kojaky Posted February 22, 2007 Posted February 22, 2007 Hi ! I've just started to read For the Love and I am really enjoying this story. Thanks for writing
C James Posted February 23, 2007 Author Posted February 23, 2007 Okay, first post on this forum. Great story CJ, you really are a talented writer, I love your story. It isn't just another lame porn story like million others on the internet. It really has a storyline and that's great. The latest chapter was very well written and has lot of emotions in it, but I like to know what happens to Eric ... I'm eager to see the next chapter, keep up the good work. Max Thank you Max!! I tried to write something that wasn't typical for gay fiction. I wanted to portray two lead characters, normal guys in their late teens, who happened to be gay. As for Eric, the next chapter is entitled "Homecoming", and he is definitely in it. Thanks!!! No enough in my opinion *opens the dungeon door* Hey Eric! Come stay at my house. Emoe! You don't like poor, misunderstood Eric? I call this a transitional chapter before the rubber hits the road in the next one. Would it be correct to assume that we'll find out soon exactly with whom the turd of a little brother is working as a currier? I think I can safely say that the rubber hits the road in ever-increasing amounts from here on in. As for the currier issue, all I can say is that situation will become fully known (whatever it might actually be) very soon. BTW, on your sig, CJ...do you really mean "Fairy Tail" as in you-know-what or tale? Must be a goat thing? Oops!! It's fixed now, thanks!! Goats have trouble with spelling. Just ask Emoe. Super, Super, Super Chapter, CJ!!! It was just so much fun reading it! It was even better that my favourite chapter so far. Playtime is very erotic. I hereby bestow the Goat Good Seal of Approval on you and "For the Love". Congratulations! You earned it! I held off on this award because my Goat Meritorious Awards Committee (GMAC) hold goats to a higher standard than non-goat authors. Though, I should mention, we have a soft spot for porcupines. Wow, Thank you Connor!!! I am flattered and honored to receive the Goat Good Seal of approval! Porcupines? I hope Echidnas are included? BTW, everyone, I'm still a goat, so there! You figure it out Conner Yes, Connor has a new Avatar. Anyone care to speculat e as to what is going on here? Most people have soft spots for porcupines Rhino's tend to be the exception to that rule. Yep, those spines are SHARP! Hi !I've just started to read For the Love and I am really enjoying this story. Thanks for writing Hi Kojaky! Thank you!!! Thank you for reading!!
EMoe57 Posted February 23, 2007 Posted February 23, 2007 The latest chapter was very well written and has lot of emotions in it, but I like to know what happens to Eric ... No enough in my opinion *opens the dungeon door* Hey Eric! Come stay at my house. Emoe! You don't like poor, misunderstood Eric? He is the only antagonist in this story we know much about so far, and as an antagonist, we are not suppose to like him
Site Administrator Graeme Posted February 23, 2007 Site Administrator Posted February 23, 2007 He is the only antagonist in this story we know much about so far, and as an antagonist, we are not suppose to like him
C James Posted February 23, 2007 Author Posted February 23, 2007 Eric? He is the only antagonist in this story we know much about so far, and as an antagonist, we are not suppose to like him
Conner Posted February 23, 2007 Posted February 23, 2007 Antagonists???? This story doesn't need 'em. This story is about how many times will Steve and Chris' lovemaking be interrupted. The sub-plot is how many times will Steve trick Chris into wearing that itsey bitsey swimsuit!!!
C James Posted February 24, 2007 Author Posted February 24, 2007 Antagonists???? This story doesn't need 'em. This story is about how many times will Steve and Chris' lovemaking be interrupted. The sub-plot is how many times will Steve trick Chris into wearing that itsey bitsey swimsuit!!! Infrequent nookie? Well, their town is called Lonesome Valley for a reason.
shadowgod Posted February 24, 2007 Posted February 24, 2007 Infrequent nookie? Well, their town is called Lonesome Valley for a reason. Subliminal MESSAGE!!!!!!!!!!! I told you guys....
