finding those perfectly sculpted lips with his own. “Merry Almost Christmas, Deuce.”

“Right back at you, Ace. This will be my best one ever.”

“It’ll be mine too.” He couldn’t help the nervous glance over at the two small gifts at the bottom of the tree. Hand in hand they went to the kitchen counter. “You sit down and I’ll serve.”

“This all looks awesome. Do I smell bacon?”

“Be patient, will ya? Let the master chef do his work.”

Kendall laughed until Michael’s pout finally disappeared, replaced by a self-deprecating grin.

 

They’d taken their time over dinner and the washing up, enjoying the quietness and the easy conversation, mostly about Kendall’s work day. By the time they were done, the winter sun had set, and only the lights on the tree and windows lit the apartment. Last Sunday had been a wonderful evening of reconnecting physically and emotionally after an up and down day with Chet and Arron, and later, with Candy. But it was now Friday, and they were more than ready for another one.

Kendall had changed into a tee shirt and sleep shorts to match Michael, and they were situated back to chest on the couch watching an old beach movie that was a shared favorite. Their old routine felt good, and Michael got the most enjoyment from Kendall’s laughter behind him, shaking him every so often. It was unexpected when Kendall turned the volume down on the television.

“So, what else did you do today besides cooking an awesome meal for us?”

Michael stalled by coughing. He was hoping he wouldn’t be asked that question. “Well, I did something you’re not going to believe.” He laid his head back on Kendall’s shoulder.

“Let me guess. You called Candy about Christmas?”

“What? Shit, you’re good. How did…?” Hell, he should have known. “Okay, so… I started worrying about the girl spending it all alone, but I didn’t have to call her, so you’re only partly right. I called Janine, who told me she wasn’t going home this year either, and her plan was to spend the day with Candy. The two of them are going to make a turkey dinner, and another girlfriend is supposed to show up in the afternoon. I didn’t recognize the name, though.”

“What about Lanny?”

“He’s spending tomorrow night with Janine, and then visiting his family Christmas morning. Janine says he won’t subject her to his family yet, because they’ll all be drinking and arguing the whole time. Pretty sad, eh?”

“Yeah, it is, but it doesn’t surprise me with some of the things he’s said about them. I think his term was ‘a bunch of degenerate rednecks.’ So he’s not going to see Janine on Christmas Day?”

“This is where it gets kind of weird… but not in a bad way. Janine had to work hard to convince him, but Lanny is going to try to make it back in time for dinner with them all. Apparently, Candy apologised to him again, and said it would make her happy if he would come. The woman is definitely a different animal.”

“I told you we could trust the change in her.”

“Yes, you did, and it looks like you were right. I called Lanny and left him a message saying I thought he did the right thing for Janine’s sake and I was proud of him for trying to forgive what was done to him. How did you know what was on my mind?”

Kendall laughed. “I could say I know you better than you know yourself, but the truth is, I called Candy.”

Michael burst out laughing himself. “I should have known. So then you already knew all of this?”

“No, I didn’t know the whole story. Candy told me you’d already checked on her, and that Janine was going to be spending the day with her, and that’s all the information I got. I was interrupted by the police showing up with some questions about an accident in the driveway, and I never got back to her.”

“What were you going to do if you found out she’d be alone?”

“Same thing as you. Invite her to dinner at Mom and Dad’s. Thank God we didn’t have to, though. That would have been way too strange.”

“Yeah, it would, but it’s Christmas and you know what Mom would say.”

“She’d have been on the phone introducing herself, and telling you and me we’d have to pick her up.”

“Sounds about right. Mom puts everything aside at Christmastime.”

“So, when are we going to open our little gifts we weren’t supposed to get each other?” Kendall whispered in Michael’s ear.

Michael steeled himself, knowing Kendall would eventually forgive his impetuousness. “It’s up to you. When do you want to do this?”

“It feels like Christmas right now, doesn’t it, with all the lights sparkling? Tomorrow’s going to be crazy in Uxbridge, so this is the only night it’s just us.”

“So, you want to open them now?”

“Yup. If you do?”

“Okay. Let’s sit under the tree.”

“Good idea, but you have to get off me first. And we should put on some holiday music.”

