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Sometimes, you have to continue due to the Art of writing… even if you loose readers.

Thoughts?

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I wrote a darker story that I knew wouldn’t get reads due to its content but I still wrote it anyway.

Sometimes a story has to be told even if it won’t get read.

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2 minutes ago, Jeff Burton said:

I wrote a darker story that I knew wouldn’t get reads due to its content but I still wrote it anyway.

Sometimes a story has to be told even if it won’t get read.

And even if they were with you at the beginning of the journey, they may not always finish it with you. It happens. Write the story you intend to write, because that's what you set out to do. 

I have a project that I have allowed to sit because I know it will not be read. I want to tell the story though, because it is a dynamic that interests me. It will not interest a lot of people. 

We want our stories read, reviewed, and commented on. What we shouldn't be doing though is changing our overall goals and intentions with the story to try and guarantee them. Since it is Thanksgiving here in America it would be like taking orders for the Dinner from everyone, and then expecting them to show up to eat. The only audience you are guaranteed to have is you. So, if you're in this writing thing for fun, make sure you're writing for yourself too. 

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13 minutes ago, Krista said:

So, if you're in this writing thing for fun, make sure you're writing for yourself too. 

^ This right here.

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2 hours ago, Jeff Burton said:

I wrote a darker story that I knew wouldn’t get reads due to its content but I still wrote it anyway.

Sometimes a story has to be told even if it won’t get read.

Which story? I’ll read it

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3 hours ago, MrM said:

Sometimes, you have to continue due to the Art of writing… even if you loose readers.

Thoughts?

Agreed. Speaking from a non-author’s point of view, sometimes the stories take turns that no longer appeal OR they just don’t go anywhere and it simply loses interest to me 

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I do agree, not all stories will get a lot of readers, some are just passion projects.

Of Pride and Power, was just my passion project to setup a world that would eventually allow an ABO setting to occur. 

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20 hours ago, W_L said:

I do agree, not all stories will get a lot of readers, some are just passion projects.

Of Pride and Power, was just my passion project to setup a world that would eventually allow an ABO setting to occur. 

Which  ABO  acronym are you meaning?  

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On 11/27/2025 at 10:19 PM, Krista said:

We want our stories read, reviewed, and commented on. What we shouldn't be doing though is changing our overall goals and intentions with the story to try and guarantee them.

I don't come here often, but was prompted to check out the first chapter of a story published here and, as far as I know, nowhere else. A story that never got published in its entirety. Which brings me to the essence of the comment I've quoted, you (the author) shouldn't change your story to guarantee readership, comments and reviews, but not changing it can also mean not getting it published.

I had this conversation with E K Stokes, the story was Thirteen, the first chapter got posted here, the rest was impossible to post. A second chapter got posted, but not the full story. Why? He told me he could not find anywhere to publish it.

I haven't read the first chapter, I was reading another of his stories, not on this site, but I came here and read the comments and reviews and I can see the polemic it caused. My point is that some stories just don't get published because they provoke negative reactions by some readers to the extent that they get banned.

I feel very strongly that readers have the right to choose the books they read, but not the right to ban books they don't agree with. For publishers it's a different problem, a polemic creates waves and they would rather not drown so they sit out the storm and don't allow the ship to dock.

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On 12/14/2025 at 3:24 PM, ReaderPaul said:

Which  ABO  acronym are you meaning?  

Alpha, Beta, Omega, also known as the Omegaverse, of course :D 

Essentially, the literary concept uses third-gender characters. There's shifter stories that use these terms, too, but they may or may not have the same ideas.

Primarily female written with male-male relationships with female aspects, it was interesting to attempt it as a gay man.

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2 hours ago, W_L said:

     Alpha, Beta, Omega, also known as the Omegaverse, of course :D 
     Essentially, the literary concept uses third-gender characters. There's shifter stories that use these terms, too, but they may or may not have the same ideas.
     Primarily female written with male-male relationships with female aspects, it was interesting to attempt it as a gay man.

Thank you for explaining.  Makes sense now, @W_L.

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14 hours ago, Krista said:

Stop worrying about an audience for a story

I can't say I agree with not considering your readers. Isn't writing a story that nobody reads a bit of a waste of time, don't all the authors here and elsewhere want a large readership, to be popular? Don't we have to talk numbers? The vast majority of stories here get between what, two or three hundred readers, looking at your own stories I count around 1200 readers, for myself, half that number.

I suppose there maybe authors who just want to write a story and see it published and commented on in a nice way, maybe they are happy with that, but I think most authors here stop their writing sooner or later simply because there are not the readers for their stories, for any of the stories.

This sounds very negative, but just look at the numbers, the numbers of readers (per chapter), look at how many authors from fifteen, twenty years ago are still here writing. How many writers come and stay? How many authors publish on as many sites as they can find, in the hope of reaching more readers?

If you don't worry about the audience with these tiny numbers of readers, you might get nobody reading. I do think you need to know who you are writing for and what they want to read, it's why some genres are more popular than others, why happy endings and struggling but final true love romances sell.

Perhaps we should discuss what's popular and what readers want to read, unless you really only care about getting a few comments. And even then you might have to be content with one liners, "great start, like the characters, can't wait to find out what happens."