C James Posted February 25, 2007 Author Posted February 25, 2007 (edited) Subliminal MESSAGE!!!!!!!!!!! I told you guys.... Awww, would I do such a thing as that? Preposterous! The next thing you know, you will be trying to claim that the Piedmont Sheriff's last name (Johnson) has a hidden meaning, such as it being a slang term that might relate in some way to his character. But surely I wouldn't do such a thing as that. OK, the Sheriff wasn;t intentional, but, there are a few names in FTL that are. Piedmont, Arizona, anyone? The name "Piedmont" was used in the movie and book "The andromeda strain" as the small town in Arizona wiped out by the disease from the space probe. However, there is ANOTHER Piedmont, Arizona, a real one, so I felt OK to use the name without fear of plagiarism. (The real Piedmont is a ghost town). Edited February 25, 2007 by C James
captainrick Posted February 25, 2007 Posted February 25, 2007 When Veronica finds out what happened in her pool . . . hmm, bet they spend the better part of the next day cleaning out the pool. At last, some uninterrupted sex, even if it was ummm wet. About the antagonists thing, I think we've seen plenty. Eric definitely has been the most visible, but he wasn't the SOB doing the shooting! I think the damn sheriff is far more dangerous than Eric. Oh, and the good Rev. Emoe. What an asshole! Plenty of antagonism here. Poor boys are badly outnumbered already. Rick
C James Posted February 26, 2007 Author Posted February 26, 2007 When Veronica finds out what happened in her pool . . . hmm, bet they spend the better part of the next day cleaning out the pool. At last, some uninterrupted sex, even if it was ummm wet. Veronica might just do that, too. About the antagonists thing, I think we've seen plenty. Eric definitely has been the most visible, but he wasn't the SOB doing the shooting! I think the damn sheriff is far more dangerous than Eric. Oh, and the good Rev. Emoe. What an asshole! Be careful what you say about the Reverend Emoe... He's been known to read this thread, whenever he's not busy trying to take all the fun out of Fundamentalism.
EMoe57 Posted February 26, 2007 Posted February 26, 2007 Be careful what you say about the Reverend Emoe... He's been known to read this thread, whenever he's not busy trying to take all the fun out of Fundamentalism. Now don't be poking me with a stick, CJ. I've got a head cold and feel miserable, so I might just lash out and type something untoward...
Jack Frost Posted February 26, 2007 Posted February 26, 2007 Now don't be poking me with a stick, CJ. I've got a head cold and feel miserable, so I might just lash out and type something untoward... Getting emo, eh?
Bondwriter Posted February 26, 2007 Posted February 26, 2007 Be careful what you say about the Reverend Emoe... He's been known to read this thread, whenever he's not busy trying to take all the fun out of Fundamentalism. I'd bet more on him putting the fundament back into fundamentalism.
C James Posted February 27, 2007 Author Posted February 27, 2007 Now don't be poking me with a stick, CJ. I've got a head cold and feel miserable, so I might just lash out and type something untoward... Get well soon, Emoe!! I HATE colds, so I know just how you must be feeling. I hope you feel better soon! BTW, He's back..... Chapter 15, Homecoming, is up.
Bondwriter Posted February 27, 2007 Posted February 27, 2007 The main topic of conversation, as you would expect when four gay guys got together, was the finer points of rebuilding a carburetor. This cracked me up. I don't remember talking mechanics for the longest time, and I'm really puzzled as to the mores of them Arizonians now. Once again, Steve and Chris work hard under the blazing sun. And shirtless, they should watch out for skin cancer. Why doesn't his dad have Eric perform the grueling task instead of idly staying unside his room? This whole Eric thing is getting even more mysterious. If he's really trying to make amends and was himself forced to do the nasty stuff he did, then he should really come out clean. But he doesn't. I mean, about the Sheriff situation, since he comes out, but it rings a bit as some way to trick the guys into feeling sorry for him. Nice atmospheric chapter, with more to come later on, and still more time with the characters. What does the Easter Bunny have in store for next episode? We'll wait.
old bob Posted February 27, 2007 Posted February 27, 2007 .......Nice atmospheric chapter, with more to come later on, and still more time with the characters. What does the Easter Egg have in store for next episode? Well, I agree with Bondwriter, this is all very nice, the gardening, the breakfast in bed, the shirtless poses....But where is our thriller ? I want shots (I mean bullets ), actions, fights, as C James brought it in the first chapters ! . C James, you dont need to prove us that you know how to decribe characters and to bring them to life for us, we know. Please, bring them out of their laziness and put them in action, kill the sheriff for instance old teasing bob
Conner Posted February 27, 2007 Posted February 27, 2007 Yeah, carburetors! They're cool. That's the thingy that the gas goes through so that the engine only gets the good carbs, right? :wacko: Nice chapter, goat-buddy! I am really enjoying watching Chris come into his own. With Chris feeling like he's part of the family, there'll be no stopping him now. I'm usually quite weary when someone trys to "fix" someone else, it often doesn't work out well. You've got me very confused around around Eric. Yes, I know you planned it that way, too! I'm referring to all those comments you've been making in this thread about why is everyone picking on Eric. Now Eric has this sob story going on. It must be one of those techniques you learnrd in author school. Nasty, I tell you. Conner P.S Doesn't anybody recognize my avatar? Do you want clues?