 

“Here you go, Babe. Open mine up first.”

“I did that a few days ago,” Kendall said with a chuckle.

It took Michael a second to clue in, and then he laughed. “Yes you did, and I loved the thought you put into your gift.”

“I’m not sure I had a coherent thought the whole time, but I figured that was my gift, not yours.”

“It was both of ours… the gift that keeps on giving.” Michael’s smirk made Kendall laugh.

“I love, you, Michael Aceto.”

“I love you too. I just hope you still love me after you open your gift.”

“Why wouldn’t I…?”

“Just open it.”

Kendall looked curiously at Michael before concentrating on the square present. He opened it to find a plastic cube with pictures on all six sides… of an adorable mostly white puppy. “You got me Eyebrows?”

“I got us ‘Eyebrows,' but before you say anything, I’m sorry I didn’t consult you first. I realize now this was too big a decision to make with all the stuff going on in our lives, and you’re right about it being the wrong time for a puppy.”

“You really should have talked to me, Ace.” He handed him his gift and told him to open it.

“Are you pissed at me?”

“No, of course not. She’s beautiful. Just open your gift and then we’ll talk.”

Michael felt some relief as he opened the long narrow box. Inside was a black leather dog collar. He looked at Kendall and realization dawned on him. “You knew already? Did Bodie tell you?”

“No, he didn’t tell me, and I didn’t know.”

“Then why did you buy the dog collar? Is this for something kinky, because if it is, I’m game?”

“I’ll keep that in mind, horn-dog, but I think we have a problem. I had the same idea you had.”

“That’s awesome. We got her for each other then. That is so cool.”

“It would be if I picked the same puppy.”

“What?”

“I got you… us… a different puppy. I went there to see ‘Eyebrows’ and this other one claimed me. I should have listened to Bodie. He kept pushing, and I knew he was probably right, but the one he called ‘Patch’ climbed her way into my heart. No wonder he seemed upset when I told him I’d take her instead.”

“Shit. Two of them?” Michael started laughing. “Here I was, worrying that I shouldn’t have got one and now we have two! What the hell are we going to do?”

Kendall wasn’t laughing. “I guess we have to return one, or rather, not take one… but which one?”

“Aw, Babe. We’ll keep the little girl that worked her way onto your heart. I can love either puppy.”

“No way. We’ll keep the one you picked. That’s the one I was going to see anyway, and Bodie was really high on her. So, it’s settled.”

Michael watched Kendall closely as he went back to looking at the photographs. “Or, we could get both of them?”

“No way, we can’t do that.”

“Why not?”

“Because it’s crazy. Who, in their right mind, gets two puppies at the same time?”

“We do. Either we get the one you chose, or we get both?”

“But, that’s not being sensible, and why should we get the one I chose?”

“Because I want you to have her.”

“Well, I want you to have ‘Eyebrows.’ Heck, I loved her too.”

“You said too. You know what? I say we keep both. We have a huge house and a huge yard, and a dog-loving kid whose boyfriend is an experienced dog trainer who lives almost next door, and will likely be at our place more than we are. Not only that, Mom and Pop will be living there by spring, so there will almost always be someone there.”

“Are you done?” Kendall said with a grin, his first one since the revelation. “You’ve convinced me. We’ll keep both. The two of them slept on my lap while I was talking to Bodie, and I remember thinking that it would be nice if I didn’t have to choose. And now, I don’t.”

They both leaned forward at the same time, thanking each other with a kiss. Michael was happy that Kendall was happy. Eventually, he went back to looking at the collar. “We’re going to need another one of these, Babe.” Chuckling turned to laughter, and they ended up flat on their backs gasping for air at the ridiculousness of picking two different puppies.

 

A couple of hours later, Michael was looking down at his partner, their eyes locked. Foreplay was over, and working in unison, with Kendall pushing out and Michael pushing in, their immediate goal was achieved. All movement stopped once the big cock surged forward a few inches.