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I have to agree with @Krista, @Jeff Burton, @LJCC, and @mcarss said.  Something they did not as directly address:  If you are writing for a traditional publisher (by that, I mean getting paid for it) -- That is different than a site where you are NOT getting paid.  If you have signed a contract to deliver 170 to 172 pages of content with a general plot of (fill in the blanks) by Month/Year for X amount of dollars or Euros or whatever, then you are constrained to do it the way of the publisher or the contracting, paying, party.  Sometimes, you might get lucky like Frank Herbert, who, after many attempts to sell Dune to traditional publishers, sent the manuscript to Chilton, best known for publishing automotive repair manuals, and they made the great decision of publishing it.  Or Christopher Paolini and his series which started with Eragon, published by his family's small printing company, and discovered by a traditional publishing editor who bought a copy and said something like -- "This has a lot of potential."

But if you are writing because you have an idea you wish to express, that is different.  You may be driven to write, or you may be writing for an audience.  If you and the audience desire similar things, it can be somewhat easy to write for them.  But other stories sometimes must have the right audience discover them.  That is why there are many websites with varying guidelines.  Persons either write within those guidelines or potentially leave or get dropped.  Jeff Burton, Krista, LJCC, and Mike Carss have clearly and with eloquence expressed their concepts and ideas on writing.  Very well done, people.  Sometimes the size of an audience is not as immediately important as writing and publishing a story, tale, book, saga, or tome. 

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From what's been said I think we could draw the conclusion the site exists with two quite distinct parts. Let's leave aside paid for writing because mostly all the writing here is free.

 
The two distinct parts are the writing as therapy, self-help, the group who write for themselves, to express their feelings, emotions, within a supportive community who correspond with each other.
 
The other part consists of the writers, would be authors, who are amateurs, but wanting to learn the art, gain a readership and get reviews. 
 
Both groups are equally valid although they don't easily fit together and could, perhaps do, cause misunderstandings and confusion.
 
For myself, I fell into the second group, a would be author looking for a readership and reviews. For me discussions about audiences, numbers, and popular genres, are what count. I was not publishing my writing as a therapy, I was publishing it for literary criticism and to develop as an author. I no longer publish or write, anything I might add here is from stuff written years ago and is put on the site so it has a home and is not lost.
 
Having said that, I can appreciate the writing as therapy part of the site and I think that is very good, especially with a supportive community. However, I don't think the two different parts fit together to make a whole. 
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23 hours ago, William King said:

[...] I no longer publish or write, [...]

Might I ask why?

 

 

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Both groups are equally valid although they don't easily fit together and could, perhaps do, cause misunderstandings and confusion.

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Having said that, I can appreciate the writing as therapy part of the site and I think that is very good, especially with a supportive community. However, I don't think the two different parts fit together to make a whole. 

I will now sound confrontational. I am sorry it is not my intention to be, but I get the impression the only one having an issue is you. Would you mind elaborating?

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Some genres may be things you like and enjoy, but you personally cannot write as an author.

For me, I learned last summer, I can't do anti-villain driven crime genre justice. Sure I can write generic stuff about drug dealers, corrupt cops, and so on, and characters turning dark, but it's not the same kind of story caliber I am aiming for.

To be fair, a lot of authors can't write Breaking Bad-type stories. Many people love the series, but it's uncommon to write anti-villains that readers will genuinely love. Creating an LGBTq+ character like Walter White would be a great monument to whoever can achieve it first.

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On 12/19/2025 at 6:15 AM, William King said:

From what's been said I think we could draw the conclusion the site exists with two quite distinct parts. Let's leave aside paid for writing because mostly all the writing here is free.

 
The two distinct parts are the writing as therapy, self-help, the group who write for themselves, to express their feelings, emotions, within a supportive community who correspond with each other.
 
The other part consists of the writers, would be authors, who are amateurs, but wanting to learn the art, gain a readership and get reviews. 
 
Both groups are equally valid although they don't easily fit together and could, perhaps do, cause misunderstandings and confusion.
 
For myself, I fell into the second group, a would be author looking for a readership and reviews. For me discussions about audiences, numbers, and popular genres, are what count. I was not publishing my writing as a therapy, I was publishing it for literary criticism and to develop as an author. I no longer publish or write, anything I might add here is from stuff written years ago and is put on the site so it has a home and is not lost.
 
Having said that, I can appreciate the writing as therapy part of the site and I think that is very good, especially with a supportive community. However, I don't think the two different parts fit together to make a whole. 

I don't think there's much distinction in anyone who writes here. Reasons are numerous, so I wouldn't wish to put a ton of weight, or a blanket over reasons why people write. I write when I'm bored, when I want to, I write when a character draws my attention. I write when I've fallen into a mental/emotional funk and I want a distraction. Hell I write in the winter, hoping for spring/summer, because I am a spring and summer person.

So no, I wouldn't say there are two distinct kinds of writers here. Therapy seekers, or Learners. I think most people are a mixture of many reasons. I wish to learn more as I discuss writing, but I also want to connect with the people and stories that I write. I may write themes that I might have lived in, like sadness or loss, or whatever. 

But yeah, most people here are probably here for various individual reasons. The goals can be similar, they likely are. 

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