shadowgod Posted February 27, 2007 Posted February 27, 2007 Yeah, carburetors! They're cool. That's the thingy that the gas goes through so that the engine only gets the good carbs, right? :wacko: Nice chapter, goat-buddy! I am really enjoying watching Chris come into his own. With Chris feeling like he's part of the family, there'll be no stopping him now. I'm usually quite weary when someone trys to "fix" someone else, it often doesn't work out well. You've got me very confused around around Eric. Yes, I know you planned it that way, too! I'm referring to all those comments you've been making in this thread about why is everyone picking on Eric. Now Eric has this sob story going on. It must be one of those techniques you learnrd in author school. Nasty, I tell you. Conner P.S Doesn't anybody recognize my avatar? Do you want clues? Ive got a clue.... Lion
C James Posted February 27, 2007 Author Posted February 27, 2007 (edited) This cracked me up. I don't remember talking mechanics for the longest time, and I'm really puzzled as to the mores of them Arizonians now. What? But... What else would four gay men have to talk about other than the finer points of auto mechanics? Once again, Steve and Chris work hard under the blazing sun. And shirtless, they should watch out for skin cancer. Why doesn't his dad have Eric perform the grueling task instead of idly staying unside his room? This whole Eric thing is getting even more mysterious. If he's really trying to make amends and was himself forced to do the nasty stuff he did, then he should really come out clean. But he doesn't. I mean, about the Sheriff situation, since he comes out, but it rings a bit as some way to trick the guys into feeling sorry for him. Nice atmospheric chapter, with more to come later on, and still more time with the characters. What does the Easter Bunny have in store for next episode? I think you will find that the next episode, which will be posted on time, is very different from this one. And the Easter Bunny might have an Easter egg. BTW, this wasn't just a filler chapter, though I know it may look that way now. There is a lot in it that won't be obvious until Ch 16 and 17, and is critical to them. And don't worry, I won't keep everyone in suspense for long about Eric; the truth will come out, one way or another, in the next couple of chapters. Is Eric on the level or not? Or something in between? Well, I agree with Bondwriter, this is all very nice, the gardening, the breakfast in bed, the shirtless poses....But where is our thriller ? I want shots (I mean bullets ), actions, fights, as C James brought it in the first chapters ! .C James, you dont need to prove us that you know how to decribe characters and to bring them to life for us, we know. Please, bring them out of their laziness and put them in action, kill the sheriff for instance old teasing bob Hi Bob! I can guarantee you won't be asking that after the next chapter. Actually, over the next two chapters, you will see why much of Ch 15 was required. Yeah, carburetors! They're cool. That's the thingy that the gas goes through so that the engine only gets the good carbs, right? :wacko: Hmmmm, maybe I should have a chapter all about the carburetor rebuilding? Nice chapter, goat-buddy! I am really enjoying watching Chris come into his own. With Chris feeling like he's part of the family, there'll be no stopping him now. I'm usually quite weary when someone trys to "fix" someone else, it often doesn't work out well. You've got me very confused around around Eric. Yes, I know you planned it that way, too! I'm referring to all those comments you've been making in this thread about why is everyone picking on Eric. Now Eric has this sob story going on. It must be one of those techniques you learned in author school. Nasty, I tell you. Would I do such a thing? P.P.S. Uh oh, this is post 666 Well, that fits very well, because the number of this thread is 6666. BTW, Any one have any thoughts about Eric's coming out? Edited February 27, 2007 by C James
Conner Posted February 27, 2007 Posted February 27, 2007 Ive got a clue.... Lion Yes, yes, Steve, it appears you do. Before you spill the beans, though, what's the connection between my avatar and the movie "Children of Dune"? Oh right! This is CJ's thread. Hmmmm....my thoughts on Eric coming out...well, his explanation is believeable to a certain extent. The blackmail is a stretch if he's being honest, though. At this point, I don't believe him. If Eric didn't hide the data stick, then it was certainly made to look like he did - which would mean it's a set-up of some kind. But for what purpose? Who did bury it there? :wacko: I know! Let's have another pool party! Conner
Jack Frost Posted February 27, 2007 Posted February 27, 2007 I thought your avatar has to do with the Chronicles of Nirana.
Red_A Posted February 27, 2007 Posted February 27, 2007 ........ Conner P.S Doesn't anybody recognize my avatar? Do you want clues? James McAvoy you goat man
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