They were where they needed to be at that moment, and Michael loved watching the rosy flush rise up Kendall’s chest to his neck column. He knew what the expression on the face of the golden-haired man meant… he had experienced it himself, only days ago. It displayed that uniquely special feeling of belonging to someone in the most intimate of ways, and giving yourself to them. It was the enjoyment of the physical tension that existed temporarily, before giving way to the welcoming of your lover into your body completely. A sigh from his partner accompanied the lessening of the grip on his shaft, and Michael watched the magnificent man beneath him begin to move with languid grace, striving for more fullness.

Michael obliged with an easy nudge forward that became a steady glide. The appreciative sound from Kendall thrilled him. He lived to make this guy happy, and Kendall was definitely in a euphoric state. He writhed slightly as Michael’s groin pressed into him. When Michael leaned down to kiss him, his mouth was filled with both tongue and a groan giving voice to desire… need. Michael understood that as well. Kendall was telling him he wanted to be fucked. He was ready.

Bracing himself on both arms, Michael straightened his legs out so his knees were farther back on the bed, and began his retreat. It was slow and steady, and a handful of seconds gave an eternity of sensation before it was time to thrust back in. Poised again, just inside the entrance, Michael took notice of Kendall’s powerful hands gripping the sheets in anticipation. Everything about the man fired him up to heights he’d shared with him alone, and, keeping his eyes locked on Kendall’s face, he let himself become lost in the act of making love while he advanced forward with blissful purpose.

It was achieved when he felt his partner arch beneath him, and move his head with abandon. Michael received the signal for full steam ahead, and began fucking in earnest. He built up the pace until reaching the point he was practically slamming against the big man with each welcomed invasion, and it drove both of them deliriously crazy. Their bodies took over as they fed off each other through short strokes and long.

Kendall ended up pulling Michael onto him as the pumping became quick and erratic, trapping his wet, rigid cock between them. Michael knew what Kendall’s body was craving and made sure the friction was there, loving the feel of Kendall’s hands roaming his spine to his head, trying to get them closer still. With his lips sucking on his lover’s neck and collarbone, Michael hurtled toward the point of no return. He gave up trying to lift his head, giving in to the possessive grip Kendall had on the back of it.

With words that weren’t words, he let Kendall know he was riding the edge, waiting for him. Michael understood what was required, adjusting his body slightly, and changing the angle of his strokes so his long cock was driving upwards.

Kendall’s response was immediate. The strength of his now slippery body was astonishing as, after a few frantic gyrations at the attention his stimulated prostate was receiving, he arched more powerfully against Michael, and froze. He sounded like he was in pain, but his lover knew better. Not needing to hold back any longer, Michael gave a last thrust that sent him over the peak of the crest he’d been riding. Joining his partner’s chorus of sounds, he unloaded seconds after Kendall’s pulsing dick did the same, spreading liquid heat in the limited space between them.

Nothing in the world is better than this, was Michael’s first coherent thought as he rode his wave to the end. With each little pump, Kendall shuddered, yet his hands now gripped his partner’s ass, kneading and pulling as if to prolong their lovemaking. With a final spasm, his entire body relaxed, and he moved his hands up Michael’s back.

Michael raised his head from where it had landed on Kendall’s shoulder and gave him a supremely contented grin. “We’re getting good at this, aren’t we?”

“Hell yeah, we are,” Kendall replied with a throaty rasp. “I really think we need to do this more often.”

“Hallelujah to that. We have to make more time for us, Babe,” Michael mumbled with spent sleepiness evident in his voice as he lay his head down again.

“Says the guy who insists we keep both puppies.”

“That’s because I want my guy to have what his heart wants.”

“I already have what my heart wants, and he just took me to the moon and back.”

Michael smiled at that, and planted a kiss on the flesh his lips were touching. “Only the moon? Next time Jupiter. Count on it.”

“Jeez, I don’t think my spaceship could make that long a trip.”

“We’ll take mine, then… it’s got an extra powerful warp drive.”

Kendall laughed and groaned at the same time, as the gravity of the planet they were on caused them to separate.

“Are you okay?” Michael raised his head in concern at the sound.

“Yeah, never better… just feel kind of empty now, is all.” Kendall smiled as he spoke.

“I can cure that feeling if you want.”

“I know, and my mind is game, but I don’t think my body is. Besides, we have a mess to clean up.”

“I like being all messy with you.”

