Jump to content
    Aditus
  • Author
  • 791 Words
  • 1,386 Views
  • 16 Comments
Stories posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 

Aditus' prompts and circumstances - 5. The Dream/Prompt 310

A dream?
Prompt 310 – Creative
Tag – List of Words
Use the following words in a story – tent, a running river, a wolf, a lighter, and a bowl of cereal.

The Dream

Tim looked up from his computer screen when his friend and colleague Mark, hurried through the door into their shared office.

"You're late."

Mark grunted something unintelligible while he hung his overcoat in their small closet. When he finally slumped down in his chair behind the desk opposite from Tim's, Tim could see dark rings under Mark's eyes. The man looked utterly exhausted.

"Hehe, someone had an interesting night, me thinks."

Mark scoffed. "I wish."

Taking a closer look, Mark looked almost haunted. Tim stopped what he was doing. "What happened?"

"I had a dream…"

"A dream?"

"Yeah, at least I believe it was a dream."

"Want to tell me about it?" Tim pushed his chair back and swiveled around so he could reach the coffee pot on the small table behind him. He poured some coffee into Mark's mug, added sugar and milk and placed it in front of his friend. "I heard it might help with intense dreams. Talking I mean. Reality check and all."

Mark didn't answer. Instead, he stared at his screensaver that showed various pictures Mark had taken during his countless rafting trips: abysmal ravines, soaring mountain masses, waterfalls and white-water rapids of fast-running rivers. Playing with the lighter he still had lying around on his desk from when he used to smoke, he didn't speak for several minutes. Tim finally assumed Mark didn't want to talk about his dream and started working again.

"I was in the desert. There were sand dunes as far as the eye could see. It was early in the morning; the grey-blue shadows of pre-dawn were just forced away by the first tinges of orange from the rising sun. I felt as if I had been there forever, for the sand was untouched; there were no traces of humans, or animals. No trucks, no camels, just me sitting in front of my tent, alone. It was cold. The morning stillness was absolute.

I didn't have a Bedouin tent like you see all the time in the movies; it was the small, flimsy tent I used to sleep in, in my parents’ backyard when I felt adventurous. In reality, I wouldn't even fit in it anymore.

So I sat in front of my childhood tent in the middle of a desert, a bowl with cereal in my hand, spooning soggy Fruit Loops into my mouth. It was the Sponge Bob bowl I loved so much, the one my sister smashed to pieces in one of her hissy fits. It even was chipped at the edge from when I had dropped it in the sink when I was six. The thing is, I hate Fruit Loops; that was my brother's favorite, I always had Honey Smacks without milk.

Then I caught movement from the corner of my eye. When I turned my head, an Arabian wolf stood on top of one of the dunes. With its large ears twitching, nose in the wind, it scented the air. When it came closer I noticed its poor state; its fur looked coarse and thin, and there were bald patches and bruises all over its body.

I should have been afraid. A wild, sick-looking predator was only twenty feet away from me.

I stopped eating, because the cereal smelled funny. When I looked into my bowl, I almost dropped it. It was filled to the brim with chunks of raw meat. I put the bowl down into the sand, stood up, very slowly, and took a step back, and then another one, until the wall of the tent stopped me. The wolf hesitated briefly, but then it came closer, sniffed at the meat and started eating.

While it was doing this, it changed in front of my eyes. It became bigger, more muscled, its coat became glossy, and the bald patches disappeared. It ate more then there could have been in that bowl.

When it was sated, I could look into its eyes. They had the most unusual color; they were deep teal. We locked eyes then it threw its head back, howled, turned and disappeared behind the dunes, without leaving any traces in the sand.

That was when I woke up."

Tim took a swig of coffee, which had long gone cold. "Well, yes, this really is a pretty unusual dream, but nothing horrific. To be honest, from the way you looked I expected something more gruesome."

"When I woke up, I felt sand between my toes and on the sheets. I thought I was imagining it until I swung my feet over the edge of the bed and saw the sand on the floor."

"You're kidding me, right?"

Mark looked up, and Tim gasped. Mark's eyes were deep teal.

a href="http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/122/e/b/desert_sunrise_by_andymumford-d3ffawk.jpg">This is the link to the picture that inspired me.
©Copyright 2013 Aditus; All Rights Reserved.
  • Like 9
  • Wow 1
Stories posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
You are not currently following this author. Be sure to follow to keep up to date with new stories they post.

Recommended Comments

Chapter Comments

Wow, you are quick, Addy! :)

 

I like the picture! Poor Mark, what a sort-of nightmare! lol Or a reality-mare. hehe

 

Very creepy with the wolf and then Mark's eyes in the end. Sorta gave me chills.

 

Great job, Addy! :2thumbs:

Link to comment

You know I love your writing, but this is way up there. You said so much in so little words. Great story :)

Link to comment
On 03/23/2014 05:12 AM, Lisa said:
Wow, you are quick, Addy! :)

 

I like the picture! Poor Mark, what a sort-of nightmare! lol Or a reality-mare. hehe

 

Very creepy with the wolf and then Mark's eyes in the end. Sorta gave me chills.

 

Great job, Addy! :2thumbs:

Well you were quick, so I had to be quick too. :) Thanks again Lisa, and admit it you like me giving you the chills every now and then.
Link to comment
On 03/23/2014 06:17 AM, Cole Matthews said:
Wow! I got chills from that. You describe it so well and the sand... yikes!
Thank you Cole. I didn't even mean for it to be so creepy at first, but yeah thinking about it now...
Link to comment
On 03/23/2014 07:35 AM, carringtonrj said:
you write so well, with such precision and control and fluency.
Thank you RJ. This means so much to me, coming from you. :)
Link to comment
On 03/23/2014 08:40 AM, joann414 said:
You know I love your writing, but this is way up there. You said so much in so little words. Great story :)
Thanks Jo Ann and you didn't even have to give me the nudge out of the door this time. I'm glad you liked my little piece. :)
Link to comment
On 03/23/2014 09:44 AM, Slytherin said:
That was some nightmare ! Eerie story in a good way :) I like your writing, Addy ! Keep it up :hug:
Yep, soggy fruit loops, smelling raw meat, and sand in bed equals nightmare all right. That it turned out so creepy was kinda unintended. Thank you Sly and I try. :)
Link to comment
On 03/23/2014 04:46 PM, Suvitar said:
Lovely picture. Scary nightmare or perhaps it was more than a dream :/
It certainly was. I have some stories in my mind and two to finish, but so little time. Still, I might come back to this one. Thank you for your comment Suvitar. :)
Link to comment

Loved it! I almost felt like a fly on the wall experiencing the interaction between the friends. When Tim gasped, I pulled back from the screen. :o That doesn't happen often.

Link to comment
On 03/24/2014 06:36 AM, Ron said:
Loved it! I almost felt like a fly on the wall experiencing the interaction between the friends. When Tim gasped, I pulled back from the screen. :o That doesn't happen often.
I'd liked to see that. lol I couldn't sleep and that came out of it. Thank you Ron, I'm glad you loved it.
Link to comment
On 10/03/2014 01:59 AM, dughlas said:
Weirdly exciting if slightly creepy ... well crafted.
That's exactly what I wanted to do. Cool! :)
Link to comment
View Guidelines

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now
  • Newsletter

    Sign Up and get an occasional Newsletter.  Fill out your profile with favorite genres and say yes to genre news to get the monthly update for your favorite genres.

    Sign Up
×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

Our Privacy Policy can be found here: Privacy Policy. We have placed cookies on your device to help make this website better. You can adjust your cookie settings, otherwise we'll assume you're okay to continue..