Kendall laughed again. “You say the weirdest but sweetest things. Come on. Hot shower.”

“Okay, I’m with ya, Babe.”

 

Twenty or so minutes later, they were curled up face to face, and Kendall’s eyes were closed in sleep. As tired as Michael was, he wanted to look at his partner for just a little longer. It was little more than a day from Christmas, but Michael had his gift right in front of him. The urge to have one more kiss was too strong to resist, and as he drew back, he was rewarded with the sight of Kendall’s lips curving in a hinted smile. Satisfied, he gave in to the weight of his own eyelids.

 

Michael was the first to wake up. It was closing in on 6:30am and his stomach was gurgling loudly. Sometime during the night they had shifted positions so he was behind Kendall, snuggled as close as two people could be. “Deuce, you awake?” No answer. “Babe… I think the apartment is on fire.”

“What?” Kendall’s head jerked up.

“I said I was hungry.”

Kendall groaned, stretched, and moaned. “That’s not what you said. You said the place was on fire.”

“You’re still asleep. You’re hearing things.” Michael kissed the back of his neck as he pushed his erection harder against the crease of Kendall’s hard yet soft ass.

“Oh no you don’t, big guy. There will be no seconds this morning. I’m not complaining, but that was one hell of a fuck.”

“I love it when you talk dirty,” he snickered. “I know, Babe. He was just saying good morning to you. Merry Christmas Eve.”

Kendall twisted around and Michael drank in his favorite sight… heavy-lidded turquoise on the handsome, bearded face. He watched puffy-looking lips part in a sexy grin. “Merry Christmas Eve to you too. So how come you woke me up?”

“So I could look at that face.”

Kendall laughed. “You are so full of crap. Was it because your stomach was growling?”

“No, I meant what… wait, if you knew my stomach was growling you must have been playing possum.”

“It was a lucky guess.” Kendall chuckled again. “I hear those noises damn near every morning. They’re my alarm clock. So I suppose you want to get up for breakfast?”

“I do, but this is good too. I’m feeding my soul right now.”

“I’d say you’re full of crap again, but I know exactly what you mean. I’m feeding mine too. I’ll never get tired of this.”

“Last night was amazing.”

“It always is.”

“Babe?”

“Yeah?”

“Mom will be cooking breakfast soon.”

Kendall sighed at the same time he smiled at his partner. “Not only that… if we call and let Miranda know we’ll bring Bodie home, we can pop in and see our puppies.”

“Puppies! Okay, enough soul feeding. Get up, Babe!”

 

It was a perfect early morning, sunny and filled with the aura of Christmas. Colored lights were everywhere. Wrapped Christmas gifts were in the back seat, and they were on their way to Uxbridge. Michael loved this time of year. His parents had always made it a special, even magical time for their kids, and it only got better when Kendall became a permanent part of it. There was too much going on in his sister’s life for them to make even a short trip, so he was determined Nate wouldn’t be too affected by his first holiday without his immediate family. The boy had become much more solid in his outlook, and Michael knew he understood better than anyone, the necessity of this separation. Besides, the kid had Bodie, who was the new center of his universe.

Kendall wheeled Beauty in to get gas. “I might as well fill her up now. There’ll be a lot of people out doing last minute shopping or traveling.”

“Good idea. Most of the stations will be closed tomorrow, and there’ll be lineups on Boxing Day. Something tells me we’ll probably be doing some driving over the next few days. We’ll be Nate’s taxi service, you know, and Mom likes us to drive around and look at all the decorations in the area.”

“That’s what I was thinking. Be right back.” Leaned over, he kissed Michael thoroughly just as a woman passed in front of their truck. She smiled at them, and continued on. Kendall exited, and Michael watched his man through the side mirrors, pumping gas. The contented grin never left his face, and, feeling truly blessed and suddenly spiritual, he sent a silent ‘thank you’ to the man above.

 

Back on the road again, they were quiet for a while. Traffic was picking up quite a bit, and Kendall had to pay attention to drivers darting in and out of plazas along the busy section of shops they were in. Surprisingly, there were already horns blaring as people hurried to get their shopping lists taken care of. It appeared every store in town had opened extra early. Once they were north of Markham, the hectic pace lessened.

“Do you remember the first time you ever bought me flowers?”

Michael was startled out of thoughts of their new home. “Of course I do. A dozen red roses. Why?”

“That wasn’t the first time.”

“It wasn’t? I thought the night I proposed was the first time?”

“Nope. Do you remember right after I moved into the apartment… like, less than a week later? I was sick as a dog, and flat on my back. I could hardly move, and you had to do everything for me.”

“I remember. You were puking on and off for two days.”

“It was the second time you looked after me when I was sick.” They shared a smile as they reflected on the significance of the first time. “And you bought me a potted flower.”

“Oh yeah. I went to the store for something… more ginger ale, I think. They had these Easter lilies on clearance, and I bought you one to cheer you up. I’d forgotten all about that.”

“I never forgot. It was such a sweet thing to do, Ace.”

“Well, it would have been if I hadn’t broke the thing practically in half when I lifted it out of the back seat.”

“I didn’t care. You propped it up on the counter so it leaned against the wall, and it worked. It cheered me up. You had no idea how much that one white flower meant to me.” He looked over at Michael, and Michael could see a sheen over the turquoise. “You went back out for something else, and I got up and tried to fix the broken stalk.”

“That’s right! You scotch-taped it, didn’t you?”

“No. I cut a piece of the drinking straw from my ginger ale, and slit it so it would fit over the stem. It worked pretty well too. I kept that thing alive for three more weeks.”

“I’m sorry I didn’t know what it meant to you, Deuce.” Michael felt a little stab in his heart.

“Don’t even, Michael. Don’t feel bad for doing such a nice thing, okay?”

“Okay. Oh, now I get it.”

“Get what?”

“Why you wanted a vase of white lilies on the mantle for our wedding. You said you wanted it in between the red roses.” A lump formed in Michael’s throat. His partner was a deep and thoughtful human being.

“Yeah, that’s why. There had to be lilies,” Kendall said softly as he stared at the road ahead.

“Why didn’t you tell me?”

“Because I didn’t think you’d remember… and I didn’t want to sound too sentimental.”

“Pull over onto that next road and we’ll take the back way up to Mom and Dad’s. The roads are clear.”

Kendall looked curiously at Michael, but did as suggested. There was no traffic on the county road.

“Stop the truck.”

“Why?”

“Because I need a hug and I don’t want to wait.”

That was all Kendall had to hear, apparently, because he pulled the big vehicle over. Michael slid sideways and pulled him close, squeezing tightly.

“I love that you’re sentimental, and the fact you care about all the little stuff means the world to me. I really am the luckiest guy in the world.”

“Second luckiest.”

“No, you’re not winning this one. You’re the wind beneath my wings.”

“Oh, dear God. I said that to you once, and you looked at me like I was nuts. You said it was the corniest thing you’d ever heard.”

“I’ve learned a lot since then. What? Too sentimental?” he teased.

Kendall laughed. “No, really, it’s sweet. I know what you’re doing.”

“We can say anything to each other, right? Nothing’s too corny or sappy. Don’t ever hold anything back, okay?”

“Message received.”

“Good. And just for the record… I loved when you said it to me. We should get going. I think I can smell Mom’s breakfast from here.”

Kendall laughed again. “So we’re back to your stomach again?”

“Priorities, Babe,” Michael replied while grinning smugly.

As Kendall started to pull back into their lane, Michael stopped him. “Did you bring up the flowers because of the wedding?”

“Actually, no. I was thinking about the newest members of our growing family. Bodie said he thought we should name the puppy… puppies… something other than their kennel names, and I see his point about them deserving people names.”

“Yeah, he told me something like that too. ‘Eyebrows’ is not a good name for a dog.”

“Neither is ‘Patch.’ What would you think of calling our two new girls Lily and Rose? Lily would be ‘Eyebrows’ of course, and Rose would be ‘Patch.’

“Absolutely perfect. They’re not just names, are they. I like that.”

“No… they’re memories.” Kendall smiled as he got them back on the road toward breakfast.

Lily and Rose. Their big house was filling up. If Nate didn’t already know about Rose, he was going to go crazy at the news. One more thing to keep his mind off his family not being able to make the trip. Michael couldn’t imagine Bodie telling him, and chuckled aloud. “Nate doesn’t know about Rose, does he?”

“No, I told Bodie not to tell anyone, including Nate.”

“Good. That boy is going to go apeshit. Kids and puppies, you know?”

Kendall gave him a teasing grin. “Yeah right. Kids and puppies. Uh huh.”

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On 03/23/2016 02:37 AM, Jaro_423 said:

So very beautiful. Gary, you are so very, very good at this. I loved the love scene. Magnificent. So wonderfully evocative and so right. I wish I could find better words to do it justice. Thank you!

And the build up to Christmas spent with the ones you love best. What could be better?! Puppies and kids! Wow! What a great combination that just speaks of family. And this is such an amazing family you are creating here.

The sheer wonder and beauty and romance of it all really gets to me, so I cried through most of the chapter too, you will be happy to know. Thank you again!

Thank you, Jaro. Your reviews always make my day! I love when the boys reconnect. They have busy lives, and they'll only get busier, so they have to make time for themselves. You're right... I'm happy I could move you to tears lol. I so appreciate the kind, supportive words, and the awesome review, my friend... cheers... Gary...

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This review is going to be short and sweet.
You've done it again Gary giving your readers a real treat of a read. Thank you.
Oh, as always, nicely done. :)

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On 03/25/2016 11:24 AM, Reader1810 said:

This review is going to be short and sweet.

You've done it again Gary giving your readers a real treat of a read. Thank you.

Oh, as always, nicely done. :)

Thank you, Reader. Your kind words and review is very much appreciated. :) . Cheers, my friend... Gary...

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"He lived to make this man happy" and "Nothing is better than this" say so much in this chapter. This was absolutely one of my favorite love scenes Gary. As always I loved the way you can convey their emotional and physical connection but with the focus on how making love to Kendall felt to Michael, this was something at least as special as the first time - maybe even more because of the rest of the chapter. Everything about it is why I (maybe we) love Michael so damn much. Cooking for Kendall, everyone knows that is an act of love especially when it doesn't come natural. Feeling the depth of Michael's love for Kendall through your writing. I mean how deep is the love when he was terrified of upsetting or worse disappointing Kendall with a puppy because of an offhand comment (and one likely meant to throw Michael off from what Kendall had done)but never once did it occur to Michael to be upset or disappointed in Kendall for doing the same thing. That's love in a nutshell Gary, when you are worried about how your actions are going to be received or affect the other person but are perfectly resolved to accept their actions with little to no qualms whatsoever. I feel this chapter is the absolute perfect compliment to the heart wrentching first chapter where we were sucked in so completely by the depth of Kendall's love for Michael when he put his cards on the table and both their despair at thinking their relationship was ending. In this chapter we get a solid reflection into the depth of Michael's love for Kendall. I mean the story of the Easter lily literally had me in tears. Right after the tender love scene to hear of how long Michael had "lived to make this man happy" even when he didn't realize what he was doing was too much. Lily and Rose might be names and certainly are memories yes, but they are also symbols of what a great writer you are and how you can dig into a character and make us fall and stay in love with him. Damn man, at this point Michael could commit murder and no one could convince me he didn't do it to protect Kendall in some way. Thanks for the balm, although I think this chapter was more like a healing touch.

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On 03/27/2016 01:41 PM, pzetts3 said:

"He lived to make this man happy" and "Nothing is better than this" say so much in this chapter. This was absolutely one of my favorite love scenes Gary. As always I loved the way you can convey their emotional and physical connection but with the focus on how making love to Kendall felt to Michael, this was something at least as special as the first time - maybe even more because of the rest of the chapter. Everything about it is why I (maybe we) love Michael so damn much. Cooking for Kendall, everyone knows that is an act of love especially when it doesn't come natural. Feeling the depth of Michael's love for Kendall through your writing. I mean how deep is the love when he was terrified of upsetting or worse disappointing Kendall with a puppy because of an offhand comment (and one likely meant to throw Michael off from what Kendall had done)but never once did it occur to Michael to be upset or disappointed in Kendall for doing the same thing. That's love in a nutshell Gary, when you are worried about how your actions are going to be received or affect the other person but are perfectly resolved to accept their actions with little to no qualms whatsoever. I feel this chapter is the absolute perfect compliment to the heart wrentching first chapter where we were sucked in so completely by the depth of Kendall's love for Michael when he put his cards on the table and both their despair at thinking their relationship was ending. In this chapter we get a solid reflection into the depth of Michael's love for Kendall. I mean the story of the Easter lily literally had me in tears. Right after the tender love scene to hear of how long Michael had "lived to make this man happy" even when he didn't realize what he was doing was too much. Lily and Rose might be names and certainly are memories yes, but they are also symbols of what a great writer you are and how you can dig into a character and make us fall and stay in love with him. Damn man, at this point Michael could commit murder and no one could convince me he didn't do it to protect Kendall in some way. Thanks for the balm, although I think this chapter was more like a healing touch.

I don't even know what to say. I love these guys... they're real for me, and I think for you too. I kept the lily scene in my head for quite a while, and I'm glad now that I held it back. The time was right to show more of who Michael was when they were, in appearance, just friends... at least, to themselves. This is an incredible review. I read it last night, and basked in it. A lot has gone on over the course of this story, but it always comes back to this great love of theirs. Thank you so much for this, pzetts... it is truly wonderful... cheers... Gary...

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Even in the midst of love-making, M and K are still totally connected at all levels. That makes what they have very special.
Two puppies--damn that's gonna need a huge pooper-scooper. Good thing Nate and Bodie are yong! :)
More please, my dear friend!u

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On 03/29/2016 12:35 PM, ColumbusGuy said:

Even in the midst of love-making, M and K are still totally connected at all levels. That makes what they have very special.

Two puppies--damn that's gonna need a huge pooper-scooper. Good thing Nate and Bodie are yong! :)

More please, my dear friend!u

I'm so glad their connection comes across for you... it does for me too. I would wish that for every one. Two puppies? Yeah, kind of crazy, but with two teenagers around, they'll get lots of attention. Thanks for the great review, my friend... cheers... Gary...

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Dinner for two was just about the sweetest thing. And following that theme pups for two, and there new names Rose and Lily perfect.

Since this might be the last love scene in the story. A house on fire lol. And of course it was perfect.

One last chapter I feel I should savor it like a fine wine.

 

Another fantastic chapter

Rock on Gary:worship::thankyou:

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On 5/22/2017 at 11:59 PM, Albert1434 said:

Dinner for two was just about the sweetest thing. And following that theme pups for two, and there new names Rose and Lily perfect.

Since this might be the last love scene in the story. A house on fire lol. And of course it was perfect.

One last chapter I feel I should savor it like a fine wine.

 

Another fantastic chapter

Rock on Gary:worship::thankyou:

Thanks, buddy. I'm so pleased you liked this one. That lily scene was very special to me... I held onto it for a long time... there's another one no one knows about yet... but it's these moments that I love to convey... honestly, I get lost in them when I'm writing... yes, one last chapter... for now... if I can get my act back in gear, there will be more :) ... thanks, Albert for your dedication to COTT... cheers... Gary....

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I love the part when they were at the gas station he gave a prayer to the Man up above that was so wonderful! I adore their love making, it seems like it's getting better and better with each time LOL (wink ;)) The white lily part was so beautiful it's so amazing how something that we think is insignificant is so special to the other person. I enjoy it when moments like that happen. It’s funny how they both went and got dogs puppies. the names were so special and significant to them just another beautiful sensational chapter!:2thumbs:

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On 7/23/2017 at 10:54 PM, patrick1991 said:

I love the part when they were at the gas station he gave a prayer to the Man up above that was so wonderful! I adore their love making, it seems like it's getting better and better with each time LOL (wink ;)) The white lily part was so beautiful it's so amazing how something that we think is insignificant is so special to the other person. I enjoy it when moments like that happen. It’s funny how they both went and got dogs puppies. the names were so special and significant to them just another beautiful sensational chapter!:2thumbs:

I thought you might like that :) . Happy you liked the lovemaking too. I loved writing Michael's POV... mostly, it's been Kendall's we've been getting.  You have it exactly right about the little moments, and the impact they can have... ones we often keep to ourselves and jealously guard. Thanks again, buddy, for another awesome comment... cheers... Gary... :hug: 

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I can't figure out if its you, or the boys, that are secret sadomasochists, Gary. If this were the real world I'd worry, but something tells me 2 puppies, a baby, and one and a half full time teenagers at home isn't going to be too much of a problem. :wub:

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24 minutes ago, Potterslashfan said:

I can't figure out if its you, or the boys, that are secret sadomasochists, Gary. If this were the real world I'd worry, but something tells me 2 puppies, a baby, and one and a half full time teenagers at home isn't going to be too much of a problem. :wub:

It's fair to ponder, buddy. I've done the kids, dogs, horses, house, sports, etc thing... still doing it to a point.... When it's something we love, it's, if not easy, doable and rewarding. What you need most is a big and caring heart. So yeah, you're right to assume it won't be a problem for these guys... and it doesn't hurt to have the circle of support they do. :)  I have faith, and you're are right to share in that... cheers... Gary....

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Rose and Lilly are beautiful names, but the story behind the names was even more beautiful. I love the comment that the puppies would also be memories of their love.  Puppies, romance and hot sex! What more can ya want out of a great chapter?🤔😊😆

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13 hours ago, raven1 said:

Rose and Lilly are beautiful names, but the story behind the names was even more beautiful. I love the comment that the puppies would also be memories of their love.  Puppies, romance and hot sex! What more can ya want out of a great chapter?🤔😊😆

I know, right? :P  I do try. :D  I love the story behind the names too... I've always felt sorry for men who couldn't be sentimental. It's a real gift to let yourself feel. Just saying.... And is there anything better than puppies? Glad you liked it, my friend. Cheers! :hug: 

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Love it! 

I have a feeling that Nate's Mom, Dad and two Sisters are going to show up at Big Mike's and Colleens as a Suprise for Christmas. They were missing Nate so much and him telling them he missed them. Just a hunch! But would not be surprised. 

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11 hours ago, pickuptoy said:

Love it! 

I have a feeling that Nate's Mom, Dad and two Sisters are going to show up at Big Mike's and Colleens as a Suprise for Christmas. They were missing Nate so much and him telling them he missed them. Just a hunch! But would not be surprised. 

Well... I'm sure they would want to show up... but we'll see. Thanks, Mike. I just read this and got emotional over the lily story... I am such a sap. :P 

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So maybe there is hope for Michael as a cook lol. The dinner was so sweet and wonderful and then the puppys for two. Lily and Rose

Great minds think a like which made for a sweeet and wonderful chapter!

Thanks for this Chapter:yes::2thumbs::worship:

“We can say anything to each other, right? Nothing’s too corny or sappy. Don’t ever hold anything back, okay?”

And I never will:rofl:

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On 5/21/2022 at 9:52 PM, Albert1434 said:

So maybe there is hope for Michael as a cook lol. The dinner was so sweet and wonderful and then the puppys for two. Lily and Rose

Great minds think a like which made for a sweeet and wonderful chapter!

Thanks for this Chapter:yes::2thumbs::worship:

“We can say anything to each other, right? Nothing’s too corny or sappy. Don’t ever hold anything back, okay?”

And I never will:rofl:

Lol... I know you won't and that's good. :P 

I did put a lot of thought into those puppies' names... Rose and Lily seemed fitting. And yeah, Kendall and Michael were thinking the same thing. Leave it to them to take two puppies. It's okay because they have plenty of love to give. Cheers, my friend. :hug: 

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Sweet, sexy start and a sentimental ending. Deeply appreciating the lack of tension (except you know) in this chapter. Lily and Rose! Love it!

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20 minutes ago, Dan South said:

Sweet, sexy start and a sentimental ending. Deeply appreciating the lack of tension (except you know) in this chapter. Lily and Rose! Love it!

Thanks, Dan! Sometimes we need a chapter that allows us to catch our breath. Good tension is okay, though. :P  I was saving that Lily story for months when I was writing this. It ended up working out perfectly. Glad you were happy with this one. Cheers! :hug: 

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